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Posted: 25 October 2012 at 10:53pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Malvika_rajeev

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Originally posted by Malvika_rajeev

Hi,
 
First of all, thanks for giving the credit to me for the storyline. I have given you the basic framework only, and you have done a wonderful job of fleshing it out.
 
I can only say...kya baat hai!!! WOW.
 
 
Thank you Doc.
And I gave credit where credit is due.  Agar aap idea nahin dete toh main likh bhi nahin paati.Embarrassed

I am glad that you liked it.  
glad that I was able to do justice to your idea.Embarrassed
 
Anu, it would be wonderful if you show Ashutosh originally as a khadoos no-nonsense fellow, devoid of all pity to a fellow human being...and then turns into a caring husband...that transition should form the crux of the story. Even their bedroom interaction which is initially a pure physical process turns into a romantic one...at the end of Nidhi's preg track, he cares for her so much that he is not willing to let her go out of sight...fulfills all her pregnancy demands etc etc...
 
I will rest assured, now that you can do enough justice to the story line.  
I have started out that way Doc.  I will try and continue, it the way u have suggested.
I hope I can do it.  Although making him khadoos should not be too much of a problem
I seem to be getting the hang of it.  Although I need to ask u a few questions, will pm soon regarding those.
thanx once again Doc.Big smile 

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Posted: 25 October 2012 at 10:57pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by niniborn2rule

story sounds interesting...pyaar to ho hi jayega...waiting to see the process of falling in love...go ahead anu...

Thanx Nini

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Posted: 25 October 2012 at 11:02pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Libra

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story sounds interesting...pyaar to ho hi jayega...waiting to see the process of falling in love...go ahead anu...

Thanx Nini

dheere dheere pyar ko badhana haiEmbarrassed

sk's dialogue...

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Posted: 25 October 2012 at 11:11pm | IP Logged
Clap fantastic start...i am sure you will do perfect justice to this lovely story...

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Posted: 25 October 2012 at 11:17pm | IP Logged
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Originally posted by Libra

Originally posted by niniborn2rule

story sounds interesting...pyaar to ho hi jayega...waiting to see the process of falling in love...go ahead anu...

Thanx Nini

dheere dheere pyar ko badhana haiEmbarrassed

sk's dialogue...

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Posted: 25 October 2012 at 11:18pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by turags

Clap fantastic start...i am sure you will do perfect justice to this lovely story...

Thanx Turags.Big smile

I thought u were travelling?Embarrassed

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Posted: 25 October 2012 at 11:33pm | IP Logged
u r an amazing writer cont soon

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Posted: 25 October 2012 at 11:37pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by jyothi_cool

u r an amazing writer cont soon

Embarrassed Thanx
appreciate the compliment a lot.

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