MY FIRST RAJI FF(part 4 updt) page 5

Posted: 11 years ago
HI Guys this my first ff. hope you like it...

rashi is waiting for bus on a bus stand. she is very tensed because it's already late and bus is not coming.This time urmila her mom definitely kill her' she thought herself.
urmila iis a hitler mom but her husband Jitu is so nice but he also afraid with urmila.  she is evil woman. Jitu is so worried about rashi. 

rashi is still waiting. but after a long time when it's 12 o'clock she starts walking. suddenly a car stop behind her. a smart guy open the window. oh he is my boss ahem's younger brother and and her childhood friend jigar.

jigar: hi rashi. come i'll drop u. 
rashi: no thanks jigar i'll manage.
jigar: come on rashi, enter the car.
rashi enter into the car and say thanks.

actually jigar loves rashi from his college days but he didn't tell this to rashi and he is very happy that rashi is sitting behind him. 

suddenly rashi say. it's great that i meet u tonight. i want to give u a news or invitation.
invitation??? asked jigar
yes i'm going to marry very soon...

                                                            to be contineu
  
do comment guys
Edited by awesome-raji - 11 years ago
Posted: 11 years ago
πŸ‘πŸΌ please give a long update and soon...

awesome starting...
Posted: 11 years ago
aww nice start oishi...and a great twist at the end of this part...want to see further continue ...update next part soon😊
Posted: 11 years ago
very nice start
plz update long n soon
Posted: 11 years ago
thanx guys to appreciated me. i'll update ssoon. 
Posted: 11 years ago
Really sweet :) oh waiting for the next part:)
Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by vibz88


Really sweet :) oh waiting for the next part:)


thanx vibz .
Posted: 11 years ago
gr88 start...plzz update soonπŸ˜ƒ
Posted: 11 years ago
sorry for late update... 


part 2

jigar is shock but h somehow control himself. jigar:really?? congratulation!!

rashi: thanx. 
but rucha looks little low. jigar notice it .
jigar ask rucha. is any problem. are u unhappy .

rashi: no, actually i don't know Armaan...

jigar: armaan??

rashi: yah armaan. my fiance. i think he don't like me or love anyone

jigar:  u r confused rashi. u have to clear everything before marriage

rashi; sure I will. we reach. thank u jigar. see u

jigar: bye.

jigar is standing in front of window. hetal enter his room.

hetal: u r still awake? it's already 2 am dikra

jigar: yah mom, i am not sleepy so...

hetal: what happened dikra???

jigar: nothing ..

hetal; i know dikra what hapened ? rashi's marriage 

jigar: how do u know mom?

hetal: her imitation card urmila gave to us. don't worry dikra everything will be fine. 

jigar: i kknow mom...

 at rashi's home
rashi is thinking about jigar. 'how caring he is. but armaan???then gopi enter rashi's room..


pls guys give your opinion and comment.πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ

 
  
Posted: 11 years ago
First to comment πŸ˜ƒ! Post chapter num in the title aswell pl..it will be easy πŸ˜›
superb start! do continue and Pm me πŸ˜Š Edited by scarlet167 - 11 years ago

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