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Posted: 23 October 2012 at 7:27am | IP Logged
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Posted: 23 October 2012 at 7:37am | IP Logged
Edited Version :

Firstly, my heart-felt apologies for being late at editing this spot, I am really really very SorryOuch

Now, coming to this One Shot!

Neeti, Hat's Off girl, you have done a splendid job in this One Shot Story, be it the Characters, Monologues or the Concept! Clap

I liked it very much, with the different Sharon and Swayam! Wink

Wow, so now Mr. Swayam Shekhawat is Remo D'souza's Assistant! Shocked I am shocked just the way Sharon is! LOL

I really loved the way Sharon confronted her insecurities, about her guilt and the way she said probably you would have moved onApprove

You really put in a lot of hard-work to make it look realistic and easy for the readers to connect with! Clap

""What happened,sweetheart? Did I hurt u?" He asked her.

"No,no, Swayam it's just that whenever I remember dance, I feel really so bad. I always regret my mistake of leaving dance. At that time, I thought my decision was correct,but now…" She trailed off."

This is my favorite part! This is so Swayam and Sharon. Swayam the always ready to make Sharon comfortable, and Sharon, pretty much confused and unsure about herself! Embarrassed

To the end of it, I would like to say, AMAZING Work dear! I loved it! Heart

Thanks a ton for PMing it to me, and do write more stories soon, I'll be waiting for them always! LOL

Love, Nivi Hug



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Posted: 23 October 2012 at 8:40am | IP Logged
Awesome os

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Posted: 23 October 2012 at 8:45am | IP Logged
It ws an awesome os..gr8 peace of writing...it ws really a sweet os...

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Posted: 23 October 2012 at 8:47am | IP Logged
wow!

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it was simply awesome...plzz keep writing...!!!!! M speechless ryt nw..can't xpress it in wrds...!!!

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very nice os neeti
 
loved it

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