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Posted: 24 October 2012 at 8:49am | IP Logged
Originally posted by taahir004

Its an amazing FF at first I thought is there jealosy broering between Aman ,Neha and Aarti then I read further I thought ok for now Aman is an guardian angel and Neha just feels insecure .
Aarti's parents and Aman's father were business partners and yet it took Amans father so long to accept Aarti
anyways sorry I'm going on ...
 
I really enjoyed reading your FF its sad yet firm but very captivating
do update soon its awesome


Thank you Taahir. Aman-Arti relationship is more complex. Mere jealousy doesn't enter the picture here. I am hoping I can successfully convey their relationship the way I see it - since its key to the rest of the story.

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Posted: 24 October 2012 at 8:51am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Pearl_27

Hey!!! Kat!

Wow!!! ClapThat truly was heart wrenchingCry,I love this story and this update was Fabulous and you now I am always hungry for Arya scenes.Embarrassed


Eagerly waiting to see what happens to Neha-Aman's relationship.


Thank you Pearl-girl. Not sure about ArYa scenes here - its not their story. Though you will get your ArYa scene in a seperate OS - its almost ready Tongue.

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Posted: 24 October 2012 at 8:53am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Deepti1808

Loved it!!!

Its nice to know Aarti knew her parents for atleast the first 5 years of her life. I had assumed you will make her an abandoned child or something.
I liked how you showed the depth of Aarti-Aman realtionship
Lot of things to look forward to in the second part.

What happened to Aarti's real father??
Why the distance between Sneha-Aarti kept???

Nice !!



Thank you Deepti. And thank you for the request - which gave me the idea to build on Arti's childhood. Otherwise I would have dealt with it in 1-2 paras at most.

I don't think Arti's dad will appear again, so will answer your question here: he couldn't deal with the death of his wife and committed suicide in his grief.

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Posted: 24 October 2012 at 8:59am | IP Logged
@Maha, Gafulu, Lulujjj, Ruchshah, Luv_lvndr, Naureen, Dona86, Zetter, Rasheeda, Hansa, Kesha, Miti, Sunrio80, Shashi1984 - Thank you for visiting and reading the story. I am glad you liked it. I loved the Aman-Arti relationship in the show too, and their friendship is the crux of this story.


@Lulujjj, Elanpremi - its nice to know others in the forum liked Aman as well and are interested in his story.

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Posted: 24 October 2012 at 9:17am | IP Logged
*Wipes brow* Thank God they aren't related. Now I can sit back and glee. Still have to finish the rest of my commentary. Will do in a few. Right now updating a vocab list on my FF, I think my words were a tad complicated.LOL

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Posted: 24 October 2012 at 10:36am | IP Logged
BEAUTIFUL FF! LOOKING FORWARD TO THE NEXT UPDATE.

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Posted: 24 October 2012 at 2:38pm | IP Logged
Hey Kat, you're welcome. 

Thanks for claryifying with Kadeen that they aren't related! I was curious about that when she mentioned it.

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Posted: 24 October 2012 at 4:32pm | IP Logged
I didn't even read the story yet and yuo're thanking me??? ok I'll take itLOL

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