Posted: 19 January 2013 at 9:48am | IP Logged
UPDATING IN PARTS, DONT READ TILL I PM U
Destiny's Course is my second favourite ff after SFL. The journey till now has been really soothing till now. Just waiting for ashu and nidhi to fall in love and then confess and then you know...
Now coming to this chapter, as always it was fantastic. Just loved it. As a chapter it was just perfect, u didnt miss out on any element. All the scenes were so precisely and accurately sketched.
-Starting scene was nicely described. Ashu noticed that although nidhi was smiling, it was forced. Thumbs up for dat.
-Chai part was great. U managed to keep the adrak ki chai date intact in ur way in ur ff. Nidhi actually waited for ashu to have tea, and ashu's reaction to it was absolutely superb. Super like for it.
-Ashu's concern for nidhi's baba was super sweet. Their relation has been developed in a very adorable way. It is very natural, not out of any compulsion, direct connection with the heart. Nice aspect.
-Ashu DB's light hearted banter was hilarious. It was enjoyable. But i didnt get, was it even necessary to have all these post marriage rituals, as in given the circumstances of nidhi's baba's frail health? DB should have cancelled it, rituals can't be important than a person, can be? The scene was fantastic in its own way, but just felt this way.
-Ashu's convo with his father was awesome. Maturely handled. Baba acted as perfect guide for ashu and offered consistent support in this tough time. Perfect scene. Who better than his own father to look upto?
-Ashu's concern for nidhi was commendable. Ashuji ke darwaaza par pyaar ki dastak ho chuki h, dekhna yeh h ki voh kab is ehsaas ko pehchante hain aur apnaate h?
-Nidhi's realization regarding her father's health, that the inevitable forces are gonna take him away from her, is not far away was beautifully put forward. Wonderful depiction of emotions. Her relation with ashu's family was wery well written. Whole part was awesome.
-Ashu and nidhi staring at each other was shamelessly great. Ashu even forgot why he had come into the room. It was just so dreamy
-Loved nidhi's affect on ashu. Glad ashu realized what her presence can do to him
-Ashu being there for nidhi's baba, when she couldnt be there him herself. His care for him was fantastic. He was not the son in law but perfect son to CV.
-The contentment on CV's face was really satisfying for nidhi. And ashu is the reason behind it to a great extent.
-Ashu deciding to stay detached from nidhi. Really, he thinks he can resist nidhi?
. A person like ashu cant get physical with nidhi unless he feels for her. Atleast that is what i think because he is a true person at heart, and he has already fallen hard for her, its only about time he realizes that.
-Ashu only in towel, omg i am dead
. That was so hot, ashu's bare body.
-The trip, the hug, the kiss and whatever followed was just wow. I hope u understood what i meant
-Ashu Nidhi's understanding has grown by leaps and bounds. Major progress. CV passing away was sad but inevitable. Nidhi is just broken up. She needs ashu's love and support to recover. And am sure she'll get it. Full confidence in u.
-Ashu wanting to take nidhi out for a change was good, but nidhi refused, lekin am sure vo maan jayegi.
-I am taking this trip as ashni honeymoon. And i guess we will get what generally happens on honeymoon?
I am sure u r getting what i meant to say, i cant be more direct and besharam
Looking forward to the next chap
Edited by deepali.rock - 20 January 2013 at 10:05am