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Posted: 26 October 2012 at 3:18am | IP Logged
Beautifully written dude plus fabulously portrayed Clap
I never thought to b enjoying it this much Tongue

Naureen Big smile

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Posted: 26 October 2012 at 4:08am | IP Logged
That was painful Kat,you portrayed Sneha's dilemma wonderfully.
It was a whole piece of overwhelming emotions
Fabulous Part!Clap

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Posted: 26 October 2012 at 5:43am | IP Logged
lovely update yaar snena wanted amaan to marry arti wow thx for pm me

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Posted: 26 October 2012 at 8:20am | IP Logged
lovely part you did  it was emotional too sneha wanted to marrt aman with arti i dont have words to say how it was waiting for next 

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Posted: 26 October 2012 at 10:41am | IP Logged
Originally posted by MSN_Vanny

Kat, would you believe me if I said I let a few tears escaped whilst reading about Sneha's dilemma? Because I honestly did. OMG! Every choking emotion resonated! CryCry And that says alot because only Danielle Steel and Nicholas Sparks ever made me cry whilst reading!!! 

I love the way you made her a strong person! She's what I would call a phenomenal woman! ClapClap

Aman's realisation was much much needed! I'm glad you took care of that early and not made a big deal out of it!

And that last speech she gave to Aman was as heart-wrenching as her marriage life! CryCry

I hold high respect for the Aman in your story! ClapClap

Fantastic!!! Clap


Vanny - if it didn't churn your emotions I am not doing my job right. From your writings I suspect you are like me - a tough nut to crack when it comes to emotional moments in fiction. Since this piece led to a few escaped tears - that's a big compliment. Thank you!

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Posted: 26 October 2012 at 10:44am | IP Logged
Originally posted by MelodiousDreams

You've done it again, Kat.
 
Immediate reaction after a first reading: stunned and overwhelmed...
 
This is such a beautifully-written story, and this part left me speechless.
 
*Reserved*


Thank you Borna. This story is going to be more sombre than my other fictions. Its a bit emotionally overwhelming for me too - and why I chickened out from writing it for so long. So, if it overwhelms you, at least I am able to bring the emotions out through the story.

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Posted: 26 October 2012 at 10:46am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Deepti1808

@Kat: WOW !!!!!
How brilliantly you captured Sneha's emotions.
I felt sorry for her.
I could understand her being distant from Aarti.

Only yesterday i was telling someone how i could not think about Aarti and Aman in that way but when you said it in the story above even that made sense.

Great work Loved it


Deepti - thanks. Sneha has had a tough life, but I hope she came through as a positive character despite her way of treating Arti - a character most of us are in love with.

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Posted: 26 October 2012 at 2:01pm | IP Logged
I'm too lazy I'll read it ummm tomoro or l8aLOL

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