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--Iqra--

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Posted: 31 October 2012 at 5:14pm | IP Logged
As always, Brilliant Update! I love your writing, it is mesmerizing. Thanks for the PM! I'll be waiting for your next update! Embarrassed

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Posted: 31 October 2012 at 7:27pm | IP Logged
nice update
thanks for pm
continue soon

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Posted: 31 October 2012 at 8:34pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by kdsubs1

@Vanny - thanks dear. This part was dicey - very critical for character development, but not too much story progression. I am glad it still came through as relevant to you. And yes, our "Mouni baba' finally had to open up. I wonder what all he said to Arti...had to be pretty special for her to recall them through her coma-haze.


Welcome! Big smile

Yes, character development is critical for me to understand the story because when I read stories based primarily on characters(like yours) I need to know about the characters to get the full feel of the emotions being portrayed! Clap

So true, it makes me wonder what exactly Yash has revealed to Aarti during her subconsciousness! Wink

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Posted: 01 November 2012 at 12:00am | IP Logged
@Kat: This has been such a beautiful read. ClapGosh, you are such a flowy writer...smooth, yet intriguing. Not once do the senses shift from the direction the writing takes the reader. I love the characterization of Aman...he is  so genuine and so open with his own emotions. Superb!! I really loved it. 

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Posted: 01 November 2012 at 12:06am | IP Logged
wow so touching emotional part awesome too i dont know what to say it so wow thx for pm me waiting for next Clap

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Posted: 01 November 2012 at 5:28am | IP Logged
Beautiful update. Loved it.

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Posted: 01 November 2012 at 5:44am | IP Logged
Lovely and emotional part dear  Embarrassed 
 
Arthi's relation with sneha has a lot of motherly affection Clap

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Posted: 01 November 2012 at 9:01am | IP Logged
@Iqra, Mishti, Hansa, Saf, Maha - thank you! You are always so encouraging - thanks.

@Indu - Glad you liked it my friend. Its a difficult one to write - but the story won't leave me alone Confused. Thank you for reading and liking it.


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