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Posted: 27 October 2012 at 12:38pm | IP Logged

<font color="#000000">hey guys so i m updating my post.thnx for the positive response.hopeu all like this part too.and sorry 4 being a little late


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<div><font color="#ff0000">rey drove his car as first as he could to college.as he reached college he saw swayam so heunderstood tht taani is also in the college.so he called taani.in the mean time taani was lost in thoughts of rey.but the phn broke her thoughts.she thought"rey mujhe iss time pe kyun call rahe hain????"and she piches up the call</font>

<font color="#ff0000">taani:hello</font>

<font color="#ff0000">rey:mujhe abhi fire exit pe ake milo</font>

<font color="#ff0000">taani:abhi kyun????</font>

<font color="#ff0000">rey:jaldi aoo.kam he isiliye bula raha hu na.</font>

<font color="#ff0000">taani:ok main aa rahi hoon</font>

<font color="#ff0000">and rey cuts the phn.</font>

<font color="#ff0000">taani:rey kuch paarishan sha sunai de rahe the.pata nehi kyun.</font>


<font color="#660099">at the fire exit</font>


<font color="#ff0000">taani enters.she sees rey standing there lost in thoughts.</font>

<font color="#ff0000">taani:rey.</font>

<font color="#ff0000">he doesnot reply.so taani keeps her hand on his shoulder.</font>

<font color="#ff0000">rey:o tum aa gaye.</font>

<font color="#ff0000">taani:aap itne paareshan kyun hain????</font>

<font color="#ff0000">rey:mujhe tumse bohot imp baat karni hai taani</font>

<font color="#ff0000">taani:boliye</font>

<font color="#ff0000">rey:taani tum kal shivam ke kis levels ko sabke samne lane ki bate kar rahe the?????</font>

<font color="#ff0000">taani is shocked.she thinks"hey krishna ji ab main inko kya batau"</font>

<font color="#ff0000">taani:"o kuch nahi rey"</font>

<font color="#ff0000">rey:kuch nahi to mujhse nazre kyun chupa rahe ho.kya tum muje bilkul bhi trust nehi karti.</font>

<font color="#ff0000">and he cups her face in his hand and hawa hawa scene with taarey bg tune</font>

<font color="#ff0000">taani:bohot zada karti hoon rey.zab waqt aayega sab ko bata dungi ki saach kya hain.main sabko eksath ea bat batana chati hoon.bas usse pele mujhe thori himmat chahiye"</font>

<font color="#ff0000">and she exits b4 rey could say anything...</font>


<font color="#000000">this much 4 now guys otherwise mom would kill me.tell me hw is this.promise i m gonna write a longer one next time</font>


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Edited by gunjanmyjaan - 28 October 2012 at 12:38am

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Posted: 27 October 2012 at 1:44pm | IP Logged
awesome dear...pls pm me...update soon
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Posted: 27 October 2012 at 2:14pm | IP Logged
THATS GREAT ClapClapClapClap  CONTINUE DEAR
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Posted: 28 October 2012 at 1:01am | IP Logged
nice one.,.,cont soonBig smile
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Posted: 28 October 2012 at 1:31am | IP Logged
Poulomi!! It was an awesome update !! It was actually short but really exciting !! Waiting for ur next update!!
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Posted: 28 October 2012 at 1:39am | IP Logged

hey guys without much bak bak i will first write and as i promised this would not be a short update.so lets start.

part 4:
rey was still at the fire exit.he sat on the stairs.rey thinks,"taani aisa kya kehna chati hain.aisa kya hai jo o sabko bata chati hain???"suddenly he recieves a sms.he saw that the sms was from taani.it said-"abhi ap ne mujhse pucha tha na ki akhir main kya batana chati hoon.to abhi canteen ajaiye.oha pey maine sab ko bulaya hain.main sabko sab kuch bataungi khulke"reading  the sms rey was just too excited.
 
scene change:at the canteen
swayam:pls taani batao ki tumne hum sabko eksath eha pe kyun bulaya he???
neha:ha taani why calling us???
taani:rey ko aa jane dijiye phir main sab ko bataungi.
rey:main aa gaya taani ab batao plzzz.
and then taarey eyelock and bg tune
taani:guys maine app sabse mere or shivam ke bare main ek baat chupayi thi.
the gang together:kya????
taani:guys main or shivam kabhi ek sath the hi nehi.ea bas ek natak tha.
everybody together:kya!!!!!!par kyun taani????
taani:mujhe bolne to dijiye.
and she tld them everything-like how this started phir uss rat kya hua etc etc. and she broke down
everyone was just shocked.the boya had their fists cluched the girls we also very angry
rey:taani tume pata vi hain ki swayam kitna dangerous or gira hua hain
taani:pehle maine use apna bohot accha dost samjha tha bt uss raat ke baad mujhe pata chal gaya ki shivam sirf mera use kar raha tha ap dono(she looks at rey and swayam) se badla lene ke liye.
swayam:per tumne aisa kyun kiya taani????
taani:uss article ke baad main nehi chati thi ki rey ko i mean app sabko meri bajay se or taklif ho.
swayam:tum mujhe to atleast bata sakte the na taani.main tumara bhai hoon
taani(still crying):sorry bhai galti ho gaya.
swayam:its ok.but phir kabhi hamare liye ea sab mat karna.
and he hugged taani.
the boys:uss shivam ke bacche ka khayar nahi aane do use samne.
swayam:na guya samajhdari se kal lena o gs hain.ham sab mushkil main par sakte hain.kyun rey??
rey didnt reply.he was lost at the beauty of taani.and he also knew ki taani ne jo kuch vi batayi o sab sach tha except one thing.rey understood ki taani ney ea sab kuck sabke liye nehi sirf uske liye kiya hey.
swayam:rey.
rey:haan?
swayam:to kya soch raha hain.kich khayalo main khoya hain??
rey:nehi o kuch nahi bas muje kuch kam hain main aati hoon
 
scene changes:at the fire exit...
 
hey guys hope u will like this.the main part is going to start now...
Heart poulomi
 
 
 
 
 
 

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Posted: 28 October 2012 at 2:05am | IP Logged
Awesome update poulomi!! LUVED it next the main part more excited !! Update soon!!
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Posted: 28 October 2012 at 2:40am | IP Logged
Nice...update next soon...

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