DESTINY'S COURSE chap 8 parts 1&2 updtd 1/6 page 130 - Page 47

Originally posted by: sss97

hi anu 

thanks for coming back. Actually feeling gr reading ur chapter update the others soon😊

Originally posted by: ChitaRK

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Originally posted by: wizardofoz

Anu, so glad to see your FF. Hope you are fully well now. Heard you had been to the hospital.All okay with you?

Originally posted by: deepali1772

Just read it - wow as always - nice to have u back.

 

Nice gradual attraction btw Ashni - sad about her father's early death. Hopefully ashni go on the trip. Waiting for the next update here & also the FF's.

Originally posted by: swati62

Just read it superb chapter. Missed ur ff so glad u are back.

Originally posted by: sshirley

Hey Anuji,

 

You are back and saying  that you are back with a bang would be an understatement.

 

There was not a single word in the whole chapter that i didnt like. i just loved how the feelings are developing between AshNi and not only attraction, but the way Nidhi feels when she sees Ashu genuinely caring for and respecting her father was very well brought out.

The kiss was just scintiliating and yet,  the way u wrote, very natural under the circumstances. 

 

So, her father passed away contented and peacefully, thankfully u did not drag the death part too much and moved the story forward.

 

now i m eagerly aawaiting ur next update. and moreover, want to know which ff would u update next?

 

Waise i hope you remember me - i was a big fan of urs and turags joint ff. Then got busy with my career. got one month free - had thought would have unrestrained fun with ur ffs and commenting and recommenting - but aap toh gayab hi the - no issues i can understand abhi toh bas 5 din aur uske baad will have to stop all this.

 

And btw, i am writing an ff - jab koi baat bigad jaaye, so pl. read and give honest feedback on that.

Originally posted by: sharma.shivani

Hi Anu, good to have you back 😊. This is my working weekend, will read it at night and comment. 

Originally posted by: Libra

Hi, 

Of course I remember you.  actually was wondering where u had gone.

 

  

Thank you so much for the awesome review, and wonderful compliments.

I am glad that you liked the update.😃

Actually was very apprehensive this time.  I wasn't sure.  It has been a long break, and 

I was afraid that my chap might sound disjointed, 

But thanks, for giving me such wonderful words of encouragement, and praise.😳

I will definitely read your FF, and will post my comments, as soon as I can.

I will be updating SFL next.

So where will you be off to after 5dYs, and when will you be back?😃

Originally posted by: sshirley

 

 

Actually I came to the US to do MBA yes i know u are also US based). And i made it a rule for myself that no IF during semester - otherwise it becomes an addiction. These days i m thinking about my ff 24*7. Next week my semester begins and i will wrap up my ff before that. And before you ask me, yes i do cheat on this rule - whenevr a new chapter is posted on any ff, i open it on my laptop befire leaving for uni. and read it on the way 😉

Originally posted by: Libra