Fanaa-Garv,Kumud,sujal,Kashish - Page 2

da gul chosen z prob kumud.....nice story....gr8 goin

Part-6…Garv:kumud
Kumud is surprised:thanx a lot
Her eyes r full of tears.
G:now u r selected.then also tears…
K:it's the tears of happiness
G smiles:O I c.i got tensed
K smiles.

G-K start practicing the song:fanaa{humko deewana kar gaye}
G:kumud,u r better than I expected
K becomes happy:thanx
G:I'm sure that the show wud b rocking.but this is not enuf 4 a hit show.u shud'nt b like this 4 that
K's face is dull.
G:I dud'nt say that 2 make u upset.but it's a fact that celebrities like us shud hav sum special make over.i mean ur dressing style shud b changed
K:otherwise my song cant b enjoyed by any1?
G:I did'nt mean that.but since we r performing on stage 4 others,we need it.the shiw wil b more attractive.it demands it.i hope u can understand that
K is speechless.
G:u did'nt tell anything
K:I'm not that kind of a girl who dresses badly
All other members laugh.
Another girl of their gang:this is the problem with the middleclass girls of Indian village
K:whats wrong of being a village girl of India?since u r brought up in states u dunno its value.but I'm prowd of that.however famous we become,we shud'nt 4get our culture
K goes.G follows:kumud
K did'nt listen.G holds her hand.K stares at him.G leaves her hand.
G:I did'nt mean 2 hurt u.i did'nt ask u 2 4get our culture.i just ask u 2 b more attractive
K:I cant wear the revealing dresses that others wear
G:did I ask u 2 wear those kinds of dresses?
K:but u meant that
G:I did'nt mean that.i no u'l b uncomfortable with it.u can wear only the kind of salwars that u wear now?cant u try 2 wear sum modern salwars,skirts,jeans that r not revealing?
K is speechless.G:plz co-operate.i promise u that I won't make u luk vulgar b4 others
K luks deeply at G

jas mazaa aagaya. keep it up yaar/ 😉

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Part-7….The show's time has cum.Garv luks 4 kumud
G:where is kumud?
1 girl:no idea
G:how can u all b irresponsible?u all shud've enquired that
She:irresponsible is not us,but ur jodi kumud.u've made the biggest mistake by choosing that stupid middleclass girl as ur jodi.the show's time has cum.but kumud is not seen.ppl r shouting 4 u.go garv.perform without ur fav jodi.i hope u've realized the mistake & wil choose another girl as ur jodi
G does'nt speak anything & goes 2 stage.He starts performing:fanaa{humko deewana}
Suddenly he hears a female voice & turns back.he cud'nt belive his eyes.it was kumud.she has worn a costly Laacha.she was really glamorous.G becomes happy.they both sing 2gether.
They perform suraj hua..{KKKG}it was very intimate.G-K cud'nt take off their eyes from each other eventho it got over.Wen the audience's claps become stronger,they become conscious & move from each other.

The show is a big hit.G enters the make up room where K is alone.
K:whats the matter?
G:thanx
K:4 what?
G:4 considering my suggestion
K:no need of thanx.i did it 4 our show.how do I luk in this dress?I'm I ok?
G:u luk really beautiful
K:thanx
G:kumud..
K:anything else?
G:ya K:tell    G:2morrow there wil b a party 2 celebrate our success.if u cum,I'l b happy.wont u cum?
K:yes,how cum I not cum wen u call
G smiles.   K:I mean..this is our success.so I've 2 b there no
G smiles.

Part-8….Party.Kumud has worn a modern orange salwar.
Garv smiles;u luk very pretty
K:thanx
All r dancing.song:fanaa{Yuva}
G:wil u dance with me?
K:sorry garv,I cant
G is dull:why?u don't like dancing with me?
K:not bcoz of that.i don't relate myself 2 this kind of a dance
G:but plz dance with me.just 4 me
K:but I dunno this dance
G:its very easy.i'l teach u
G holds her hand.G-K luk at each other
G holds her tightly & dances.they cant take off their eyes from each other.
G thinks:I've becum so close 2 kumud
K thinks:whats happening 2 me?


K enters a hall.there G is there.
K:why did u call me here?
G:luk at the room carefully
K luks.The room is dark.only candle lite
G:I've arranged candle nite dinner
K is stunned:but why?
G:that I'l tell u
G-K sit.A holds her arm.K did'nt move.
G:I luv u
K is shocked.
G:I dunno what made me think u r mine.but I'm sure that destiny wants us 2 b 2gether.that's why it gave u a place in my heart.now tell kumud,do u luv me?
K smiles.G sings holding her around:Chand Sifarish{fanaa}.K smiles.


