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Zuna4Taarey

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Posted: 28 October 2012 at 4:31am | IP Logged
WOWWW REY GOT TO KNOW THANI'S SACRIFICE ONLY N ONLY FOR HIM ...I ALWAYS WANT THIS TO HAPPEN IN THE SHOW...BUT ATLEAST HERE YOU MADEIT COME TRUE THANKS POULOMI   N UPDATE SOON...N PM ME PZZZ

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Posted: 28 October 2012 at 4:35am | IP Logged
loved the update and especially the fire exit scene...good job update soon and thanks for the pm

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Posted: 28 October 2012 at 8:03am | IP Logged
wow simply awesome..

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Posted: 30 October 2012 at 1:18am | IP Logged
awesome dearHug...update soon !!

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Posted: 01 November 2012 at 1:46am | IP Logged
hey guys sorry 4 being sooo late.studies u know.but lets start the 4th part wthout much bakbak.
 
part 4:
rey at the fire escape sitting on the stairs.
rey to himself:taani nay meri bajay se itna sabkuch saha or maine kya kiya????hamesha uski feelings ko hurt kiya????kitna galat samjha tha maine use.
rey was basically trying to fight with his mixed feelings of happiness and anger(more on himself than shivam).then he hit his fist hard on the wall.his eyes were teary-he was crying.he remembered all the moments he had spent with taani.
rey:main taani ke bare main itna kyun sochta hun.pata nehi kyun but she has really become my weakpoint
suddenly he say taani infront of him.
he thought:taani yeah pe kaise aa gayi???
then he spoke sofly:taani i am sorry mere liye tumne itna...
and he touched her cheeks.but she was not there.he was imagining!!!!
rey:oh gosh!!!!main to pagal ho jaunga.yeah kya ho raha hai mere sath?????
suddenly he seemed to be surrounded by taanis all calling out his name.
rey:yeah kya ho gaya hain mujhe???pehli baar kisike liye aisa feel kar raha hun.kahi mujhe taani se pyaar to nehi ho gaya.nehi rey yeah tu kaisi bate kar raha hai.o swayam ki behen hain.
then he said:per rey aisa kahi pe likha to nehi hain na ki apni bst frnd ki behen se kisiko kabhi pyaar nehi ho sakta.
rey:tyo mr reyaansh singhania finally tume pyaar ho gaya.jis lerki ki feelings ko tumne itna hurt kiya tha usise tume pyaar ho gaya.haar geye na tum uske paas.taani ka mere liye itna concern,pyaar finally jit gaya.per pehli bar haarke itna accha lag raha hain.
rey stood up:tyo ms taani shekhawat aj yeah mr reyaansh singhania ka dil sirf aoke ke liye dharakta hain or yeah bat main aj apko batake hi rahunga.o bhi apne tarike se bas krishnaji meri madat karna and he smiled sweetly(u know rey's killer smile)...
 
guys i hope u like this part.the next prt is the confession and ofcouse chipku scenes
 
 
 
 

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Posted: 01 November 2012 at 1:52am | IP Logged
hooo hooo miss thani shekawath reyansh singhania comng for uuuClap...heee heeeSmileSmileSmile ...i really realy really loved thisTongue...hand shakes poulomi...keep it up.Clap.

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Posted: 01 November 2012 at 2:53am | IP Logged
Waitin for next updateee

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Posted: 01 November 2012 at 3:02am | IP Logged
awesome update.

Rey ka dil sirf taani ke liye hi dharkta hai..

continue writing and update soon.

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