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Hope and Insecurities - SwaRon OS (Page 2)

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Posted: 27 October 2012 at 6:38am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Joshua_TANHA

Aweosome OS.. They were so Swayam and Sharon ...  Swayam's dialogue and sharons feeling  are typically how they behave..

Loved it :)
Joshua...If u felt so then my motto for writing this one was achieved...bcoz i really miss this REAL Swayum in the show these days n sadly i cant even say that for Sharon...U r one real SwaRon fan here on the forum...I have read ur posts n u commenting here makes me happy...
 
Thank u so much

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Posted: 27 October 2012 at 6:42am | IP Logged
I like the concept and story.. also the fact that they remained true to their characters.. A good first attempt i would say..!:) wats ur name by the way? i have interacted with u before but i can't recall ur name.. 

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Posted: 27 October 2012 at 6:45am | IP Logged
Originally posted by preitygal99

Originally posted by NocturnalBeing

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Wow! It was simply really awesome and romantic!

The Swayam was so typical, understanding and giving! Embarrassed And the Sharon, insecured and unsure! Wink

I loved the confession a lot, and the dialogue "I expected a Love You Too!LOL

The last part was very sweet! Big smile

I am so glad you posted this here on the forum, doesn't look like your first piece. Shocked I caught hold of it on the Dil Dosti Dance Discussion Forum, and I am really glad I decided to drop in and read it! Approve


Wonderful piece Clap Hat's off dear! Cool

Keep Writing more and more, and do PM me whenever you write more, adding you in my buddy list just now! LOL

-Nivi :D
Hey Nivi!!!
Thank u so much for that appreciating comments
I was infact i am Too nervous
Anyways...Accepted you buddy request
 
I dont know whether i will write up anything next or not...This was just the passing thought and today being no work day thought to pen it down
U know na...Empty mind devil's Workshop LOL
 
Thanks a lot again

No Problems dear, it was simply amazing! Big smile Thanks for accepting my request.. Embarrassed

Do try to write more! Wink

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Posted: 27 October 2012 at 6:53am | IP Logged
Originally posted by lyfisbeautiful

I like the concept and story.. also the fact that they remained true to their characters.. A good first attempt i would say..!:) wats ur name by the way? i have interacted with u before but i can't recall ur name.. 
Thanks for appreciating
 
This is Prachi Here
I remember we had conversation regarding u updating ur OS "The Gift" but sorry i also not know ur name..May i know it?

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Posted: 27 October 2012 at 6:57am | IP Logged
Hi prachi.. m shalini.. i think i'l complete that OS.. i owe it to ppl like u who genuinely liked it.. but m lil busy this weekend so mayb next week..
Are u gonna continue with this one or is it complete?

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Posted: 27 October 2012 at 7:01am | IP Logged
Awesome os !!
simple and beautiful .
felt really nice after reading the whole os.
do write more on SwaRon...

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Posted: 27 October 2012 at 7:07am | IP Logged
Originally posted by lyfisbeautiful

Hi prachi.. m shalini.. i think i'l complete that OS.. i owe it to ppl like u who genuinely liked it.. but m lil busy this weekend so mayb next week..
Are u gonna continue with this one or is it complete?
This was meant to be purely an OS...So wuld not be continuing this one n ya surely wait for u to update ur OS..DO not forget to PM Me

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Posted: 27 October 2012 at 7:08am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Tanuka_TanHa

Awesome os !!
simple and beautiful .
felt really nice after reading the whole os.
do write more on SwaRon...
Thank U so much...I did not expect so many ppl to comment n atually encourage me to write more...Thanks really

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