G-K marry.It became a sensational news as it's the union of a famous pair.G-K sing:seene{koi aap sa}

K is sitting as a shy bride on the bed.G sits near her.
G:like our fans wanted we united in real life
K smiles.G's fingers go thru her face:I was longing 4 this moment
He hugs her.they 4get themselves.

Part-9……Garv-kumud in rain.
K opens the umbrella.G folds it.
K:what did u do?its raining heavily
G:so what?enjoy rain
K:garv..r u mad?
G:luk at the rain properly.its so romantic.it's the perfect atmosphere 2 hav romance
K luks at the rain. G:now what do u feel?
K luks at G deeply.G asks softly:is'nt it romantic?
K is shy:yes
G stands close 2 her & hugs her tightly.


Garv-kumud go 2 switzerland 4 honeymoon.
It was a snowy day.K's eyes r on the snow fall.G's eyes r on her.hE hugs her tightly from back.then puts snow on her body.she felt cool & romantic.G's arm touches her face & hands.it was a special feeling 4 her.her face expressions were really sensual.They both hug each other.it was passionate.They spent sum romantic moments there.song: Mere Haath Mein{fanaa}

They go 4 shopping.K is luking 4 dresses.K:here the dresses according 2 my taste r not there
G:its not our country.that's why the dresses found here luk strange.u check carefully,let me luk in the perfume section
K:ok
G goes.
K hears sum1 saying:how much 4 this dress?
K:this voice is so familiar
She turns back & is surprised:Sujal!
S is surprised:kumud!what a pleasant surprise!how cum u b here?
K:I've cum here with my husband garv
S:the rockstar garv?
K:yes   S:my wife tells about him.he's my wife's old classmate.my wife had told me that garv married his co-star.i never thot its u.bcoz I'm very busy
K smiles:u r staying here.right?
S:ya.but we r planning 2 settle in India.its my wife's wish.i too wish so.where is ur husband?
K:he has gone 2 sum other section
S:my wife too.i've cum here 2 buy a dress 4 her.she likes my selection very much
K smiles:ok,I'l luk 4 my husband    S:ok
K searches 4 the section G went 2.She is shocked 2 see G hugging a modern girl who has worn short top & pant.G sees K.G smiles & goes 2 K:kumud,cum
G takes her 2 that girl:this is my pretty wife kumud
She:who does'nt no kumud?
G:kumud..this is kashish,my old classmate.we r meeting after a long period
Kashish:but I've always been a viewer of ur shows on tv.but it very difficult 2 get our channels here
Kumud smiles & thinks:I mistook garv
G:cum 2 india & join us
Kas:sure    G:kashish was the rock star in our college
Kash:but I reached no where.but garv became the real star
G-K smile. S:where is ur husband?
She ses her husband cuming there. Kash:that's my hubby
Kumud is surprised

nice part....sorry i cudn't comment since such a long time.....its goin gr8....keep it up...

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Part:10..Kumud:sujal is ur husband kashish?
Kashish:u no my husband?
Sujal reaches there:what a co-incidence!kumud,u met my wife kashish?
Kash:how do u both no each other?
S:we both r from the same place.but wen I left Punjab,there was no contact
Garv:wow!
Kash:sujal..meet ur friend kumud's husband & my friend garv
S:oh sorry,I did'nt notice u.nice 2 meet u
G:same here
S:but I'm very sorry 2 tell that I'vent seen ur shows on tv as I was always busy.2day I got sum free time.that's why we came here.anyways we both r going 2 india soon
G:it's a pleasure
S:kashish,I've a bought a dress 4 u.see whether u liked it
Kash sees the dress.its red frock:so sweet.sujal,u r always the best in selection
S:thanx 4 the compliment dear
G-K smile.
Kash:cum with us,we'l show u the beautiful places of Switzerland

They all go 4 outing.They r in an icecream parlour
Sujal winks at kashish   Kash:no
Garv:what secret?
Kumud:secrets r secrets
S:u r right
Kash:whats the secret in it?nothing like that.sujal likes me feeding him with my hand like I like the dresses he chooses
S is shy.G-K smile. G:then u guys carry on
G-K smile.K feeds S.

S-K enjoys their outing singing:Dekho Na{fanaa}

Kumud is out of her past dreams.K thinks:we were so happy.THEN HOW DID PROBLEMS ARISE?