Fanaa-Garv,Kumud,sujal,Kashish (Page 14)

jasmine dear please continue soon..me waiting...

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Garv thinks:without kumud,valentine's day is nothing
Kashish thinks:4 me,valentine's day's charm is lost
Sujal thinks:now valentine's day is a waste
That guy:now its time 4 the cuples 2 dance.we've written u guys' names in a piece of paper.u can choose any paper u want.ur dance partner's name wil b written in it.u've 2 dance with that person
Each person cums 2 take the paper piece & dance with their partner.Dance song:seene{ko aap sa}
Kumud takes the paper & is shocked 2 read the name.
K:garv G is shocked.sujal-kashish smile.
Kash thinks:garv is lucky 2 get kumud as his valentine

Garv-kumud slowly cum 2gether & hold hands 2gether & dance.they r silent.G thinks:I new that u'l b my dance partner.bcoz I'vent prayed this much b4
K thinks:Garv,u dunno how happy I'm now.i'm so unlucky that I cant express my feelings

Sujal takes the paper & is surpised:Kashish
Kash,G-K r very happy.S-Kash r dancing 2gether
K thinks:I dunno what sujal is feeling now?
S:r u ok?   K:yes     K thinks:wen u r with me,I'm perfectly ok
S thinks:is kashish happy with me?pr is she longing 2 dance with garv?

All the 4 feel sad at the moment of parting.

Kumud 2 sujal at home:I feel very upset seeing garv as I no that I wont get him back.so I want 2 b away from him.so lets go back 2 switzerland
S:ok,I also feel so

S phones 2 kashish's house.Kash picks up the ph:hello
S is speechless as he's excited 2 hear her voice.   K is angry:hello,cant u hear me?
S:hello   K is surprised:sujal?
S:I called 2 inform that 2morrow me & kumud r going 2 swtizerland 4ver
K is really upset.K keeps the ph down.Garv cums:why r u upset?
K:sujal phoned.they r going 2 switzerland 4ver.i cant bear it.wen he was here,I cud atleast see him.but if goes,I wont b able 2 see him at all
K bursts into tears.G is so upset that he cant react.


Airport.garv-kashish hav cum 2 see off sujal-kumud.all the eyes r filled with tears.
S 2 kash:bye     Kash's lips cant move.
Wen kumud was abt 2 open her mouth, G:don't tell Gud-bye
K is speechless.The cuples luk at each other.song:kabhi alvida na kehna..

Suj-kumud r abt 2 enter the plane. K weeps:no sujal.i cant
S weeps.
G-kash r walking back with pain.G hears K's loud voice from back:garv!
G is surprised.K hugs him.G is so happy. K:I dunno whats there in ur mind.but I still luv u
G:even I luv u dammed
G hugs her tightly.Kash smiles & thinks:garv is so lucky that he got his luv back.but my luv…
Sum1 keeps arm on her shoulder.she was surprised 2 see S:sujal?
S:I cant go leaving u here
They both weep & hug.

They all play with kids in the airport.song:chanda{fanaa}

END

nice story...so dey r finally together......i m sooo happy 4 em....n ths was an awesome story...iwll b waitin 4 ur nxt one....keep it up....n BRAVO 4 ths awesome piece of writin...

thanx

jasmine dear ur story totally rocked all the way through from the starting to the end...           me so happy that finally sujal kashish , garv kumud are back together...yipeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
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   but me very sad that the story has ended...     please dear start a new fanfic soon , i'll be   waiting eagerly..........

Edited by sun_423 - 04 August 2006 at 12:02am

sorry cant read now but will read it & then tell u how the last part was

Yipeeeeeeeeeeee sujal kash garv kumud r 2gater fantastic story