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Virika OS upd pg 8,Note pg 14 (Page 5)

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Posted: 03 November 2012 at 7:22am | IP Logged
i am loving the way you are bringing the os!!!!! Smile
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Part 2
Jeevika was in the kitchen cooking kheer for viren as it is his favourite dish.Meanwhile karan passes by n enters the kitchen.
K:hi jeevika ji
Jeevika just smiles back not knowing wht to speak with him.She concentrates on her cooking.
K:waisey,i hope u wont mind if i call u jeevika instead of adding a jee
J:ji
K:app bhi mujhe sirf karan bulaiye ga,wo kya hain na mujhe karan ji acha nehi lagta
Jeevika was suprised.she hadnt spoken to karan before n never called out his name.What was he trying to say?
J:meine app ko ji keh ker kab pukara?
K:pukara nehi,lekin meine guess kia ke future mein app probably mere naam ke sath ji lagyein ge jaise app viren ke sath lagati hain.
Jeevika was angry,Viren was her husband,wth was karan comparing himself with him.
J:aisa kuch bhi nehi hai,app kitchen mein kyun hain,app ko kuch chahiyeh?
K:app
J:kya,matlab kya hain appka
K:mere matlab app ke hathon ki bani chai,if u dont mind
Jeevika just nodded her head she was fuming with anger.As she was involved in her work,she felt someone approaching her from behind.The person was quiet near her.She thought it must be viren but as she turned,she saw it was karan.Before she could say anything,viren entered.
J:viren ji!!
Seeing viren.karan moved back.
K:wo mein yeh apple le raha tha,yaha counter per rakha tha
Saying this he left.Viren came to jeevika who wasnt able to face him n on the verge of crying.
J:Viren ji,wo
She was cut off by viren who was extremely angry.
Like a possesive,jealous husband he asked
V:yeh sab kya tha jeevika
Jeevika was abt to justify but tears rolled down her cheecks.Seeing her crying,viren melted n said
V:jeevika ro mat,i m sorry,i shudnt have talked like this to u,I know it wasnt ur fault.I m just so stupid,plz forgive me n dont cry
J:nehi viren ji,i m fine,u shudnt be sorry,u have the right to be angry
V:i know,i have all the right in this world,ur my wife.Only i hace right over u,the right to touch u,to come closer to u,I have the right to practise my rights over u,no one else can dare do this,
J:viren ji,u sound like a possesive wife
V:may be but lemme make this clear to u,i m possessive about u,abt my love.Ur only mine!
J:viren ji,i m only urs,always.Saying this she hugs him tightly.
V:jeevika,wht r u cooking?
J:ur favourite kheer,will be ready within a few minutes
V:yummy!!!! but i wanna eat something sweet now
J:viren ji wait for a few minutes only
V:i said now!!
J:but theres nothing sweet at the moment,wht will u have?
Viren looking down towards jeevika's lips said
V:strawberry flavour..
Jeevika knew wht he was upto.
J:viren ji just leave or else the kheer might burn
V:jeevika plz,just a small one?
J:viren ji,i gotta give this tea to karan
Hearing karan's name,viren's expressions changed,he became serious.
Jeevika realizing her mistake came towards viren.
J:I m sorry,i didnt mean to bring him in
V:u have made a mistake,i will surely make u repay for it.With a smirk, he held jeevika's tightly n started kissing her.It was a wild kiss showing his emotions.He was angry,possessive but over everything,he loved her deeply.Jeevika responded back to the kiss with equal passion.They didnt break it,till jeevika was breathless,n red as tomato.
V:this was just a trailer,will show the full film later.
He left the kitchen grinning leaving behing a blushing n confused jeevika,thinking what more will he do?

Jeevika was placing the plates n spoons on the table,when karan came and held her hand tight.
Jeevika was shocked,how dare he do this,what if viren sees them?
J:leave my hand,now
K:not so quickly,u gotta listen to me
J:how dare u do this?Just leave!!
Jeevika's words didnt make much difference,so she had to call out for viren who came running n was going to give a hell to karan but karan said he was just showing jeevika the cut she had on her wrist,it had to be bandaged or else it wud worsen.Viren didnt want to spoil the mood of other,thus left with jeevika.Karan was smiling widely.
K:viren,as i said earlier,i know ur weakness.Poor u n ur sweet wife jeevika!!!
Precap:Karan kidnaps jeevika n brings her to a hotel room,decorated with flowers.
V:Karan,if u even try to touch jeevika,i would
K:u cant do anything viren,ur wife is mine for a night.Dont worry,i will return her back by morning!
Jeevika shouts out for viren.
In the morning,jeevika is lying on the bed with her jewellery scattered n chunri(dupatta)fallen on the floor.

Thats all for part 2.Hope u guys like it,i have tried to add good virika scene along with karan scenes.
Idk,when will i update next.
I know,the precap seems vulgar,u may not like it but i will try to present it in the next part,in a likeable manner.0

Edited by Sweety1234556 - 03 November 2012 at 12:27pm

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Posted: 03 November 2012 at 12:07pm | IP Logged
wooow sooo coool, plz pm me wen u update next
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Posted: 03 November 2012 at 12:46pm | IP Logged
loved it ! please continue it ! superb stufff! thankyou for the pmClap
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Posted: 03 November 2012 at 1:21pm | IP Logged
omg this is soo interring please continue soon 

an if possible pm me please
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awesome update cannot wait
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I loved it ! Can't wait for the next part !
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awsome updateSmile
loved the possessive viren!! please continue soon!!

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