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Posted: 15 November 2012 at 3:41am | IP Logged
Sorry for late reply you truely have me addicted to your thriller its just
awesome can't wait for your next update

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Posted: 15 November 2012 at 5:52am | IP Logged
Excellent update , so is Pari dead or is it a dream and now Prateik too
has he turned into a zoombie .
Is Pari affected because she wore the royal attire
please do update soon

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Part - 6



"It was not your mistake . It was our destiny. Five years have passed , till when are you going to curse yourself?" , Yash said as he caressed her hairs while she was reclining on him to procure some peace .


"I'll behave when Prateek  will get his voice back."


"Doctors are trying..."


Aarti got up , took a deep breath & without paying attention to his words she headed to kitchen . Prateek was already there helping Vidhi . He looked at Aarti , smiled & nodded. His innocent smile would pierce her heart more making her feel more culpable. Prateek lost his Pari in the trip planned by Aarti Yash but not once did he blame them. Why should he? It was not there mistake , only Paridhi wouldn't have been insubordinate. 


Suddenly Prateek's left hand started shivering severely - the crockery began falling from the self, the knob of Vidhi-Aarti's earring started tightening causing blood to flow out & all the portraits on the walls fell down. Well this was now quiet a mundane activity  & all were used to it but earlier it would make all scream with fright . For the last five years the family didn't have a single puja , because the dia in the mandir just won't  set alight. Prateek would shiver , the whole flashback would come live to his eyes & something very hapless would happen at home. Every astrologer , Vastu expert failed to find the key. All suggested the family to abandon Prateek but that was the last thing in their mind. Time slowly slowly moved & his attacks deduced with time. Exactly 7 years after their expedition the things completely got resolved with the help Yash's friend Mira , a psychologist , giving a room for his voice to  come back & it did. The one thing that didn't come back was his love---Paridhi.


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Well That Was The Last Part of Our Creepy Short Story. I hope you guys enjoyed & to some extent we succeeded in giving you goosebumps LOL


Thank you so much for making our little work a success Hug


Love Heart

Abby

Shubhika

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Posted: 18 November 2012 at 3:09am | IP Logged
oh so prateek had lost his voice! glad he finally got it back. Poor Pari! Ouch
Fab work girls...totally enjoyed this SS! it was awesome! 

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Posted: 18 November 2012 at 3:11am | IP Logged
Originally posted by DMKJ_VB

oh so prateek had lost his voice! glad he finally got it back. Poor Pari! Ouch
Fab work girls...totally enjoyed this SS! it was awesome! 

thnxx a ton Ria... Big smile

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Posted: 18 November 2012 at 3:12am | IP Logged
What..wait a second let me process all this,Now I am,OK but seriously WHAT!

By the way,loved it,it was a fantastic SS.Superb work.Abby and Shubhi.




Edited by Pearl_27 - 18 November 2012 at 3:13am

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Posted: 18 November 2012 at 3:14am | IP Logged
nice work
poor pari lost her life!

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gr8 job sweetyClap

i loved itBig smile

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