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the uniting of kriyaansh <chapter 1> (Page 6)

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Awesome update, plz continue fast!
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Posted: 06 December 2012 at 5:38am | IP Logged

Chapter 3

Kriya meets gang

Kriya was not at all ready to face the gang .

But sayam convinced her

Kr:swayam I cannot face everyone. I am feeling very scared i do not how they will react and neha and vishakha will killl me yaar

Sw: don't worry kriya nothing will happen after all some day or the other you wll have to face them then why not today .come on kriya be brave yaar. Show your k effect

Kr: but swayammm ???????????/.

Sw: what happened?????????????????

They both turn and find rey standing and hearing their convo

 

Rey and kriya both are stunned and shocked to see each other

Rey could not believe his eyes that his ex his life his everything was standing in front of him

He asked swayam to pinch him

Swayam pinched him and it was proved this was not a dream

Kr: rey iii...

Rey: shutup kriya I don't want to hear anything from you

You were the person I loved the most but now  you are the person I hate the most you used me you are such a ...

Sw: but rey atleast ...

And even before swayam could complete his sentence rey leaves

Kriya was  all shattered she started crying  and in the meantime the whole gang had come and all were shocked to see kriya

Neha: neha asking  where had you been. You know neha was missing you

Vishakha  stepped forward and slapped kriya where you

You do not thin k we are friends ek baar call bhi nahi kara aur nahi milne ayi

Bus gayab ho gayi aur aaj ab ayi. Samaj nahi aa raha tuje dekh kar khush hu ya naraz

And vishakha and neha started crying. Seeing all this rinni and simmi to started crying

neha: itna gussa ara hai tujh par man kar raha hai joota utarkar maru. sharam nahi aati na sachi dost nahi hai hum tere tu ne hi dosti sikhayi aur tu hi uska matlab todkar chali gayi

kr: par yaar ye sab kra bhi to tumhare liye

simi and rini come on guys usne itbi badi galti nahi ki

all the girls started crying

Nil: lo shuru ho gaya ladkiyon ka rona dhona

Vicky: ha yaar inko rone ke ilavakuch nahi ata

All the boys together : girlsss

Meanwhile all the girls came and had a group hug

nil:  ab rona bandand atleast give kriya a welcome back prty

girls : yes

kriya: guys you need to tell me everything that happened. everything

neha:  worry not neha will tell you everything

from upstairs rey was silently watching everything. he was happy to see his baat cutter smilling and was upset to realize that kriya had used him. he could not understand what emotions he was going througjh.nobody could else either

precap  :And will rey listen to her will the one time love birds kriyaansh will again be the one of the most talked about couple again? To come to know keep reading and following


so its done ok guys plzzz bahut saare likes and comments and  criticism welcomed

and tried to write a big one

 

 



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Amazing part

happy to see her back...
Hehe girls are girls...

Nice story
cont soon

Plz make an index on pg1
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Awesome update..

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