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Ariya : Hamsafar (ch 15c pg 64 ) ( 4-2-13 ) (Page 4)

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Posted: 24 October 2012 at 1:01pm | IP Logged
intersting concept and intro
rathore rawte bro  woww yrr
loving it
cont soon
pm me

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Posted: 24 October 2012 at 1:12pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by sizzysehrish

intersting concept and intro
rathore rawte bro  woww yrr
loving it
cont soon
pm me
 
 
thanks Big smile


Edited by saba.ali81 - 24 October 2012 at 1:13pm

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Posted: 24 October 2012 at 1:12pm | IP Logged
awww Tongue
that was a great concept i also want something like this 
thanks for shearing
and do pm me the next update...Big smile

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Posted: 24 October 2012 at 1:15pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by aimen.naseer

awww Tongue
that was a great concept i also want something like this 
thanks for shearing
and do pm me the next update...Big smile
 
hmmm...thanks for liking my concept
if you want pm then send me your buddy request i'll pm you my next updateBig smile


Edited by saba.ali81 - 24 October 2012 at 1:15pm

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Posted: 24 October 2012 at 1:45pm | IP Logged
lol, nice, pm when u update x

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Posted: 24 October 2012 at 9:28pm | IP Logged
itz awsome dear plz continue

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Posted: 25 October 2012 at 3:57am | IP Logged
wow its really owsom
luved it

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Posted: 25 October 2012 at 8:00am | IP Logged
CHAPTER TWO
arjun and riya meet again in the office
they both was shocked watching eachother again and both's finger's point was on eachother
tum yahaan kya kar rahe ho ask arjun

tum toh aise baat kar rahe ho jaise yeh office tumhara hai
ohhoo...aise jaise nahi yeh office mera hi hai
 kya tumhara office said riya in a low voice
g haan yeh mera office hai yells arjun

ohhh to tum yahaan interview ke liye aayi ho say arjun.tumhe ab bhi lagta hai ke tumhe yahaan job milegi.he puch her out
dont you dare touch me yells riya
get out from here right now yells arjun

chillaye mat yells riya agar aapko jab nahi dena toh mat dijiye but iss tarha aap meri besati nahi kar sakte.then she leave...
riya was going angrily and hurriedly suddenly she get crack-up with arjun's bro sameer

when he see riya the remember that riya is that girl who fight with arjun few hour's ago
i'm sorry meri ghalti hai mene dekha nahi say riya
aap kuch parishaan lag rahi hain can i help you ask sameer
riya : nahi it's ok wo yahaan interview ke liye aayi thi but 
sameer cut and say but sir ne job di nahi right 
riya :yes wo...

sameer toh aap samjhein ke yeh job aapko mill gayi 
arjun come there and say but bhai aap isse job kaise 
sameer arjun tumhe apne bhai pe bharosa nahi hai kya
arjun nahi bhai aisi baat nahi hum isse yeh job nahi de sakte 
sameer hmm...toh phir isse koi aur job de dete hain
arjun :koi aur matlab

sameer matlab ke ...tumhari secretary ka job
riya : secretary aur wo bhi in ki kabhi nahi
arjun aur mujhe bhi tumhe apni secretary banane ka koi shoq nahi 
sameer stop it plz phir se jhagra aakhir tum dono ki problem kya hai

arjun angrily leave from there
sameer dekho kya naam hai tumhara
riya 
haan riya tumhe job chahiye aur humein ek secretary agar tum yeh job karogi toh tumhara bhi faida hoga aur hamara bhi...baaqi tumhari marzi he turn to leave

suddenly she call him sir...mein yeh job karungi
he turn back and say good toh aaj hi balke abhi se join karlo 
riya : ok sir mein aaj hi se yeh job karti hoon.

short update

Note:guys how was the chapter plz tell me by comment's and likes

saba-ramisa




Edited by saba-ramisa - 29 November 2012 at 5:15am

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