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Libra

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Posted: 10 January 2013 at 2:51pm | IP Logged

Originally posted by Vidishaa

Sorry for the late post-

I had read it in a hurry and then forgot to write a review( and was a bit lazy too)

I liked the way you have written about Nidhi's grief at the prospect of losing her Dad...and the state of denial she was in after his death.

There was a sexual tension in Ashni's room and the tripping incident intensified it...but CV's condition created a storm in Nidhi's mind...and sent the wrong signals to Ashu.

Loved the way Ashu took care of his dying fil...heartwarming.

Overall a good update..looking forward for SFL update..( and also one for hum ho gaye aapke...want to know about how Nidhi's makeover will create a sensation in Ashni's room)

Hi Vidishaa

Sorry did not see this till now.

thank you so much for your comments.

Really appreciate ti. Big smile

Both SFL and HHGA will be next.

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Libra

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Posted: 10 January 2013 at 2:55pm | IP Logged

Originally posted by nandinibose

very,very,very sorry 4 the extremely late comments.

to b pestering u 4 an update all these days n then not commentin is really horrible on my part. so, sory again 4 that.

coming to the chap, it was beautifully written n it blended perfectly with the previous chap.

all the emotions were beautifully expressed. hats off to u 4 that.

i found nidhi waiting 4 ashu 2 hv her morning tea very cute.

ashu is really a very good person at heart. he looked after his fil as his own.absolutely loved him after reading those parts. Big smile

knowing that his daughter will b well looked after once he is gone is a big comfort 2 cv and it really helped him die in peace.

some of DB comments were hilarious. where do u get these ideas? hearty laugh emoticon

bb n db are two more people who hv beautiful hearts. they 2 hv taken care of cv n nidhi as there own.

whether ashu admits it 2 himself or not, he has already fallen in love with nidhi.

the sexual undercurrent that runs between the two is amazing.

him 4getting about taking a change of clothes to the bathroom was very funny. and all his analysis regarding the matter was fabulous.

and nidhi's reaction to his condition was priceless.loved how u described the loss of her coherent speech n her ogling . too good. giggling emoticon

and ashu grinning devilishly on seeing her reaction n his effect on her was so sweet.he has already started enjoying her antics n her priceless reactions to the charm he weaves on her.

and then the kisses n the caressing. i was literally blushing while reading those parts.

u really r a romantic!!!! shy whistler emoticon

nidhi's reaction on learning about her father's receeding health was justified.

u managed to describe cv's last days very well. i was feelin close to tears while reading it.

i m a little confused. why is nidhi not talking to ashu after her father's death?

and she is not ready ready to go anywhere with him.

hope we get our answers soon. thank u 4 the wonderful chap.

now impatient 4 SOL n HHGA, my two favourites

hope u r well now.

love ya

Hi Nandini

thank you for the super cute, and very very

flattering review.

I am glad that you liked the chap.

Its comments like yours, that make

me want to keep on writing, and try to do

the best job I can.

So thank you.

And I appreciate your concern on behalf of my health, also.

I am quite well now. Thanks.

Will be posting SFL chap by Sat evening. Will be looking forward to your views there also.

Love you too. Big smile

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Libra

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Posted: 10 January 2013 at 2:55pm | IP Logged

Originally posted by aardhan

Originally posted by Libra

Very happy new year Aarti.

Its good to be back. And yes I did get to spend a lot of time with my children. It was a lot of fun.

Thanks for your comments, and you review. Your words are a really big source of encouragement

For me. I really appreciate it.

I am so glad that you liked the update. I will be PMing u a bit later. Want to bounce some ideas off u.

Anyways take care.

Love

Anu

@blue, Anytime Anu, will be glad to help you! Embarrassed

Thanks Aarti. Big smile

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Posted: 10 January 2013 at 2:56pm | IP Logged

Originally posted by oaz30

Anuuu I know I owe u a review coming up this week end promise

I Will be looking forward to it Shari.

Missed you. Embarrassed

Libra

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Posted: 10 January 2013 at 2:57pm | IP Logged

Originally posted by Anjani9

Anuji, This is torture... Dead

After reading DC's update...we want to read next update but next update will come only after 3 other updates... Cry

Sorry about that, Anjani ji.

Kya karein. If I could I would update all of them at once. But I cant so, you will have to bear with me.

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Posted: 11 January 2013 at 10:18am | IP Logged

sat evening wud mean sunday 4 us. isn't it? Shocked

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Posted: 12 January 2013 at 3:19pm | IP Logged

Waiting...

It's Saturday evening Wink

Libra

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Posted: 12 January 2013 at 4:35pm | IP Logged

hi everyone. yep its saturday. and i know I promised to have my update ready.

and for the most part i will have it posted before i go to bed.

but my six year old has the flu. and that might cause a slight delay. depending on how he feels, and if i can get the time i will finish, otherwise i will have to finishe writing it after he is asleep. in that case,

instead of tonight i might have to post tomorrow morning instead.

so i am still hopeful but once again, CIRCUMSTANCES. what can i do.

SORRY!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Embarrassed

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