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--Iqra--

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As always, Brilliant Update! I love your writing, it is mesmerizing. Thanks for the PM! I'll be waiting for your next update! Embarrassed

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Mishti13

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Posted: 31 October 2012 at 7:27pm | IP Logged

nice update

thanks for pm

continue soon

MSN_Vanny

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Posted: 31 October 2012 at 8:34pm | IP Logged

Originally posted by kdsubs1

@Vanny - thanks dear. This part was dicey - very critical for character development, but not too much story progression. I am glad it still came through as relevant to you. And yes, our "Mouni baba' finally had to open up. I wonder what all he said to Arti...had to be pretty special for her to recall them through her coma-haze.

Welcome!

Yes, character development is critical for me to understand the story because when I read stories based primarily on characters(like yours) I need to know about the characters to get the full feel of the emotions being portrayed! Clap

So true, it makes me wonder what exactly Yash has revealed to Aarti during her subconsciousness! Wink

InduG64

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@Kat: This has been such a beautiful read. Clap

Gosh, you are such a flowy writer...smooth, yet intriguing. Not once do the senses shift from the direction the writing takes the reader. I love the characterization of Aman...he is so genuine and so open with his own emotions. Superb!! I really loved it.

Edited by InduG64 - 01 November 2012 at 10:00am

pretty_h

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Posted: 01 November 2012 at 12:06am | IP Logged

wow so touching emotional part awesome too i dont know what to say it so wow thx for pm me waiting for next Clap

saf24

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Posted: 01 November 2012 at 5:28am | IP Logged

Beautiful update. Loved it.

maha9

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Posted: 01 November 2012 at 5:44am | IP Logged

Lovely and emotional part dear

Arthi's relation with sneha has a lot of motherly affection

kdsubs

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Posted: 01 November 2012 at 9:01am | IP Logged

@Iqra, Mishti, Hansa, Saf, Maha - thank you! You are always so encouraging - thanks.

@Indu - Glad you liked it my friend. Its a difficult one to write - but the story won't leave me alone Confused

. Thank you for reading and liking it.

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