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Posted: 23 July 2006 at 11:21am | IP Logged
Part-19…Kashish:garv,do u no what u r saying?
G:yes.we'd a bitter past.but it'l b foolish 2 think of sum1 who betrayed us & cry thru out.
G keeps his arm on K's shoulder:we both r happy with each other.then why don't we liv each other?
Tears fall down from her eyes & hugs him.
They spent romantic moments with each other.song:tauba{chalte chalte}

Garv-kashish's wedding takes place in a grand way.they both sing & dance.sujal-kumud r really hurt 2 see it on tv.
G-kash's 1st nite.
G:it's a sweet revenge on kumud who thot I cant liv without her
Kash:sujal played with my feelings.but I'm sure that my life with u wil b extremely wonderful
They both smile & hug.

Kumud is crying.sujal is near her.
K:tho I was angry with garv,I really wanted him 2 cum back 2 me.but now everything is over.kashish entered his life
S:kashish had already entered his life.now they just got married.that's the only difference.while they were with us,their mind was sumwhere else.
K:yes   S:why shud we waste our time by thinking over sum stupid cheaters?
K:u r right
K wipes her tears.

Months passed.Kumud is in her house at Punjab.S cums there.it was a surprise.
K:sujal?what a pleasant surprise.u r so busy.then also..
S:4 sum matters,however busy we r we've 2 leave everything
K wonders:4 that what happened specially?
S:nothing special happened.but I want it 2 happen.that's why I came here
K:I did'nt get
S:wen u were here,I really felt lonely.i need sum1 in my life 2 share everything.then I realized that that special person shud b u.i don't hav any doubt abt it.what I crave is 4 ur presense.
K is shocked.
S:kumud,wil u cum 2 my life with pleasure?
K is confused. S:u can take ur own time 2 think.i'l b there in my hose.i'm not going soon 2 mumbai.
S goes.
Gayatri cums near K:what's the matter beti?
K:maa..sujal proposed 2 me
G is shocked.slowly she smiles.
G:whats wrong with that?
K:maa..but..     G:r u still thinking abt the person who betrayed u?
K:never.i've 4gotten my past
G:then what makes u hesitate 2 accept this proposal?
K:I dunno    G:u both r very nice.but unfortunately destiny played with ur life & had lots of pain.but destiny wants u both 2 b happy.thats why sujal felt like marrying u.why don't u marry him & liv happiily instead of thinking of the dark past?
K:u r right maa.i'l marry sujal & show garv how happy I'm
G smiles.

K goes 2 Sujal's house.S is tensed abt K's decision. K:I've decided
S:what?   K:I'm willing 2 marry u
S is happy.

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Posted: 25 July 2006 at 12:06am | IP Logged
nice part.....gr8 goin... Big smile
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Part-20..sujal-kumud's wedding takes place in Punjab.
1st nite.S cums.K is nervous.
S:no need of getting tense
K:suujal…S:I said I need u in my life,not as a wife.but as a friend.but since we r a boy & a girl,if we stay 2gether in the same house,ppl wil see us in a diff way.that's why I decided 2 marry u
K is wondered.
S:but I really wish if I cud luv u.bcoz luv is essential in one's life
K is stunned.
K thinks:do I really crave 4 luv?I dunno

S:I'm thinking 2 go back 2 switzerland
K:no plz sujal
S:then u want 2 stay in this place which gave only worries
K:no.i think we shud go 2 another state.that's enuf

S tells aftersumtime:I thot about ur suggestion.its gud.we'l go 2 delhi
K smiles:delhi is a nice place

Many months passed.sujal-kumud r gud friends.
K thinks:I'm so happy with sujal.wen garv betrayed me,I thot my life is over.i lost my breath.but sujal gave me a breath.now I feel peace has cum back 2 me.its only bcoz of him.am I falling in luv?

