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Fanaa-Garv,Kumud,sujal,Kashish (Page 6)

jasminerahul IF-Sizzlerz

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MysticRiver IF-Addictz

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jasmine dear first of all me very sorry that i did not comment on your story all these days it is just that life has become a bit hectic... sorry once again.... Cry i hope you understand.......... Big smile Smile Tongue Big smile Smile Tongue Big smile Smile Tongue Big smile Smile Tongue Big smile now as for the story is concerned it was totally rocking like all  your  other stories........ Clap i enjoyed reading the parts posted uptil now.. they were really very nice...keep up the good work........... Clap
i hope sujal , kashish aur garv , kumud ke beech joh bhi differences hain  ghalatfaimiyaan  hain  woh jald se solve ho jaye & all get back to their original partners.... kyunke  aaj  bhi  juda  hoke  bhi  woh  log  ek  dusare  ko  chahthe  hain  aur  ek dusare  ke  baare  mein  hi  sochthe  hain....Wink please  get  sujal & kashish together  &  garv & kumud together...... Wink
from now on me will comment regularly... you please continue soon..i'll be waiting............ Big smile

Edited by sun_423 - 14 July 2006 at 5:09am
jasminerahul IF-Sizzlerz

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Garv-kumud became really close 2 sujal-kashish.
S-K also settled in India.

Kumud is sleeping.Garv sits close 2 her & whispers 2 her ears:cum on get up.why r u sleeping in this time?we'l go out & hav dinner
K:I'm I cant cum
G is irritated:u r becoming a real middleclass Punjabi.that's why wenver I call u,u r telling sum stupid reasons 2 back out
K is shocked at G's reaction.She is upset.
G is about 2 go.
K:where r u going?
G:4 dinner.u thot I'l sacrifice my interests 4 u?never
G goes.K is upset:what happened 2 garv?

G goes 2 the restaurant.there he was shocked 2 see kashish sitting alone.G goes there:kashish
K:hi garv.where is kumud?
G:she did'nt cum.sujal?
K is speechless.
K wipes her tears. G:kashish?
K:sujal shouted at me
G:4 what?
K:he's a real villager tho he lived 4 so many yrs in Switzerland.he thinks only of himself.he sees only his work,not a wife,I thirsted 4 his presense.but he does'nt care abt my happiness.he is thinking how 2 make his business successful.he is always busy.he is hardly seen at I called him 2 cum with me 2 hav dinner.but he refused.i opened my heart 2 show the terrible feelings I've bcoz of he shouted at I get out of the house 2 cum here 4 peace
G thinks:like sujal hurt kashish,kumud hurt me

Kumud is worried as G has'nt returned back:its so late.where is garv?
She calls sujal:I'm kumud.did garv cum there?
S:no   K is tensed:then where he'l b
S:even I'm upset.Kashish has'nt cum back
K:what?both garv & kashish r not with us?what does it mean?
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jasminerahul IF-Sizzlerz

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jasmine dear this story of your's fanaa   ab iske baare mein what can i tell..... it is very coolllllllllllllllllllllllllll , goodddd , nice.... i liked reading it very much.. you keep up the good work...... Clap
this story is very intresting & different from all your other stories...... Clap dear me have a request in this story you write   more about kumud & garv   Cry but please write about sujal kashish also.... Big smile
waise dear me waiting for the time when all the misunderstandings between the four of them will be sorted out & they   will start coming closer to each other.............. me will be very happy if their misunderstandings start getting solved........ Wink
now   you please continue waiting eagerly.......... Big smile      

Edited by sun_423 - 15 July 2006 at 2:59am
jasminerahul IF-Sizzlerz

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Part-12…There was a girl who was watching Garv-kashish in the restaurant.she has an evil smile:wow!what a sight!
She goes near them normally as if she does'nt no anything
GArv:don't worry married life,problems happen.don't take it serious.this is normal btw husband & wife.sujal is short tempered.but he is a very nice man.he loves u very much
Kashish cries:I no that.i luv sujal.
G:I'm ur best friend no?
K:yes   G:then u shud'nt cry
G wipes K's tears.
Suddenly they see that girl.
G:I've seen u sumwhere
K:this is simon.our collegemate
G:oh!sorry I 4got ur face
Simon thinks:u 4got my face.but I can never 4get ur face
S:its ok.every1 tells that I've changed a lot,so no 1 can recognize me

sujal cums 2 kumud's house.K:did u no anything?
S:no,I tried 2 contact kashish.but her mobile is switched off
K:same with garv's mobile too

Simon phones Kumud's house:is it kumud?
K:yes.who is speaking?
S:that's not imp now.i no that u r tensed about ur hubby's absense.i can help u
K:how?u no where he is?
K talks 2 S. K:sujal,cum with me
They both go 2 the restaurant.

Garv tells kash:u shud'nt fight with sujal.u shud b calm.make him happy as he'l having tensions abt his job
K:yes garv.u r such a nice friend
They both hug.sujal-kumud who reach there r shocked 2 see it


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