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pls. update..

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hey guys sorry sorry sorry sooo sorry 4 being late.actually studies u know and thnks 4 the positive response and i feel like killing the cvs for not giving us a proper taarey track.btw lets strt.

part 5:

rey was at his house thinking abt taani as usual."soch to liya he ki use propose karunga per kaise????aise hi to nehi bol sakta na usko she has done so much 4 me"then rey got an idea.he called taani.

tayaam's house:

taani was lost in thoughts of rey."sab kuch bata to diya maine pata nehi rey kya soch rahe honge o gussa to nehi hey???main bhi na o kyun gussa honge.main unki lagti kaun hoon???"then she thinks"kach main unki kuch laghti jaise mere liye o to mere sabh kuch lagte hain per o to sirf kria se pyaar karte hain"and tears filled her eyes thinking of tht rejection day.suddenly her phn rang and her thoughts were broken.she picked up the phn without looking.

taani:hello

rey:taani mujhe tumse kuch bat karni hain abhi?

taani(shocked):boliye

rey:aise nehi.tum mere ghar pe aa jao

taani:per

rey(in a stern voice):bas aa jao

taani: ha per main bhai ko kya batau

rey:kuch bhi or akele ana

taani:ok

soo tanni got ready and went downstains.

taani:bhai main jara bahar ja rahi hoon

swayam:bahar kaha?

taani:oo rey ke ghar.o o actually ojab mere gs the tab unone kuch presentations banaye the.to ab mujhe unko kal vp sir ko dikhana hain.but usse pehle unke ghar jake mujhe acche se samajhna hoga presentations ko.

swayam:to chalo main vi tumare sath chalta hoon main vi usse mil lunga.aise bhi aj college main o kisiko na batake hi chala gaya

taani:nehi nehi nehi nehi matlab ki iswaqt sharon bahabi ki call aati hain to app waha jaenga to app unse nehi bat kar paenge.ap rey se kal mil lena.

swayam:ha iye bhi thik hain.thik hain tum jaon.

at rey's house

rey was just moving to and fro

rey:itna time kyun lag raha hain use

suddenly the door bell rang.

rey:taani...

rey opened the door

rey"to finally aap aa gaye ander aiye"

taani:ha per apne mujhe kyun bulaya

and she went inside.she saw mesmerised.the whole house was decorated with beautiful roses.

taani:ea sab kyun...

rey puttinh his finger on her lips:hsss

and the taarey eye lock and bg tune...

plzzz say how is it guys.will update it today only promise pakka wala krishna ji ki kasam.

next part:proposal and lots of romance

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aww..!!! loved it..!!! but y no pm..??!!

... thats ok.. but UPDATE SOON...!!!!!!!!!!

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it's good,
pls,. update soon dear.

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plz plz plz update...
it was great...

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ooo lots of romance cant wait for proposal

plzzz pdate soon & do PM me

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updat sooon plz

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hey guys see i kept my promise.so let me update the next part.and looove u guys.and one thing plzzz add me to ur buddy list if u wnt pms.

part 6:

the taarey eyelock was still going on suddenly taani phn rang.taani came out of her trance and picked up the phn

taani:haan bhai main aa gayi

rey murmered:hamesha galat timing

taani:aapne kuch bola

rey(with a awkward smile):nehi main bhala kuch bol sakta hoon kya?tum apne bhaise bat kar rahe ho aftrall.

taani:haan per ea decorations kyun?????

rey(bringing his mouch near her ears-whispering):kyun ki aaj kuch special hain.bohot special bohot zada.

taani:kya???(she could feel his breath she was loving every bit of it)

rey:pata hain taani mujhe apna pyaar mil gaya hain?????

tears came to taani's eyes bt she somehow managed.

taani(forcing a smile):oh to kria is back.congrats.

rey:u hu nehi

taani:tyo oi or hain

rey:haan.

taani:ooh

taani was shattered

rey:phuchoge nehi kaun hain?

taani:main jaan ke kyan karu????

rey:kyun ki taani kyun ki...

and rey hold her tightly by her shoulder and pulled her closer

taani:kyun ki kya rey

rey:kyun ki o ledhki tum ho taani

i love u taani main tumse bohot pyaar karta hun or tumare bina nehi rehe sakta

taani was shocked she stood the shocked with tears falling from her eyes she could believe this.what her prince charming had jst now said.she cldnt believe tht all this decorations were for her.she felt like the luckiest grl of the wrld.she ws her prince charming's princess

rey suddenly put his finger beneath hr eyes and a tear dropped on his finger.he cupped her face and nodded hid face.

rey:mat ro taani.

taani suddenly became out of control and hugged him tightly nd cried vigorously...

hope u like it.plzzz comment guys.nxt prt the romane and chipku scenes

Edited by gunjanmyjaan - 18 November 2012 at 10:20am

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