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Posted: 04 July 2006 at 6:20am | IP Logged
Part-1…Sujal & kumud in a moving boat.K has kept her
                             face on S's shoulder.
                             S:I dunno why but I feel that this boat is going 2 sink
                             K is not reacting.
                             S:don't u feel anything?
                             K :no,bcoz u r there with me.so I'm not scared
                             S smiles.they both hold their hands 2gether.
                             The boat is about 2 sink.K screams.They both fall down
                             into the water.K is drowning.
                             S swims in the river & saves K.K is unconscious.S gives
                             her breath with his breath.K opens her eyes slowly.
                             K :sujal..once wen my life was sinking,u saved me &
                             gave me a new life.now wen I was drowning & dying,u gave
                             me breath.u r gr8
                             S keeps her finger on K's lips:now don't say anything
                             more
                             K weeps.S sings:kuch na kaho…{1942 luv story}K smiles.S
                             carries her in his arms.it rains.
                             K closes her eyes & thinks:why this rain is bringing me
                             pain?why is it reminding me of my past that I want 2
                             4get?
                             A scene cums 2 her mind:Garv & kumud standing close 2
                             each other in rain.
                             Tears cum out of her eyes.S did'nt notice it

                             That night a big music show was taking place.The rock
                             star Garv is on the stage.Ppl r jumping with joy.
                             The n cums Kashish 2 the stage.she has short hair.Has worn
                             orange salwar kameez with a wonderful duppatta.
                             The y both perform 2gether:rabba..{mujhe kuch kehna hai}
                             K umud switches on the tv.she sees it's live telecast
                             going on on tv.she gets angry & switches it ff & throws
                             the remote control.it falls on sujal's feet.
                             K :I'm sorry sujal
                             S :suddenly what happned 2 b angry?
                             K :I wanted 2 ignore sum ppl in my life.but they r on tv
                             2 irritate me
                             S :who?
                             K :cant u guess?
                             S :garv?
                             K :not only garv.kashish too
                             S is shocked.a flashback scene:Kashish feeding sujal
                             with her hand.they both r laughing.
                             S wipes his tears. K:however we try 2 move far away from
                             the m,why r they coming close 2 us?
                             S is speechless.

                             CAN U PREDICT WHAT HAD HAPPENED IN THEIR PAST LIFE?

Edited by jasminerahul - 04 July 2006 at 11:35pm

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Posted: 04 July 2006 at 11:42am | IP Logged
Your new fan fic is rocking Big smile
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Posted: 04 July 2006 at 11:57am | IP Logged
awesome start!!!!continue soon!! Clap
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Posted: 04 July 2006 at 12:03pm | IP Logged
awesome!!!
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Posted: 04 July 2006 at 12:31pm | IP Logged
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Posted: 04 July 2006 at 3:01pm | IP Logged
nice story jasmine...i guess kumudgarv n kashsujal used 2 like each oder...but sumthin happened...will b lookin fwd 2 da nxt part...
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Posted: 04 July 2006 at 11:34pm | IP Logged
Part-2…Every1 enjoys Garv-kashish's show.

Garv-kashish in the room.
G:as we expected our show became a big hit
K smiles:its bcoz of u.if garv is there,wi the show b a flop?
G:but ur contribution cant b ignored
K:what did I do garv?
G:ur performance was rocking & u r my inspiration.if u were not there,the rock star garv wud've finished long ago.wen I was completely lost,u were the one who brought me back 2 life
K:wen I was suffering,u saved me.otherwise I wud've gone mad.
K's eyes burn with anger:sujal..u thot u can break me.but u cud'nt.bcoz angad is there with me.he gives me all the happiness of this world
G is angry:Kumud,u thot without u,I'm nothing.but wen kashish came 2 me,I became more lucky.while ur career shattered,kashish's career graph gone up
K:why r we wasting our time thinking abt our past.cant we think of our present & future
G smiles:u r right.we shud celebrate the success of our show
K:ofcourse.i'll arrange everything 4 the party


Party…Garv luks hot in his outfit.Kashish has worn a shining white tight frock.
All r enjoying the party.
G:guys,we r celebrating the success of our show
Press media ppl r after them.
1 guy with the mike:whats the secret of ur success Mr.Garv Sachdev?
G keeps kash 2 him:no doubt,its my beautiful wife Kashish.if she was'nt there with me,I dunno what wud've been my fate.she brought luck 2 life

Sujal-kumud who r watching this live on tv get irritated.Ku thinks:his wife kashish is his success?Kashish,taking my position,u r sitting happily with garv.what kind of a girl u r!u cheated on me as well as sujal
S thinks:snatching kashish from me,u r enjoying luck?this happiness won't last long

Garv:lets dance & rock guys
All the cuples r on the dance floor.G & K hold hands 2gether & dance.song:koi aap sa….

S & Ku get irritated seeing their romantic dance.
Ku thinks:garv is nobody 2 me.i hate him.then also why I'm feeling uncomfortable seeing him with kashish?
S thinks:Kashish,how cud u go away from me?still I cant bear u with any other guy.i just neglect u.but why u r coming b4 me always?

Sujal cums & holds kumud from back.K:whats this sujal?
S laughs:see hat gift I've brought 4 u
N shows tickets:tickets 4 our trip 2 paris
K:wow!u r so sweet sujal
S:now only u realized that I'm sweet
K smiles:no,I new it b4 itself.that's why I caught ur hand & entered into ur life
S smiles.

Garv tells kash:I'm not satisfied with our celebration
K:why,u did'nt like the party?
G:yes.but my happiness is so much that one party is not enuf.so lets go 2 paris 2 hav joy
K smiles:garv,u r a real celebrity who wants 2 enjoy life 2 the fullest
G:life is 2 enjoy kashish.kumud did'nt allow 2 enjoy.so I dumped her
K becomes dull   G:now I enjoy,bcoz u r there with me
K smiles

Edited by jasminerahul - 05 July 2006 at 12:19pm
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hi jasmine nice beginning to the story. Pls continue soon

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