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devildiva21

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Posted: 30 January 2013 at 6:15am | IP Logged
awsum update..!!!
lvd it...!!!
ariya alone with no one to disturb them wow..!!!!WinkWink
sameer left awsum..!!!!
hope riya confesses her feeling soon..!!
cant wait fr d nxt part..!!
update soon..!!!
thx fr d pm..!!!Smile

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Posted: 30 January 2013 at 6:19am | IP Logged
Originally posted by devildiva21

awsum update..!!!
lvd it...!!!
ariya alone with no one to disturb them wow..!!!!WinkWink
sameer left awsum..!!!!
hope riya confesses her feeling soon..!!
cant wait fr d nxt part..!!
update soon..!!!
thx fr d pm..!!!Smile


thank u so much dear Smile

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Posted: 30 January 2013 at 7:27am | IP Logged
awesome update dear...

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Posted: 31 January 2013 at 6:43am | IP Logged
Excited for the update!!

Yeh dono vahin reh gaye...

ab toh romance hi bacha hai undono aur kuch kaam bhi nahin hai:) LOL

nice update

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Posted: 31 January 2013 at 8:16am | IP Logged
update soon rami warna remember na ???

slap slap slap !!!

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Posted: 31 January 2013 at 8:24am | IP Logged
Originally posted by prava55663

Excited for the update!!

Yeh dono vahin reh gaye...

ab toh romance hi bacha hai undono aur kuch kaam bhi nahin hai:) LOL

nice update


THANKS DEAR !!!

i know all r excited

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Posted: 04 February 2013 at 2:14am | IP Logged
hehehe amazing update 

Ariya met at rly station

n train gayi ...

yipee now Ariya left alone ...waiting for next

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Posted: 04 February 2013 at 5:45am | IP Logged
Hey frnds i donno that will i continue updating my ff's or not but i wanna give my best to all !!

here is CHAPTER 15 C (Last)

Arjun smile while staring on riya ...
Riya was scilent stading there with Lowered eyes .
riya : i want to leave sir ... choriye mujhe
arjun : kyun kya tumhe mera chuna pasand nahi ???
riya : mujhe jaane dijiye sir
arjun : thike hai jao ... [ he move back from her ]
she move ahead to go from station while arjun stop her saying
arjun :  lekin kahan jaogi wapis ghar !!!
riya : aap ko kya mein kahin bhi jaun ...?!
arjun : nahi mujhe to koi problem nahi hai par tumhe ho sakti hai
mera matlab hai agar wapis ghar jao gi to kya jawab dogi ?!
behtar hai agli train ka intezaar kar lo ya phir ye kehta ke mene tumhe rok liya ya train miss karwa di ...

riya lost in his words and start thinking deeply . she turn back and saw arjun
arjun also saw her back with a little hope that "maybe" she can return to my way ...
riya move her eyes down from him and move to right side and sit on a bench which was a little far from arjun ...
when arjun feel and confirm that she is not leaving A small smile touched his lips ...
Arjun go to her and sit on bench with her
when she saw him she immidiatly stand up
suddenly arjun hold her hand and get up .

he pull her to himself .
her both hands and head was on his chest ...
she pick her head and both look at eachothers eyes like this



next moment riya moved back from arjun and go far from him and stand with a wall ...
tears drop from her eyes while arjun was staring at her ...

Kaise batayein
Kyun tujhko chahe
Yaara batha na paayein
Baatein dil o ki
Dekho jo baki
Aake tujhe samjhaein
Tu jaane na aaa ...
Tu jaane na

Hmm milke bhi, hum na mile
Tumse na jaane kyun, milo ke,
Hai fasle tumse na jaane kyun
Anjaane, hai silsile
Tum se na jaane kyun, sapne hai
Palko tale tum se na jaane kyunnn'


Arjun go to her and turn her face to himself . he hold her face (both sides of cheeks ) and make her look at his eyes ...

Nigahon mein dehko
Meri jo hai bas gaya aa
Woh hai milta tumse hubahoo
Ooohhooo..


he clean her tears with his thumbs ...

Jaane teri aankhein
Kiya baatein ki vajah'
Huye tum jo dil ki aarzoo
Tum paas ho ke bhi
Tum aas ho ke bhi
Ehsaas ho ke bhi
Apne nahin aise hai


She move his hands from her cheeks
riya : Leave me alone ...
and she stand back to him

( This is just an exapmile to show my imagination and mean )

Arjun steps back ...
his hear and back touch wall

Tumse na jaane kyun, milo ke
Hai Fasle tumse na jaane kyun ooonnn'.
Tu jaane na aaa..
Tu jaane na
Tu jaane na aaa..
Tu jaane na

He close his eyes . and Remember their first meet when arjun saw riya and last meet where they break up ...
He thought in his mind !
Riya...tumhare iss behaviour ke peeche ka RaaZ to mein jaan kar rahunga ...

Sorry For any mistake if i did ...

To be continue ...

So Guys how's was the Chapter ..???
Leave your precious precious comments ...

P.S:- last on top means last part of chapter ...
and i really don't get best song for the scene ...LOL

RaMiSa


Edited by saba-ramisa - 04 February 2013 at 6:03am

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