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Fanaa-Garv,Kumud,sujal,Kashish (Page 7)

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jasmine dear a very nice part...this is very very intresting..... Clap so it is simon behind everything , she is the crook......uski tho main..........i seriously want to kick her.... Angry hey but how can sujal & kumud misunderstand kashish & garv's friendship.. Cry afterall even they are friends right.. this is very bad on kumud & sujal's part..they don't have belief in their partners........ Dead
anyway the part was good..... Big smile
please continue soon.... Smile Tongue Big smile


Edited by sun_423 - 16 July 2006 at 12:30am
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Part-13…Kumud:Garv!
Garv-kashish r shocked 2 see Sujal-Kumud.
G:u both here?
K:u did'nt expect us here?
G:no,u were sleepy
Sujal:we both were tensed abt ur absense & u guys r here?
K thinks:whATS Happening btw garv & kashish?why r they alone here?
G:kashish was very upset after fighting with sujal.i was comforting her.plz 4giv her sujal
Kashish is weeping. S:if I'm still angry with her,I wud'nt hav cum here
Kash smiles & runs 2 his arms.S-K go.
Kumud:we'l go home garv
G-K go.
Simon who was watching this is irritated:my plan did'nt work out?

S-K in the car. S:why did u tell abt our fight 2 garv?
K:he's my best friend.so I thot I've 2 share my feelings with him
S:riendship is gud.but that does'nt mean that u've 2 tell him whats happening in our house.i don't like garv interfering in my life.who is he 2 tell me 2 4giv u?u r my wife & I no what 2 do with u
K is shocked at S's reaction.

G-K in the car. K:what did kashish tell u?
G:she was very upset abt sujal's behaviour.he fights with her 4 nothing.its bcoz of the tensions he has abt his job.so I comforted her
K:2 comfort her this much,she's not a kid
G:kumud..but..
K:how did u meet kashish?u fought with me & kashish fought with sujal.so u both went 2gether 2 the restaurant 2 get rid of us?
G cant belive K's reaction:why r u talking like this?why ur tone is changed?
K:u feel so.nothing like that
G thinks:sumthing is wrong with her

Sujal is going 4 business tour. Kashish:is it necessary 2 go?
S:what nonsense r u asking?this is my job.how can I avoid it?
K is dull:holi is near.u r not there with me.so I was upset.that's it
NS:plz try 2 understand the situation
K:how long can I adjust?like every girl,I also want my husband 2 b with me 4 every celebration of life
S:Husband-wife relation is not only 4 happiness & celebration.but also 2 share worries.this may b a hard situation 4 us.but we've 2 share it & liv
K:kumud is so lucky.garv is there with her always eventho he's a busy celebrity
S:enuf kashish.don't compare with me 2 garv
S goes.K thinks:sujal has changed.always angry

Kashish phones garv:I called u 2 invite u & kumud 4 our holi party
G:but we've another holi party.but don't worry we'l find time 2 cum 4 ur party
K smiles:thanx

Holi party.G-K r playing with colors.G thinks:kashish's holi party
G:cum kumud,we've 2 go 4 another holi party,kashish's
K is dull:how can we go there since our party is going on.i don't want 2 go
G:ok,but I'm going
G runs.K is dull
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Posted: 16 July 2006 at 12:00pm | IP Logged
nice fanfic!
i think all the characters r responsible for the split loL!
cant wait for the next part!
cont soon!
i never knew u started another fancfic!
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jasmine dear a very good part... Clap but u know what i don't like kumud & sujal's character..they doubt their beloved they don't have bharosa on their pyaar..how bad is that... Dead
frankly speaking sujal is so damn rude to kashish he has no time for her.. Angry bechari kashish... Cry
last but not the least i want to kick simon jisne saari misunderstandings create ki........ Angry
please garv kumud , sujal kashish ko jaldi se paas lekar aao... Big smile
please continue soon...me will be waiting... Big smile    


Edited by sun_423 - 16 July 2006 at 10:43pm
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jasmine plz continue soon.. Big smile

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