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mandygill

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Posted: 28 October 2012 at 6:28pm | IP Logged
shana, thanks for the pm..what an amazing job! loved it to the core! please update soon..can't wait for it! so apt and well written..i wish they show something like this in the show..looking forward to your writingSmile!


Edited by mandygill - 28 October 2012 at 6:28pm

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Posted: 28 October 2012 at 9:00pm | IP Logged
Firstly so sorry for late comment Mummy I reserved some days ago but totally forgot about it really sorry Mummy humhe maaf kardenahMonkey Icon
Amazing story so far both Sahil and Shivi seperated Sasuma ka sapna poorah hogaya... hopefully they will meet in the next part maybe... Mummy Sahil cant marry again very bad hum Sasuma ko chorenghe nahiyeAngry
Mummy I love your writing I have read your fanfic in DEK forum also still catching got 3 more chapters left then will comment on there also..
 
Keep up the good work cont soon Mummy Hug
 
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Posted: 28 October 2012 at 9:17pm | IP Logged
Hey Shana , this is ooosomeClap, have stopped watching the show, but I'm more than interested in this ff Embarrassed.Though not a new concept but really the way you have projected this is making me look forward to this one. Loved the first chapter. 

You have beautifully brought out the pain of a Women caught between the expectations of the social norms and her desires to have her own identity.I could feel the cramp in Shivani's heart when she thinks that she has given up all her dreams and expectations to be good wife and D-I-L  and still today she is standing as an unsuccessful wife and D-I-L;standing in a place where the world is under her feet but not having her beloved besides. 

In the coming chapters I also wanna see the other side of Sahil, who is usually very jolly in front of the world. I wish to see the vacuum, the hidden pain and craving for Shivani . I want you to unmask Sahil and show a different Sahil who is much more mature, more composed and more importantly not a boy but a Man.

Thanks for the PMTongue

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Posted: 29 October 2012 at 5:12am | IP Logged
Originally posted by mandygill

shana, thanks for the pm..what an amazing job! loved it to the core! please update soon..can't wait for it! so apt and well written..i wish they show something like this in the show..looking forward to your writingSmile!


Thanks Mandy btw where are u yaar

will try to update soon fihaal to dek wale FF update karney hain

but will do my best to update as soon as possible Smile


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Posted: 29 October 2012 at 5:16am | IP Logged
Originally posted by chitra_rao

Hey Shana , this is ooosomeClap, have stopped watching the show, but I'm more than interested in this ff Embarrassed.Though not a new concept but really the way you have projected this is making me look forward to this one. Loved the first chapter. 

You have beautifully brought out the pain of a Women caught between the expectations of the social norms and her desires to have her own identity.I could feel the cramp in Shivani's heart when she thinks that she has given up all her dreams and expectations to be good wife and D-I-L  and still today she is standing as an unsuccessful wife and D-I-L;standing in a place where the world is under her feet but not having her beloved besides. 

In the coming chapters I also wanna see the other side of Sahil, who is usually very jolly in front of the world. I wish to see the vacuum, the hidden pain and craving for Shivani . I want you to unmask Sahil and show a different Sahil who is much more mature, more composed and more importantly not a boy but a Man.

Thanks for the PMTongue


So at last my purple commentator came Clap

will try my best to make man out of Sahil LOL,

yes he still loves Shivi but has moved on and so has Shivi too but  their luck has strange ways to bring them together and they will sure cross paths now after five years ,and I promise will make it damn interesting ekdum filmy Wink

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Posted: 29 October 2012 at 5:17am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Surish


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Thanks Surish for ur sparkling appreciationSmile

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Posted: 29 October 2012 at 5:21am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Havvii

Hailla Shana wht was ths? No seriouslly jst luved it nd u update next part asap cz i cnt wait so dnt tarpao me like u do on manveer ff. I always luv ur work cz u take me some other world.
It after sahil shivi's saperation story bt i luved it. Both r successful nw nd waiting when they will come face to face nd Mataji Rajlaxmi wht say abt ths lady waiting for her reaction. Luved it. Suddenly i m falling for sahil shivi yaar...


Thanks Havi ...will update asap as have to update manveer ff right now...

Sahil Shivi story here will be extremely romantic with full on misunderstanding ka tadka ...or say it will be pride and prejudice in shana way Wink with different darcy and and very different lizzy

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Posted: 29 October 2012 at 6:36am | IP Logged


shana ...Thank you!!!    I love it!!!!   Impatient for more!!!!


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