Originally posted by nandinibose
very,very,very sorry 4 the extremely late comments.
to b pestering u 4 an update all these days n then not commentin is really horrible on my part. so, sory again 4 that.
coming to the chap, it was beautifully written n it blended perfectly with the previous chap.
all the emotions were beautifully expressed. hats off to u 4 that.
i found nidhi waiting 4 ashu 2 hv her morning tea very cute.
ashu is really a very good person at heart. he looked after his fil as his own.absolutely loved him after reading those parts.
knowing that his daughter will b well looked after once he is gone is a big comfort 2 cv and it really helped him die in peace.
some of DB comments were hilarious. where do u get these ideas?
bb n db are two more people who hv beautiful hearts. they 2 hv taken care of cv n nidhi as there own.
whether ashu admits it 2 himself or not, he has already fallen in love with nidhi.
the sexual undercurrent that runs between the two is amazing.
him 4getting about taking a change of clothes to the bathroom was very funny. and all his analysis regarding the matter was fabulous.
and nidhi's reaction to his condition was priceless.loved how u described the loss of her coherent speech n her ogling . too good.
and ashu grinning devilishly on seeing her reaction n his effect on her was so sweet.he has already started enjoying her antics n her priceless reactions to the charm he weaves on her.
and then the kisses n the caressing. i was literally blushing while reading those parts.
u really r a romantic!!!!
nidhi's reaction on learning about her father's receeding health was justified.
u managed to describe cv's last days very well. i was feelin close to tears while reading it.
i m a little confused. why is nidhi not talking to ashu after her father's death?
and she is not ready ready to go anywhere with him.
hope we get our answers soon. thank u 4 the wonderful chap.
now impatient 4 SOL n HHGA, my two favourites
hope u r well now.
thank you for the super cute, and very very
I am glad that you liked the chap.
Its comments like yours, that make
me want to keep on writing, and try to do
the best job I can.
So thank you.
And I appreciate your concern on behalf of my health, also.
I am quite well now. Thanks.
Will be posting SFL chap by Sat evening. Will be looking forward to your views there also.
Love you too.