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jasmine dear please continue soon..me waiting... Big smile
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Part-24…
Garv thinks:without kumud,valentine's day is nothing
Kashish thinks:4 me,valentine's day's charm is lost
Sujal thinks:now valentine's day is a waste
That guy:now its time 4 the cuples 2 dance.we've written u guys' names in a piece of paper.u can choose any paper u want.ur dance partner's name wil b written in it.u've 2 dance with that person
Each person cums 2 take the paper piece & dance with their partner.Dance song:seene{ko aap sa}
Kumud takes the paper & is shocked 2 read the name.
K:garv G is shocked.sujal-kashish smile.
Kash thinks:garv is lucky 2 get kumud as his valentine

Garv-kumud slowly cum 2gether & hold hands 2gether & dance.they r silent.G thinks:I new that u'l b my dance partner.bcoz I'vent prayed this much b4
K thinks:Garv,u dunno how happy I'm now.i'm so unlucky that I cant express my feelings

Sujal takes the paper & is surpised:Kashish
Kash,G-K r very happy.S-Kash r dancing 2gether
K thinks:I dunno what sujal is feeling now?
S:r u ok?   K:yes     K thinks:wen u r with me,I'm perfectly ok
S thinks:is kashish happy with me?pr is she longing 2 dance with garv?

All the 4 feel sad at the moment of parting.

Kumud 2 sujal at home:I feel very upset seeing garv as I no that I wont get him back.so I want 2 b away from him.so lets go back 2 switzerland
S:ok,I also feel so

S phones 2 kashish's house.Kash picks up the ph:hello
S is speechless as he's excited 2 hear her voice.   K is angry:hello,cant u hear me?
S:hello   K is surprised:sujal?
S:I called 2 inform that 2morrow me & kumud r going 2 swtizerland 4ver
K is really upset.K keeps the ph down.Garv cums:why r u upset?
K:sujal phoned.they r going 2 switzerland 4ver.i cant bear it.wen he was here,I cud atleast see him.but if goes,I wont b able 2 see him at all
K bursts into tears.G is so upset that he cant react.


Airport.garv-kashish hav cum 2 see off sujal-kumud.all the eyes r filled with tears.
S 2 kash:bye     Kash's lips cant move.
Wen kumud was abt 2 open her mouth, G:don't tell Gud-bye
K is speechless.The cuples luk at each other.song:kabhi alvida na kehna..

Suj-kumud r abt 2 enter the plane. K weeps:no sujal.i cant
S weeps.
G-kash r walking back with pain.G hears K's loud voice from back:garv!
G is surprised.K hugs him.G is so happy. K:I dunno whats there in ur mind.but I still luv u
G:even I luv u dammed
G hugs her tightly.Kash smiles & thinks:garv is so lucky that he got his luv back.but my luv…
Sum1 keeps arm on her shoulder.she was surprised 2 see S:sujal?
S:I cant go leaving u here
They both weep & hug.

They all play with kids in the airport.song:chanda{fanaa}

END
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Posted: 03 August 2006 at 3:15pm | IP Logged
nice story...so dey r finally together......i m sooo happy 4 em....n ths was an awesome story...iwll b waitin 4 ur nxt one....keep it up....n BRAVO 4 ths awesome piece of writin... Clap
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thanx
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Posted: 03 August 2006 at 11:53pm | IP Logged
jasmine dear ur story totally rocked all the way through from the starting to the end... Thumbs Up   Thumbs Up   Thumbs Up   Thumbs Up me so happy that finally sujal kashish , garv kumud are back together...yipeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
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Clap   but me very sad that the story has ended... Cry    please dear start a new fanfic soon , i'll be   waiting eagerly.......... Big smile


Edited by sun_423 - 04 August 2006 at 12:02am
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Posted: 04 August 2006 at 1:31pm | IP Logged
sorry cant read now but will read it & then tell u how the last part was
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Yipeeeeeeeeeeee sujal kash garv kumud r 2gater Smile fantastic story Clap

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