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Arshi SS- I Bet,I Love You...Thread I (Page 37)

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Posted: 31 October 2012 at 3:31am | IP Logged
Chapter 4 - The Geusts

Arnav's POV

"Arnav..." My mom says while she sets the plates on the dining table." How is University?"

"Good." I said automatically.

Payal snorts earning a kick from me under the table.

"I hope You both are studying well? " Mom says while spooning the gravy.

"Yes...Mom." Payal & I said in unison rolling our eyes.

"Okk..I was thinking that, Arnav...Can You stay with Aakash this week? I have to host Mr and Mrs. Sharma's daughter's wedding guests in our house?And you don't like noise pollution so You can stay away.." My mom said looking expectantly at me and added, "Payal...You can stay here with us..."

"Okay Mom.I will ask Aakash." I said to Mom assuringly.

"Call him Now..." Payal urged.

Payal wants me out of the house so that she can rule the entire mansion.

Mom knows that if we were left together,We might end up killing each other.

Shaking my head,I dial Aakash's number.

"Hey,Dude...What's Up...??" Aakash's voice answered at the second ring.

"Can I stay at your house for this week?" I asked directly coming to the point.

"Sure." Aakash replied shortly not even thinking for a second.

"Okay Then..See you at University.Bye." Saying so,I hanged up.

"Thank God...I can rule the house now..." Payal said raising her hands towards heaven.

"Fine..I am going to pack." I said in defeat and walked towards my room.

After University,I will go back with Aakash to his house.

When Aakash and I are together...Studying is definitely not on our list.

"Dude..Have you seen Khushi,today?" I ask looking around the class.

"Nah..Not seen her at all...Missing her..?" Aakash teased but added looking at my death glare,"Dude..You have already asked me this question 10 times from morning."

The class is not crowded because its Friday and students usually are absent to enjoy an early weekend.

"Are you kidding me? Why would I miss her? " I questioned cutting him off.


Come On..Khushi,Why aren't you here??

One more minute for the bell to ring and Khushi has not yet appeared for class.

Mrs. Manorama has closed the class door.

I wonder why Khushi is absent today.

"Did you meet Khushi yesterday?" Mrs.Manorama asked breaking my thoughts.

"Yes Ma'am." I replied politely.

"Good.Continue your studies with her.She is a good student." Mrs.Manorama promised.

I give her a nod indicating a Yes and start reading the chapter which Khushi was supposed to tutor me.

How am I supposed to ask her out for tomorrow?

She is absent today.

I don't have her number.

But I know someone who has.


But asking Payal for the number is equal to getting your hair pulled out.


My plan was to ask Khushi out for a movie and then dinner.

But now it looks like the plan has gone down the drain.

"What???...Why are you telling me now??" I asked in irritation while laying sprawled on my stomach on Aakash's bed.

"I forgot." Aakash says sheepishly while switching on his laptop.

"You forgot to tell me that a girl is going to stay here in your house?" I asked with confusion.

Aakash's Mom is hosting the daughter of her friend for a couple of days due to an undisclosed reason.

"What's her name?" I asked suddenly.

"I don't know!" Aakash replied scratching his head.

"Maybe my staying here with 'Ms. I-Dont-Know' is not good." I suggested.

"I told you,Arnav.My mom does not mind at all.She said 'The more,The merrier.!!"

"Nah...I will leave you with this mysterious girl all to yourself." I said and got up on my feet.

"Oh come on..I already like someone." Aakash grunted.

I jerked my head towards this statement..."You LIKE someone???"

"I, uh, yes..." Aakash said not quiet meeting my eyes.

The last break up was during the time Aakash had lost his bet and He already likes Someone!

"Who is she?" I asked curiosity clear in my voice.

"Its nothing serious..Really.Just a crush." Aakash replied while staring at the laptop.

"So why won't you tell me?"

