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Posted: 27 October 2012 at 7:21am | IP Logged

Well well I came here because i hadnot check my msg and scraps for many days now...and what i saw was a msg saying you have written a SwaRon OS...

Now as you know I am dead tired reading for CA Finals now and i had no idea's to read any more Stories on IF but i wanted to see that how a CA can emote a Love Story so came here to read and how glad i am that i cannot even say...
 
Anyways a perfectly described long distance relationship...they way you have showed their convo's was just mind blowing... I mean you write like a perfect writer...i guess writing seems like your hobby the way you have presented this i can only make out that...
 
It was just beautiful the way sharon was surprised to know swayam was asking her to go for tour and was ready to wait and confidant that this phase will also work out in their relationship and usage of waiting for 5 years was just supreme...
 
And I just loved the way final confrontation came it was just beautiful...it was simple yet it can glue up certain eyes in spring seconds...because to read sharon saying something like I LOVE YOU to swayam is always captivating...so kudos to you for writing a perfect peice of work...Bow Down to your creativity...and ya of course the language was just awesome it felt like I am reading a book written by an established author...
 
Well well Madam CA and CS take this fether into your cap that you are a marvelous writer...keep on writing more and more boss...
 
Thanks for PM
 
Pratik...

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Posted: 27 October 2012 at 8:37am | IP Logged
Splendid work and very swayamish Embarrassed BTW till the end i thought swayam would be a part of the troupWink kya kare cant see swaron apart even for a single moment.Broken HeartLOL a typical swaron fan ke talks na, sorry. You have given us the most beautiful romantic and swaronish OS.Thumbs Up The way swayam can gauge sharons mood is very well described, he did really put his foot downCoolTruly how I love SwaRonHeart Preitygal you are really and awesome writer yaar, you took us to the swaronland and sach kahu i didnt want to come out of it. REally a very touching and superb OS aww swayam the majnu Day Dreaming sharon the divaDay Dreaming

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Posted: 27 October 2012 at 9:02am | IP Logged
Originally posted by pratik54000

Well well I came here because i hadnot check my msg and scraps for many days now...and what i saw was a msg saying you have written a SwaRon OS...

Now as you know I am dead tired reading for CA Finals now and i had no idea's to read any more Stories on IF but i wanted to see that how a CA can emote a Love Story so came here to read and how glad i am that i cannot even say...
 
Anyways a perfectly described long distance relationship...they way you have showed their convo's was just mind blowing... I mean you write like a perfect writer...i guess writing seems like your hobby the way you have presented this i can only make out that...
 
It was just beautiful the way sharon was surprised to know swayam was asking her to go for tour and was ready to wait and confidant that this phase will also work out in their relationship and usage of waiting for 5 years was just supreme...
 
And I just loved the way final confrontation came it was just beautiful...it was simple yet it can glue up certain eyes in spring seconds...because to read sharon saying something like I LOVE YOU to swayam is always captivating...so kudos to you for writing a perfect peice of work...Bow Down to your creativity...and ya of course the language was just awesome it felt like I am reading a book written by an established author...
 
Well well Madam CA and CS take this fether into your cap that you are a marvelous writer...keep on writing more and more boss...
 
Thanks for PM
 
Pratik...
Thanks my Lil Bro!!!
U r surely flattering me!!!! But i m liking it...surely...
I know how tiring n frustrating it is to read those big fat books and then u commenting so beautifully on my work i think this is just the outcome of boredom of reading that syllabus
 
I really cant believe that people hav liked it so much n could relate it to the Actual Swayum n Sharon on the show
 
Anyways!!!!Thanks again for all those kind words n do prepare well for ur exams
ALL D BEST my bro

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Posted: 27 October 2012 at 9:06am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Suku_SwaRon

Splendid work and very swayamish Embarrassed BTW till the end i thought swayam would be a part of the troupWink kya kare cant see swaron apart even for a single moment.Broken HeartLOL a typical swaron fan ke talks na, sorry. You have given us the most beautiful romantic and swaronish OS.Thumbs Up The way swayam can gauge sharons mood is very well described, he did really put his foot downCoolTruly how I love SwaRonHeart Preitygal you are really and awesome writer yaar, you took us to the swaronland and sach kahu i didnt want to come out of it. REally a very touching and superb OS aww swayam the majnu Day Dreaming sharon the divaDay Dreaming
I just tried to pen down the emotions of couple in a long distance relationship!!! So Swayum was not going to be in the troupe but if this kept u reading till the end then i m glad that there was something in the OS to keep u hooked till the end.
 
Me taking u to the SwaRon land and u refusing to come back is a Big thing for me...Really a big one for my first attempt...Thank u so much for the kind words
 
 
I m really feeling good reading so many positive comments here :)

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Posted: 27 October 2012 at 9:16am | IP Logged
Originally posted by preitygal99

Originally posted by Suku_SwaRon

Splendid work and very swayamish Embarrassed BTW till the end i thought swayam would be a part of the troupWink kya kare cant see swaron apart even for a single moment.Broken HeartLOL a typical swaron fan ke talks na, sorry. You have given us the most beautiful romantic and swaronish OS.Thumbs Up The way swayam can gauge sharons mood is very well described, he did really put his foot downCoolTruly how I love SwaRonHeart Preitygal you are really and awesome writer yaar, you took us to the swaronland and sach kahu i didnt want to come out of it. REally a very touching and superb OS aww swayam the majnu Day Dreaming sharon the divaDay Dreaming
I just tried to pen down the emotions of couple in a long distance relationship!!! So Swayum was not going to be in the troupe but if this kept u reading till the end then i m glad that there was something in the OS to keep u hooked till the end.
 
Me taking u to the SwaRon land and u refusing to come back is a Big thing for me...Really a big one for my first attempt...Thank u so much for the kind words
 
 
I m really feeling good reading so many positive comments here :)

Yaar if this is your first attempt then I am eagerly waiting for your next works, REally just out of the world...Clap

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Posted: 27 October 2012 at 9:28am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Suku_SwaRon

Originally posted by preitygal99

Originally posted by Suku_SwaRon

Splendid work and very swayamish Embarrassed BTW till the end i thought swayam would be a part of the troupWink kya kare cant see swaron apart even for a single moment.Broken HeartLOL a typical swaron fan ke talks na, sorry. You have given us the most beautiful romantic and swaronish OS.Thumbs Up The way swayam can gauge sharons mood is very well described, he did really put his foot downCoolTruly how I love SwaRonHeart Preitygal you are really and awesome writer yaar, you took us to the swaronland and sach kahu i didnt want to come out of it. REally a very touching and superb OS aww swayam the majnu Day Dreaming sharon the divaDay Dreaming
I just tried to pen down the emotions of couple in a long distance relationship!!! So Swayum was not going to be in the troupe but if this kept u reading till the end then i m glad that there was something in the OS to keep u hooked till the end.
 
Me taking u to the SwaRon land and u refusing to come back is a Big thing for me...Really a big one for my first attempt...Thank u so much for the kind words
 
 
I m really feeling good reading so many positive comments here :)

Yaar if this is your first attempt then I am eagerly waiting for your next works, REally just out of the world...Clap
 
I can just say THANKS again but i really dont know i will write again

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Posted: 27 October 2012 at 9:33am | IP Logged
Why wont you write again????Shocked

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Posted: 27 October 2012 at 9:37am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Suku_SwaRon

Why wont you write again????Shocked
 
Bcoz currently i hav nothing in my mind n i thought i suck at it only until i saw responses to my post Today

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