K is sitting outside near fire.but its very cold.she's shivering.S cums near her & covers her with a blanket.K & S luk at each other 4 sumtime.
K thinks:now I realize that I've feelings 4 sujal

Next day K thinks:now I cant shut up my feelings.i'l tell him that I luv him.but how?
K is tensed while she goes 2 S.she shivers.
S:I've brought a gift 2 u
K is surprised.S gives it.
K goes 2 her room with thrill.K:what wil b the gift?
She opens the cover.it's a doll.K feels awkward:sujal gave me a doll?is it the present every girl longs 4?seeing the gift,I 4got 2 make a frank confession too.i simply wasted my time.
K is so angry that she throws the doll tightly on the florr.The doll starts making sound:I luv u
K is surprised:that means sujal presented this as a part of his confession of luv?
K takes the doll from the floor & kisses it:sorry
K runs out of the room.S is tensed 2 luk at K.K smiles.S is relieved.K runs 2 his arms.

Flashback is over
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Posted: 28 July 2006 at 12:16pm | IP Logged
Part-21..


After the trip,Garv-kashish,sujal-kumud go back 2 mumbai.

Kumud is seen upset. Sujal:what happened kumud?
K:we both hated mumbai.but finally we reached mumbai after sum yrs.
S:what 2 do?4 businees success we'd 2 cum here.but I promise u that we wont hav any worries like b4
K smiles:ur promise is enuf 4 me

Kumud's ph rings:hi kumud
K:hi.but sorry I cant recognize u
She: I wil tell later who I'm.i want 2 see u & sujal 2gether
K:but why?without telling who u r..
She:plz.i'l tell everything wen u guys cum.i'l giv my address
She tells her address.

Sujal cums. K:2day a lady had called.i dunno who she is.but her voice was familiar.she wanted 2 see us.so she gave her address
S:why does she want 2 see us?
K:that I cant understand
S:unknown calls cum 4 a business family.don't mind
K:but this is not such a call.i think we shud go & meet her
S:why?it's a waste of time,my job..
K:plz   N:ok

Garv keeps the ph down:nonsense!
Kashish cums:whats the matter?u r so irritated
G:a stupid call.1 lady
K:ur fan?
G:mayb.she wants 2 see us.so she invited us 2 her house.she gave her address too
K:so lets go
G:r u mad?fans usually cum 2 see us.but now we've 2 go there?nonsense
K:what if she's in a condition that prevents from cuming here?
G:anyways,I'm not interested
K:plz garv.we'l go.i like enjoying our stardom.mayb she wants 2 giv us a treat.that mayb the reason why she called us home
G:but.. K:no excuse.we'l go
G:ok,but I 4got her address
K:Oh!u r disgusting.try 2 remember
G:ya,now I remember
K smiles.

Garv-kashish enter the house.they r shocked 2 see sujal-kumud there.
S:u guys r here?kumud,did'nt I tell u that cuming here is waste of time.i cud've done sum satisfying work in this time
Kashish:r u fooling us?sorry garv,I only forced u 2 cum here.now I realize my mistake.i think these guys only called us here 2 show their small house
S is angry:shut up.this is not our house.we r very rich tho we r not rockstars like u 2.u thot only rock stars hav gud house?u r wrong
G:enuf,kashish,we'l go
G-kash start walking out.1 lady's voice:plz don't go
They turn back & is shocked
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Posted: 31 July 2006 at 2:53am | IP Logged
Part-22….Kashish:simon!
Garv:I just cant belive its u
Simon is in wheelchair.a maid is near her
S:I only called u guys here.so plz don't fight abt it
Kash:how cum u like this?
S:I'm punished 4 my bad deeds
G:what?
S:yes.kumud has heard my voice manytimes over the ph.wen u garv & kashish met in the restaurant,I informed kumud that u r 2gether
All r shocked. Kumud:that was u?
S:yes.while garv & kashish were celebrating holi,I mixed sleeping pills with bang.so they fell asleep without knowing anything.i took its video & sent it 2 u & that caused misunderstandings btw u guys & led 2 ur separation
All r shocked.
S:belive me,garv-kumud as well as sujal-kashish haven't cheated each other.its me who cheated on u
They r stunned.all r silent.tears fall from their eyes.
S bursts into tears:I did like this 2 gain garv.
Again every1 in shock.
S:I used 2 luv him since college.but he married kumud.so I broke their relation thru sujal-kashish.i won in that.but again I failed.garv married kashish.i wanted 2 break that relation too.but I was punished by a heavy accident.i was unconscious 4 more than 1month.I was saved.but I lost my legs as well as my loved ones.i wanted 2 inform u guys the truth atleast now.otherwise god wil never 4giv me.
All r stunned.Kumud screams:why did u do this?
Kumud runs out crying.S cries.Sujal does'nt no what 2 do.bcoz on 1 side kumud has gone out with tears.on other side kashish is standing still with tears.Slowly Suj goes out near Kumud.K is crying like anything.Su is trying 2 control his tears.
Ku:we were wrong sujal
S is silent.