"Omg...Arnav,The guest will be arriving in like a couple of minutes.Mom is not in the house so We have to attend the guests.I am going to take a bath." Aakash said it all in a breath and rushed towards the bathroom.

Aakash is diverting the topic of his 'Liking Someone'.

Hmmm...Maybe I know Her.

There is a sharp ring of the bell which brings me out of my thoughts.

"Aakash! Your guest is here." I yell across the room.

"Let them in." Aakash's muffled voice came back.

Hastily I make my way across the living room.

This is not even my house..Why am I opening the door like a host?


When I open the door,a woman in her late forties appears in sight smiling brightly.

"Aakash...Is that you.?" The woman questioned flashing her smile even more brightly.

I think Aakash told me that the girl was about our age but this woman doesn't seem so.

"I am Arnav Singh Raizada. Aakash's friend." I replied clearing my throat and added," Aakash is having a bath."

"Oh...Ok...I am Garima Gupta.You can call me Garima Aunty." The woman replied.

There is something familiar in her smile and the way her eyes crinkle.Reminds me of someone I know but cant seem to remember.

"Come in,Garima Aunty." I said opening the door wide.

"Oh..Wait.I will just call my daughter." Garima Aunty said and walked towards the car which was parked in the driveway.

Okk..There is a Girl.

The passenger door of the car opened and the girl tumbled out.

When she looked at me...My breath hitched and the time seemed to stop.

We both wore the same expression of shock with our mouths hanging open.

Garima Aunty looked like she was watching a tennis match.

Finally, finding my voice I said,"What are you doing here?"

"What are you doing here?" She says as if I am really the last person she expects to see here.

Garima Aunty squeals.."Oh My God..You both know each other?"

"Yes." Khushi and I say simultaneously without letting our eyes off each other.

"That's great.Khushi,You will not be lonely now." Garima Aunty said while removing two luggage bags from the boot of the car.

Two Bags?

Its means only one thing...

Khushi is staying here.

Aakash walks towards us fresh from the bathroom.

When He sees Khushi standing next to me,He gives me a knowing smirk.

Did He know his guest before?

Or was it a shock like me or a drama?

"Welcome Home Khushi." Aakash said grinning broadly and added ,"Enjoy your stay here." while nudging me hard in the ribs.

Precap - Why are we sharing the shower??Blushing

Chapter 5- The Intrusion

Edited by morning_star - 01 November 2012 at 3:52am

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Posted: 31 October 2012 at 3:34am | IP Logged
oh u hav updated u dint write in d headlines dats y dint came to knw...vl surely read daily updates now...

d story is moving amazingly..lovng it... Smile

ohh i was comenting fr 3rd chp...looks lyk m d first for d 4th chp yipppiiieee Big smile

Edited by massu91 - 31 October 2012 at 3:35am

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Posted: 31 October 2012 at 3:53am | IP Logged
Juss read this story...lovely SS...the story is very interes and enjoyed it so much...looking forward to next chapter...please pm me whenever u update Smile

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Posted: 31 October 2012 at 4:15am | IP Logged
Wow...It was excellent...since I was away for two days I read three updates at a stretch... Awesome work dear...Keep it up...

I liked it  Arnav calling her kookie... Sooo sweet...Embarrassed

I love your writing style dear...Its simple but catchy...ClapClap...Keep working on it dear...Your works are always worth reading...

Precap...:Blushing...Day Dreaming

Edited by arshy4ever - 31 October 2012 at 6:52am

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Posted: 31 October 2012 at 4:41am | IP Logged
sharing a shower?????Tongue

cant wait

continue soon

ty for the pmClap
ThanuAditya IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 31 October 2012 at 4:42am | IP Logged
awesome update
sree1993 Senior Member

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Posted: 31 October 2012 at 4:53am | IP Logged
great'll be fun to see them under one roof...they are sharing the shower? you mean they are having a bath together or is it just one using the other's bathroom?Embarrassed...oh yaar i'm excitedLOL
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wow interesting.can't wait.thanks for the pmBig smile

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