Ariya : Hamsafar (ch 15c pg 64 ) ( 4-2-13 ) (Page 4)

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intersting concept and intro
rathore rawte bro woww yrr
loving it
cont soon
pm me

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Originally posted by sizzysehrish

intersting concept and intro
rathore rawte bro woww yrr
loving it
cont soon
pm me

thanks

Edited by saba.ali81 - 24 October 2012 at 1:13pm

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awww

that was a great concept i also want something like this

thanks for shearing

and do pm me the next update... Big smile

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Originally posted by aimen.naseer

awww Tongue

that was a great concept i also want something like this

thanks for shearing

and do pm me the next update... Big smile

hmmm...thanks for liking my concept

if you want pm then send me your buddy request i'll pm you my next update

Edited by saba.ali81 - 24 October 2012 at 1:15pm

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lol, nice, pm when u update x

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itz awsome dear plz continue

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wow its really owsom

luved it

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CHAPTER TWO

arjun and riya meet again in the office

they both was shocked watching eachother again and both's finger's point was on eachother

tum yahaan kya kar rahe ho ask arjun

tum toh aise baat kar rahe ho jaise yeh office tumhara hai

ohhoo...aise jaise nahi yeh office mera hi hai

kya tumhara office said riya in a low voice

g haan yeh mera office hai yells arjun

ohhh to tum yahaan interview ke liye aayi ho say arjun.tumhe ab bhi lagta hai ke tumhe yahaan job milegi.he puch her out

dont you dare touch me yells riya

get out from here right now yells arjun

chillaye mat yells riya agar aapko jab nahi dena toh mat dijiye but iss tarha aap meri besati nahi kar sakte.then she leave...

riya was going angrily and hurriedly suddenly she get crack-up with arjun's bro sameer

when he see riya the remember that riya is that girl who fight with arjun few hour's ago

i'm sorry meri ghalti hai mene dekha nahi say riya

aap kuch parishaan lag rahi hain can i help you ask sameer

riya : nahi it's ok wo yahaan interview ke liye aayi thi but

sameer cut and say but sir ne job di nahi right

riya :yes wo...

sameer toh aap samjhein ke yeh job aapko mill gayi

arjun come there and say but bhai aap isse job kaise

sameer arjun tumhe apne bhai pe bharosa nahi hai kya

arjun nahi bhai aisi baat nahi hum isse yeh job nahi de sakte

sameer hmm...toh phir isse koi aur job de dete hain

arjun :koi aur matlab

sameer matlab ke ...tumhari secretary ka job

riya : secretary aur wo bhi in ki kabhi nahi

arjun aur mujhe bhi tumhe apni secretary banane ka koi shoq nahi

sameer stop it plz phir se jhagra aakhir tum dono ki problem kya hai

arjun angrily leave from there

sameer dekho kya naam hai tumhara

riya

haan riya tumhe job chahiye aur humein ek secretary agar tum yeh job karogi toh tumhara bhi faida hoga aur hamara bhi...baaqi tumhari marzi he turn to leave

suddenly she call him sir...mein yeh job karungi

he turn back and say good toh aaj hi balke abhi se join karlo

riya : ok sir mein aaj hi se yeh job karti hoon.

short update

Note:guys how was the chapter plz tell me by comment's and likes

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Edited by saba-ramisa - 29 November 2012 at 5:15am

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