Kashish luks at Garv.G is silent. K:Garv!
G is not moving. K:Garv!
Suddenly G bursts into tears.K also cries along with him. G:no one can 4giv us

S is weeping seeing this.

Suj & Kumud at home.S:whats the use of crying like this?I think now what we shud do is 2 apologize
K:but simply apologizing wont heal the wounds caused by us
S is speechless.

Both the cuples reach the same place.garv-kumud & sujal-kashish luk at each other with tears.G-S & Ku-kash hug each other with tears.
Dead leaves r flying over there.
G-kash go 2 1 side while Su-ku 2 the opposite side.they hav pain inside the mind.they both turn back.song:tu jahaan…{salam namaste}
The souls of sujal & kashish cum out from their bodies & hug wile the same thing happened btw garv & kumud.

Garv-kashish r shopping.G chooses a cream sari. Kash:not this.u no sujal selects the most wonderful dresses
Suddenly K is aware of what she's telling:sorry,this is enuf
G:no.u r rite.only sujal can choose properly
K is dull:lets go.i don't feel like shopping
G-kash r shocked 2 see sujal-kumud there.They hav painful smile.
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Part-22….Kashish:simon!
Garv:I just cant belive its u
Simon is in wheelchair.a maid is near her
S:I only called u guys here.so plz don't fight abt it
Kash:how cum u like this?
S:I'm punished 4 my bad deeds
G:what?
S:yes.kumud has heard my voice manytimes over the ph.wen u garv & kashish met in the restaurant,I informed kumud that u r 2gether
All r shocked. Kumud:that was u?
S:yes.while garv & kashish were celebrating holi,I mixed sleeping pills with bang.so they fell asleep without knowing anything.i took its video & sent it 2 u & that caused misunderstandings btw u guys & led 2 ur separation
All r shocked.
S:belive me,garv-kumud as well as sujal-kashish haven't cheated each other.its me who cheated on u
They r stunned.all r silent.tears fall from their eyes.
S bursts into tears:I did like this 2 gain garv.
Again every1 in shock.
S:I used 2 luv him since college.but he married kumud.so I broke their relation thru sujal-kashish.i won in that.but again I failed.garv married kashish.i wanted 2 break that relation too.but I was punished by a heavy accident.i was unconscious 4 more than 1month.I was saved.but I lost my legs as well as my loved ones.i wanted 2 inform u guys the truth atleast now.otherwise god wil never 4giv me.
All r stunned.Kumud screams:why did u do this?
Kumud runs out crying.S cries.Sujal does'nt no what 2 do.bcoz on 1 side kumud has gone out with tears.on other side kashish is standing still with tears.Slowly Suj goes out near Kumud.K is crying like anything.Su is trying 2 control his tears.
Ku:we were wrong sujal
S is silent.

Kashish luks at Garv.G is silent. K:Garv!
G is not moving. K:Garv!
Suddenly G bursts into tears.K also cries along with him. G:no one can 4giv us

S is weeping seeing this.

Suj & Kumud at home.S:whats the use of crying like this?I think now what we shud do is 2 apologize
K:but simply apologizing wont heal the wounds caused by us
S is speechless.

Both the cuples reach the same place.garv-kumud & sujal-kashish luk at each other with tears.G-S & Ku-kash hug each other with tears.
Dead leaves r flying over there.
G-kash go 2 1 side while Su-ku 2 the opposite side.they hav pain inside the mind.they both turn back.song:tu jahaan…{salam namaste}
The souls of sujal & kashish cum out from their bodies & hug wile the same thing happened btw garv & kumud.

Garv-kashish r shopping.G chooses a cream sari. Kash:not this.u no sujal selects the most wonderful dresses
Suddenly K is aware of what she's telling:sorry,this is enuf
G:no.u r rite.only sujal can choose properly
K is dull:lets go.i don't feel like shopping
G-kash r shocked 2 see sujal-kumud there.They hav painful smile.

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