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SwaRon OS : Love Rekindled (Page 5)

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Posted: 23 October 2012 at 9:28pm | IP Logged

Very well penned down
brilliant piece of writingThumbs Up

swaron rock ya ar  ClapClapClapClap

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Posted: 23 October 2012 at 9:29pm | IP Logged
Keep coming up with more of such amazing stuffBig smile
 
waiting ur next osBig smileBig smile

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Posted: 23 October 2012 at 9:30pm | IP Logged
hahaha m IF DazzlerEvil Smile

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Posted: 24 October 2012 at 12:53am | IP Logged
Swaron were lovers . . . . . Shocked
Wat a meeting Wink
To hell wid plans discussion... Love is more impt LOL
she left him . . . . . Unhappy
why she thinks that she don't deserve him D'oh
she wanted to prove the world . . . . . . Dats nyce Smile
but poor swayam . . . . . . Free me breakup ho jata h iska to ROFL
he's so sweet . . . . . He's making her dance . . . . When she's missing it Hug

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Posted: 24 October 2012 at 5:22am | IP Logged
Neeti!! Big smile
You wrote a freakingg awesome OS!!! Clap
From starting to the ending..it was picture perfectt! Thumbs Up
I can't pick one thing..whether it is
swayam asking sharon--are you really okay?
sharon breaking down and swayam cupping her face..! Embarrassed
poor sharon..her dad died Ouch
Sharon and swayam confessing Day Dreaming
Etc etc!!

Especially i lovedd the ending when swayam made her dance after soo long! Smile

Keep writing more mahn..You wrote this awesomely! Cool

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Posted: 24 October 2012 at 6:03am | IP Logged
hi neeti... Smile
it was really awesome... Smile
this one was very well penned...
two love birds meeting each other after so long,was really heart touching... Smile
loved swaron's dialogue.all total,great job bud... Thumbs Up
keep writing...

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wow awesome os neeti...Clap totally loved it...u described it brilliantly...Thumbs Up loved the way swayam understood that she is not happy...the way he asked her whether she is really happy...just wow...Embarrassed then loved their convo...sharon breaking down...n their confession...Day Dreaming after so long swayam making Sharon dance which she misses a lot...Big smile they loved each other so much n they still do so...Smile awesome piece of work...Clap n the quote in the end is totally apt for swaron...Smile

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