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do dil ek jaan-taarey<3(part 9 updated) (Page 11)

Ria_Taareyfan Senior Member
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Posted: 29 November 2012 at 12:01am | IP Logged
nice update updte soon and pm me :)

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Posted: 29 November 2012 at 12:58am | IP Logged
Shocked
i was shock u write ooo beautifully 
n it was not at all vulgar it was luvly n romantic 
u know i luv it soo much tht i am read it 5 time 
luv it n it was hot Blushing
great job dear head off to u 
Clap luv it like anything 
thanks dear Hug
n plz PM me nxt time i dont want to miss it 
n thanks for PM 


Edited by raddhi - 29 November 2012 at 1:01am

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Posted: 29 November 2012 at 3:15am | IP Logged
wow it was awesome do update soon plz

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Posted: 29 November 2012 at 4:35am | IP Logged
Continue soon! Cant wait for the next part LOL

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Posted: 30 November 2012 at 4:14am | IP Logged
its lovely dearSmilei love it Tongueupdate next prt soonWink n plz pm meLOL  


Edited by tarey_forever - 30 November 2012 at 4:15am
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Posted: 04 December 2012 at 12:15am | IP Logged
hey guys bck with the nxt prt srry 4 being late.lets start
 
prt9:
taani:rey ab zada romantic banna na bandh kijiye or chaliye nehi tyo bhai gussa karenge
rey:haan haan aise bhi tumare bhai ka  timing tyo hamesha galat hi hota he
taani:how dare u???mere bhai ke bare main...
rey:haan mene kuch galat to nehi bola na per usne ea kaam bada accha kiya mujhe ghar bulake
taani(blushing):ab chale??
rey:haan per change tyo karne do tumari meherbani se is shirt ke saare button tut gaye he or ye tumare aasuose bhig bhi gaya he
taani:haan haan hamesha galti tyo meri hoti he na ea sab apne hi to shuru kiya tha then she blushed and thought:hey krishnaji ea maine kya bol diya
rey(holding taani by her waist):maine kya shuru kiya tha???
taani(making herself free):rey jaiye
rey:haan haan zata hoon
and then he changed nd they went to swayam's house in rey's car
swayam:tyo finally tumlog aa gaye tum logoka kam kaisa gaya
rey:kaam.bohot accha bilkul superb
taani blushed
to herself:ea kya bol rahe hain
swayam:tumne kuch bola taani
taani:nehi nehi bhai main kya bolungi
swayam:haan taani tyo khana de do
rey:haan haan bilkul
thn to himself:aise bhi subhe se tension ke maare kuch bhi nehi khya ab tyo pet main chuhe daur rahe hain
swayam:kya????
rey:nehi nehi kuch nehi tu chal na
d they went
but taani had heard what rey had said taani:hey krishnaji inone kuch bhi nehi khya meri bajayje plzz plzzz dekh lena ki ajke khane main zada mirchi na ho apko pata he na unko mirchi se kitna prob he
 
and then she took out the  food
 
guys thts all todayu hope u all like it will update soon krishna ji ki kasam

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Posted: 04 December 2012 at 12:23am | IP Logged
hey yipeee im 1st one 2 commentWink
n yes it was amazing Clap
short n sweetSmile
plz update soon SleepyBig smile
n thanks 4 d pm 
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Posted: 04 December 2012 at 12:24am | IP Logged
U did an amazing job, Rey is too funny. Can't wait to read more update soon

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