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plz continue soon jasmine..... Smile Tongue Big smile

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Part-16…Kumud screams:noooooooo
K throws the glass on the screen.
K catches his collar:then what I do?I shud enjoy seeing my husband with sum other girl?
Tears fall down from G's eyes:kumud,what u saw is not the truth
K:shut up.don't try 2 fool me anymore.i'd a doubt earlier itself.but I thot its my misunderstanding.but now everything is conformed.u chreated on ne garv
G feels unbearable:shut up kumud
G raises his arm 2 slap her.but sujal holds his arm:why r u slapping her?what did she do 4 that?how can a wife tolerate wen her husband cheated on her
G & Kashish r shocked. G:that means u also..
S:I'm not a fool 2 believe u wen u say its not true
Kash:sujal,tell me,do u think I've cheated on u?
S slaps Kash.G-Kash r shocked.
Kash:u slapped me?
S:I'm a traditional Punjabi.i cant smile seeing my wife on a rockstar's chest
G shouts:hold ur tongue
S:shut up.kashish was crazy of u.but I thot its only a craze 4 a rockstar.but she crossed her limit.kashish,u don't hav 2 cum 2 my house.u stay here with garv
Kash & G r shocked. K:yes,garv,u can liv happily with ur beloved.i wont stay here even 4 a moment.i'm going back 2 punjab
S:I'l arrange flight 4 u kumud.till then u can stay in my house
S-kumud r abt 2 leave.
G:kumud..believe me.listen 2 my heart.u can feel the truth..our luv..
K weeps:I cant hear ur heartbeats.bcpz u don't hav a heart.u've a rock instead of a heart.i heart only the music beats coming from tht rock.that's the biggest mistake I made
Kash holds S's hand:don't leave my hand & go
S pushes her.Kash falls on G's chest.S is irritated.S-K go.
All the 4 cry.

Garv goes near the crying kashish G:whats the use of crying kashish?we shud prove our innocence
K:but how cud they suspect us?how much I loved sujalt.but still..
G is upset:I also luv kumud very much.but..
G wipes his tears. G:but who sent that video?
K:I'm also confused.who wants our life 2 b destroyed?
G:we've 2 find out that.then only we can prove our innocence

G phones kumud.K:why did u call me?I don't want 2 hear ur voice
G:plz listen 2 me.i'l prove our innocence.i'l find out who is behind this;the person who send the cd
K keeps the ph down.G is upset.

K is weeping.sujal:
u luk very upset
K:u also    S:bcoz our problem is same
K bursts into tears:why this happened with us?we loved our spouse very much
S keeps his hand on her shoulder:sumtimes it happens with human beings.don't cry.
K cries & keeps her head on S's shoulder:a friend like u is my strength
They cud hear sum1 clapping.They luk 4 the person & r shocked
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Posted: 19 July 2006 at 11:07pm | IP Logged
jasmine dear toooooooooooooooooooo goodddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddd.... Clap but a sadddddddddddddddddd part tooooo.... Cry i don't like kumud & sujal's character......GOD they are sooooooooooo...........they don't even have belief in their irritating could that be... Dead
me sure jab sujal aur kumud ko sachayi ka patah chalega tho they will feel soo damn guilty....& even me want to know their reaction.... Big smile tho ab me thinking who is the person who is clapping fron behind when sujal & kumud are confused....Confused hmm...i hope all the misunderstandings between the four are solved soon... Big smile
u please continue soon... Big smile

Edited by sun_423 - 19 July 2006 at 11:08pm
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Posted: 20 July 2006 at 2:25am | IP Logged
i feel bad 4 garv n kash......poor dem...dey spouses shud ve atleast given em a sinlge chance 2 speak.....hope dey get baq together soon...
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Posted: 20 July 2006 at 5:10am | IP Logged
jasmine plz continue soon me very eager to know what happens next..... Big smile
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Posted: 20 July 2006 at 12:22pm | IP Logged
Part-17…Garv was clapping:wow!very nice scene
Sujal:what do u mean?
Kashish cums from G's back:I'l tell u.we cud see u both enjoying each other's company
S:what do u mean kashish?
Ka:u fought with me & is enjoying with kumud?
Kumud loses control:enuf kanan.its more than enuf.u both made us upset.sujal gave me shelter & comfort.he's really gr8 as a friend
G:enuf need of this drama.we were shocked 2 see u guys suspecting us.we r too foolish 2 search 4 the person who tried 2 destroy us.we were wondering..we don't hav enemies.then who Can do such a cheap thing with we realized who did it 2 us.u both did it
Ku shouts:Garv!why shud we do it?
H:no need of acting.since u both were madly in luv,u wanted 2 get rid of u planned this cd 2 avoid us
S shouts:Garv!
Kash:whats the need of shouting at garv.we never thot that u both r the real cheaters.i'm ashamed 2 tell u that I used 2 luv u
G:we cant carry the burden anymore.lets get separated from each other.the only solution is divorce
S & Ku r stunned. S:ok
Kash thinks:wen garv told abt divorce sujal agreed without 2nd thots.he hates me that much.its all bcoz of kumud.u'l never get peace kumud

Their divorce takes place.All r depressed.They cant face each other.all the eyes r full of tears.They think of their jaha

Garv is upset. Kash:u were the one who used 2 giv me strength.but now u seem 2 b very weak.
G:sumtimes wen luv is missing,our strength gets lost
K becomes upset:its true.whatever we've,without luv life is nothing.but still we've 2 u need 2 get rid of ur past.
G:I don't think its possible
K was confident:its possible

Edited by jasminerahul - 20 July 2006 at 11:16pm
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Posted: 21 July 2006 at 3:56am | IP Logged
jasmine dear a very very very coolllllllll part.................... Clap but me very damn sad because sujal kashish , garv kumud have got separated.......... Cry dear please unite sujal kashish , garv kumud soon in the present....i can't see them staying separate & crying for each other...& me know you will surely start solving their misunderstandings soon........ Wink dear waise it is very sad that sujal kashish are divorced & even garv kumud are divorced.... Cry me just thinking what will these four do the day simon's truth is out...sinom ki tho baand bajegi.....baand bajayenge sujal aur garv aur barathi honge kashish aur kumud... LOL
please continue as soon as possible dear........ Big smile

Edited by sun_423 - 21 July 2006 at 4:00am

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