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Fanaa-Garv,Kumud,sujal,Kashish (Page 2)

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jasmine dear sorry could not comment for all these days......your new story is very nice & intresting..keep up the good work...Clapab ke liye bas itna chota comment post kar rahi hoon but me will comment later in detail....SmileBig smileTongue u plz continue soon....SmileBig smileTongue
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Part-3….Sujal-kumud enter the flight.Wen they were busy talking,Garv-kashish they did'nt see each other.Both the cuples enjoy talking.
In the airport,also they walk close 2 each other.but they did'nt see each other.

Sujal-kumud go out.
K:wow!paris is so beautiful
S:that's why I brought u here

Garv-kashish go out.K:I never thot paris is such a beautiful place
G:but I new that pairs is beautiful.that's why I brought u here.bcoz since paris is beautiful,it needs only beautiful girls like u
K smiles:garv…u…
G smiles:I'm serious ok
K smiles.They both laugh.
K:why don't we go 2 the church?

Suddenly a flashback scene cums into Garv's mind.
Garv-kumud in goa.K in a shortskirt & short top.G is also in shorts without short.
G:u luk so hot
K:garvvvvvv.stop it
G:I'm serious yaar.tell,how do I luk in this dress?
K:I feel that u hav no dress.shirtless.a very short bottom
G is shy.
K:but still…
G is eager 2 hear:still…I no what u r going 2 say,still I'm hot & handsome
K:oh really?
G:I gave u such a wonderful compliment & u r not giving me any compliment
K:so u gave me a compliment 2 hear compliment from me?
K:so u were simply telling that I'm hot?
G:ya    K:so u did'nt feel that I'm hot?
G pulls her close 2 him:u r very pretty
K smiles.
Both of them play in beach water.

They wear proper dress.K:we'l go 2 church.i heard that goa's church is very powerful
G:as u wish
They smile & go 2 church & pray
G:what did u pray?
K holds his hand:I prayed 2 bring us 2gether always.our relationship IS ETERNAL.NO ONE CAN BREAK IT

G thinks:but we broke.why each & everything reminds me of kumud?
G:no need of going 2 irritates reminds me of a person whom I hate
Kashish:but plz cum with me 4 my sake

They go 2 church.sujal-kumud also reach there.K thinks:its in a church that me & garv promised that we'l always remain 2gether.but…
K wipes her tears.

After the prayer,garv-kashish,sujal-kumud see each other

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kewllllll story.....its goin gr888...gud job jasmine...keep it up
jasminerahul IF-Sizzlerz

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Part4…They r shocked.
Kumud thinks:after a long time…
Garv thinks:why did kumud cum b4 me after so much of time?
Sujal thinks:time passed,but the faces r not changed
Kashish thinks:sujal & kumud in the same place..
Both the cuples go from there without even speaking.

Garv is angry:how cum kumud & sujal here?
Ka:whats the use of getting angry?
G:then what can I do?
K:u r so angry 2 see them.u said u'l scream at kumud if u see her.but u did'nt open ur mouth wen u saw her
G is speechless.G thinks:why cud'nt I shout at her?what makes me avoid scolding her?
G:even u did'nt speak
K:I want 2 4get my past.i just want 2 ignore sujal.4 me he does'nt exist in this world
K's eyes get filled up with tears.K wipes it & thinks:I hate sujal,but still why my eyes r getting wet thinking of him?

Sujal is sitting quietly.Kumud cums near him with tears:sujal!
s luks at K:kashish with garv.i really cud'nt tolerate it
S is speechless.S thinks:what makes me think so?why shud I care whether she's with garv or not as she's already out of my life.i don't care about kashish
K thinks:there r certain things that we cant 4get however we's the truth of our life

Kumud thinks of her past.
A few yrs back..K in a village.she has worn a beautiful salwar.Long hair.Has a nose ring.She's singing & dancing: Des Rangila{Fanaa}

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