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PV FF: Soul Connection - PART 5 NOW UP (Pg 19) (Page 12)

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Posted: 31 October 2012 at 7:27pm | IP Logged
nice update
thanks for pm
continue soon

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Posted: 31 October 2012 at 8:34pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by kdsubs1

@Vanny - thanks dear. This part was dicey - very critical for character development, but not too much story progression. I am glad it still came through as relevant to you. And yes, our "Mouni baba' finally had to open up. I wonder what all he said to Arti...had to be pretty special for her to recall them through her coma-haze.


Welcome! Big smile

Yes, character development is critical for me to understand the story because when I read stories based primarily on characters(like yours) I need to know about the characters to get the full feel of the emotions being portrayed! Clap

So true, it makes me wonder what exactly Yash has revealed to Aarti during her subconsciousness! Wink

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Posted: 01 November 2012 at 12:00am | IP Logged
@Kat: This has been such a beautiful read. ClapGosh, you are such a flowy writer...smooth, yet intriguing. Not once do the senses shift from the direction the writing takes the reader. I love the characterization of Aman...he is  so genuine and so open with his own emotions. Superb!! I really loved it. 

Edited by InduG64 - 01 November 2012 at 10:00am

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Posted: 01 November 2012 at 12:06am | IP Logged
wow so touching emotional part awesome too i dont know what to say it so wow thx for pm me waiting for next Clap

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Posted: 01 November 2012 at 5:28am | IP Logged
Beautiful update. Loved it.

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Posted: 01 November 2012 at 5:44am | IP Logged
Lovely and emotional part dear  Embarrassed 
 
Arthi's relation with sneha has a lot of motherly affection Clap

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Posted: 01 November 2012 at 9:01am | IP Logged
@Iqra, Mishti, Hansa, Saf, Maha - thank you! You are always so encouraging - thanks.

@Indu - Glad you liked it my friend. Its a difficult one to write - but the story won't leave me alone Confused. Thank you for reading and liking it.


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Posted: 01 November 2012 at 12:16pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by kdsubs1

@Taahir - thank you! The designing the necklace bit came from real life - I needed a way for Arti to realize what she meant to Sneha without Sneha telling her. Sneha wouldn't tell anyway - not in her character - and words wouldn't convince Arti. So the necklace bit was convenient.

@Vinu - WOW - thank you! You always take so many pains to give me your detailed feedback - thank you so much. Someday I will have to write a special story just to thank you - any requests??


Arre baap re!! That's so sweet yaar! But really M not taking any pains dear and if u call these as pains then I would to take them all the time.

After sooo many days I actually got connected to some I-F fiction writer. This was used to happen when I was active in MJHT forum. There were many writers like you who became my good friends just with their fictions/OS/SS. and now, you. SmileSmileSmile

I am expressing what I feel about your story, that's it dear. Nothing much.

And regarding my request, at present, nothing. But yeah, surely I will ask, when I want any story.

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