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Kesha_H.

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Posted: 26 October 2012 at 2:03pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by kdsubs1

Originally posted by swaggerchick16

@kat (is tht ur name?) its awesome finally got off my lazy butt and decided to read it, It was awesome I love the relationship Arti shares with Aman, its really nice to hav sum1 looking out 4 Arti but this woman Sneha is really confusing she argued with Aman's dad to let Arti stay with them but never showed her any love... OMG u named Arti's dad Shiv I have a friend named Siv and he is a real pervert DeadLOL now lemme go read Kadeen's story LOL


Yes my name is Kat. Sneha explains herself in part 2.

And thanks - I know you are busy with your exams.


ahhh just got my results for another exam I did really good I'm on a rollDancing

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Posted: 26 October 2012 at 2:09pm | IP Logged
I really feel sory for Sneha. Her emotions came thru in your story. Fabulous writing.

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Posted: 26 October 2012 at 4:57pm | IP Logged
Didi...sigh... First of all thank you for the poem. Secondly, you just spared me that promised paragraph of part 1 by answering my Sneha questionsLOLDancing.  Now I have to reread this part, read it in splits because of the office, but I did read most of Sneha's confession the first time around, and it was CryCry (Kadeen speechless?LOL), and I say take a bow DidiClapClapClap


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Posted: 26 October 2012 at 5:55pm | IP Logged
great job

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Posted: 26 October 2012 at 5:59pm | IP Logged
I fell in love with this story dear, wonderful. 

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Mishti13

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Posted: 26 October 2012 at 7:50pm | IP Logged
nice update 

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Posted: 26 October 2012 at 9:05pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by kdsubs1

Originally posted by MSN_Vanny

Kat, would you believe me if I said I let a few tears escaped whilst reading about Sneha's dilemma? Because I honestly did. OMG! Every choking emotion resonated! CryCry And that says alot because only Danielle Steel and Nicholas Sparks ever made me cry whilst reading!!! 

I love the way you made her a strong person! She's what I would call a phenomenal woman! ClapClap

Aman's realisation was much much needed! I'm glad you took care of that early and not made a big deal out of it!

And that last speech she gave to Aman was as heart-wrenching as her marriage life! CryCry

I hold high respect for the Aman in your story! ClapClap

Fantastic!!! Clap


Vanny - if it didn't churn your emotions I am not doing my job right. From your writings I suspect you are like me - a tough nut to crack when it comes to emotional moments in fiction. Since this piece led to a few escaped tears - that's a big compliment. Thank you!

You're welcome! Big smile

Yes, I totally dislike anything that goes beyond real and OTT! And what you write, made me feel that all this can be experienced by someone! 

And are doing an exceptional job! Clap

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Posted: 27 October 2012 at 12:11am | IP Logged
loved the update
amazing...

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