Hey Shana , this is ooosome, have stopped watching the show, but I'm more than interested in this ff .Though not a new concept but really the way you have projected this is making me look forward to this one. Loved the first chapter.
You have beautifully brought out the pain of a Women caught between the expectations of the social norms and her desires to have her own identity.I could feel the cramp in Shivani's heart when she thinks that she has given up all her dreams and expectations to be good wife and D-I-L and still today she is standing as an unsuccessful wife and D-I-L;standing in a place where the world is under her feet but not having her beloved besides.
In the coming chapters I also wanna see the other side of Sahil, who is usually very jolly in front of the world. I wish to see the vacuum, the hidden pain and craving for Shivani . I want you to unmask Sahil and show a different Sahil who is much more mature, more composed and more importantly not a boy but a Man.
Thanks for the PM