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janavi07

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Posted: 16 November 2012 at 1:11am | IP Logged

Hi Niki...Smile

i miss your update i think after one week this update come ...

Great Update Niki...Shaan as Only Shaan...khanak so shocked every time...he not stop at all again kiss...after the cheek kiss khanak was dreaming full day LOL what happen when shaan will kiss her other than cheek this time she will faint LOL..waiting for this Wink OMG!!!!!he Decalred in front of all that khanak is his wife and recepation held on next week all shocked  and the nisha poor girl...

god what happen next ???shaan next move LOL egarly waiting for that niki...

update soon...



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Posted: 16 November 2012 at 2:42am | IP Logged
wow after a long time you have updated...Big smile
Was waiting for you update niki...missed it...
 
Shaan is playing with khanak and shocking her by kissing her cheeks everytime...Embarrassed
lol khanak is hallucinating as if shaan is kissing her by touching he cheeksEmbarrassed
 
waiting for the next part...

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Posted: 16 November 2012 at 9:17am | IP Logged
lovely update niki
where were u yaar????
r u fine???

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Posted: 18 November 2012 at 9:35am | IP Logged
hi friends...how r u guys...hope u guys all r doing good...i am also fine...with powercuts...and loads of personal work...first of all thanks for liking my simple story...thanks for saying ur opinions and thanks for hitting like button...each and every opinions r lovely...i read again and again...thank u so much...sorry for not replying individually...thanks a lot for bearing late updates...






pt 10

khanak came inside her house...she stopped her scooty...

khanak : shit...he is home...

khanak took her back and went inside the house...

anjali : hey why so early...

khanak : nothing...

khanak sat in the sofa...she thought no i wont go up...

he is in room...why he is so early...damn he made me come home early...

because of him only i have taken a off from college...

tanvi : chachi...chachi...

rishi : bua...bua...

khanak :uhh...(she smiled at them...)

tanvi : come and play with us...

khanak thoought for a second...upstairs...no its better to play with them...

khanak :ummm...okay...(smiled)

kids took her to their room...

khanak : okay wat we can play...

tanvi : chachi doctor game...

khanak :uhhh...

rishi : bua...u lay in the bed...

tanvi : ha..chachi...lay in bed...i am doctor...

rishi : hey ..i am doctor...

tanvi : no i am doctor...

khanak : hey. hey...wait both r doctors...

i will lay down...u stand this side...u stand this side...

khanak layed down on the bed and kids took there toy medical kits...

khanak closed her eyes...she started to think...

why bhabhi gave pendrive to him...does she does not get a some other person...

it will be okay if he just gave the pendrive and gone..but...wat he did...

he said he is her hubby...wat does he think...he told me...

within a week divorce...but he said recpition...

shit...how all my friends asked me questions...so only i came home soon...

now a days he looks smiling at me...he always smiling at me...

is he gone mad...he is not fighting with me...yesterday he helped

with assignment...the way he spoke ...the way he typed...

in her mind she can she shaans figure...

she was slowly admiring his eyes...his lips...his hands...in her mind...

shit...shit...wat am i thinking...i am thinking of him only...

ya...after marriage i am thinking only him...his face only coming...

khanak stop stop thinking about him...from now on i am not going to 

think about him...yes not going to think about him...

shit...i forgot he kissed my cheeks...does he think i am doll r a kid...

her hands automatically touched her cheeks...she can feel his lips still...

she heard something faint...

tanvi : do u hear heart beat...

rishi : no...

tanvi : chachu u check it...

khanaks ear heard chachu...who is it...someone...tanvis chachu...

uhh...hey..its ...she opened her eyes wideopened...

she saw shaan was sitting besides her..with a smile...

shaan : we can hear it with another method...

shaan looked at khanak with a smile...

shaan bend down towards her chest and placed her ears...

khanaks mouth wide opened...and her heart beat was beating fastly...

shaan : listen...

shaan moved up and made kids ear on her chest to hear her heart beat...

shaan : do u hear it...she is nervous i think so...

(looking at her with a grin)

shaan thought baby u r nervous for this itself...there r more...wat r u going to do...

kids : ha...

khanak mind...shout at him..her heart was dumb and deaf...

meanwhile shaans cell rang he went out with cell phone...

khanak sat up in bed in shock...she thought damn wat does he did...

she can hear her heart beat very clearly...

wat is he thinking...why am i not scolding him...i should talk to him...

i should make him proceed for divorce...when does he came...

did he saw my face expression...shit...she saw her hand still in her cheeks...

shit..shit...wat is happening to me...

meanwhile kids made her to play with them...after 15 minutes r 20 minutes later...

vidhya : khanak...khanak...

khanak : wat ma...

vidhya : u r playing with kids...

khanak :s...

vidhya : shaan is getting ready...u r not helping in packing...

khanak looked at her mom confused...

vidhya : u r his wife...u should have responsibity...

madhavi : vidhya..come on..dont say anything to her...

let her be...she is small na..it will take time...

vidhya : but...

madhavi : shh..come on...he will be coming down...

they all came out of the room...khanak was all smiling...

khanak thought thank god he is going out...

shaan was also coming down with his bag...

shaan saw her with a smile...he thought baby u r looking happy...

oh ho...i am going out...so only na...ummm...yes...

vidhya : anjali...

anjali brought a tray with laddooos...

vidhya got the tray and gave to khanak...and she glared at khanak...

shaan : mom no farmalities...

madhavi : shaan...(looked at him)

vidhya : give him sweet...

khanak took the ladoo and looked at him...he was smiling at her...

she was mesmerized by his smile...shaan holded her hand and feeded himself...

khanak came back to reality...and shaan took a ladoo and feed her suddeny...

a full sweet...she did not expected that one...she glared at him...

kids asked toys to buy and come...khanak was just tanding there...

khusbhoo : u did not ask khanak shaan...gift for her...

shaan : uhhh...bhabhi...i am itself a gift to her...wat khanak...(winked at khanak)

khanaks heart beat started to beat fastly...

khusbhoo : oh hai...u should have taken khanak too...

shaan : i thought first...but studies r important na bhabhi...

khusbhoo : ha...ha...when r u returning from singapore...

shaan : after business work over...

khusbhoo : okay takecare...

shaan : okay guys...bye...and looked at khanak...

khanak was looking at floor...

vidhya : go till car and send him off...

khanak thought he has legs and he can go..why should i go...

and he is going for offical trip...for his business he is going...

shaan did not say a thing he looked at her only...

khanak started to walk towards the car...others did not follow them...

they have reached the door...

shaan : khanak...

khanak : uhh...

she was shocked...she felt a shiver ran down her spine...she did not expected this 

from shaan...her mind did not able to register wat he has done...

he has just kissed her lips..no just brushed her lips with his lips...

thats all...its just placing his lips over her lips for a fraction of second...

and he walked to the car without saying anything...she was standing there in shock...







Edited by niki_rbo - 18 November 2012 at 9:57am

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Posted: 18 November 2012 at 9:44am | IP Logged
wooow loved the update, khanak had no idea y shaan is like this lool
hopefully when shaan comes back he will tell her loool
btw where did shaan go???
xxx

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Posted: 18 November 2012 at 9:58am | IP Logged
Originally posted by aasma1

wooow loved the update, khanak had no idea y shaan is like this lool
hopefully when shaan comes back he will tell her loool
btw where did shaan go???
xxx

thanks man...i have included some lines for that..i have changed...thanks for ur comments...

jaisyjazz

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Posted: 18 November 2012 at 10:03am | IP Logged
i dont know the rest of the thing except the last 3 lines 
the kiss took my mind and heart completely 
wow shan u r taking it slowly at the same time fastly
loved it :)

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Posted: 18 November 2012 at 12:02pm | IP Logged
 awesome nikki Clap
i loved it Heart
khanak came home early to avoid so many questions from her friends LOL
 but then fight with her mind to go in her room or not  as shaan came early n was there 
 doctor doctor game was mind blowing she wanted to avoid him but he came there when she was in a deep thought of how shaan kiss her cheeks Big smile
 omgeee!!!!!!!!! shaan rest his ear on her chest to hear her fast heart beats and really they were beating fast ROFL 
 shaan is going Singapore for business trip and Vidya told khanak to feed her hubby  she did and shaan fed her too 
khanak was shocked LOL
  khanak see off till his car and didn miss a chance n brush his lips on her slightly khanak was Shocked Dancing
 will shaan come online as  Krish and chat with her i wish that happen 
update soon 
 

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