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Posted: 21 October 2012 at 11:39am | IP Logged
Originally posted by haruhi26

Originally posted by kaveriw2008

Originally posted by 123pritha

Originally posted by kaveriw2008

hey even this is the only think that can make this if cheer up in this sad mood right now
where are our ff,ss os writers???

frankly speaking they all are crying or beating someone...
actually i'm crying and badmouthing the 4lions and their productionsCry
can understand that but why don't u continue today's episode where they left  with recovering some how as bacteria is not in water and it takes 30 min to act 
and arjun scared for riya
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Posted: 21 October 2012 at 11:40am | IP Logged
Originally posted by 123pritha

Originally posted by haruhi26

Originally posted by kaveriw2008

Originally posted by 123pritha

Originally posted by kaveriw2008

hey even this is the only think that can make this if cheer up in this sad mood right now
where are our ff,ss os writers???

frankly speaking they all are crying or beating someone...
actually i'm crying and badmouthing the 4lions and their productionsCry
can understand that but why don't u continue today's episode where they left  with recovering some how as bacteria is not in water and it takes 30 min to act 
and arjun scared for riya
becaue i've just read in a post about Sana really quiting.. Look for the post with News from ShaleenCry
i give upCry

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Posted: 21 October 2012 at 11:44am | IP Logged
JAB TAK HAIN JAAN...

Riya...Riya...tumhe kuch nahi hoga...
Arjun screamed as he raced the SUV to the nearest hospital...Shree and CHotu were 

continuously shaking her up...but she was slipping away...Shree kept checking the pulse 

which was dropping by the minute...

Shree shouted...Riya...[stammering]Sir, iski pulse down ho rahi hai...

Hearing this, Arjun steered the vehicle with one hand and turned towards Riya..."tum ek 

brave officer...tum aisi himmat nahi haar sakthi Riya..."


Rathod: Arjun ghaadi tez chalaavo...Riya ko kuch nahi hoga...

Arjun: hum kuch nahi hone denge...tumhe abhi bohat se missions poore karne hai Riya...


[They reach the nearest hospital...by which time, that expert doctor and other paramedics 

have reached the same place...

Arjun held onto her hand till the stretcher rolled into the ICU...She opened her eyes 

once before Arjun's hand left hers...the last thing she saw was his face which was 

assuring her that nothing would happen...Doctors said nothing positve as they rushed 

in...There was no medicine for this life taking bacteria...No one even thought 

about such a situation...So there was no hope...]

The logical side of Arjun knew what was going to come...but his heart couldnt give up on 

her...Riya...the only girl who had managed to touch his heart once again...the girl 

who made brought back his lost smile...
how many times had he insulted her...asked her to go away from ETF...but now, at this 

moment, the very thought that she might not come back to life again was giving him an 

unknown pain...an unknown fear was gripping him...What would he do without her??

Shree, Chotu and Rathod were restlessly pacing outside the ICU...


Arjun walked towards a direction which seemed to be pulling him towards it...He stopped before the Ganapathi idol which was kept at the hospital's hallway...

For the first time in his life, he bowed his head with sincere dedication and trust in the God who could do away with all the evils...though he failed to admit it then, it was the same supreme power who had saved him once from the bullet which was to pierce his heart...So now, he bowed and prayed for RIya's life...Roshni's words had come true..."ek din tum bhi maanoge"...
Now he was ready to accept the presence of God for Riya...

He joined his hands, bowed his head low, closed his eyes and prayed "Riya ko kuch nahi hone dena bhagwaan... 

The bells rang loudly and snapped him out...The doctors came out of the ICU and called for the team...




I am not writing the end yaar...but it would be positive...

excuse any errors...i wrote it in such a hurry...and also my mind is not working properly after today's episode...


Edited by vidya.anand - 21 October 2012 at 11:53am

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Posted: 21 October 2012 at 11:51am | IP Logged
wow dear

i wish ki tum ne jo bola ya jo likha vahi sach ho


ganuji please vidya ne jo likha vahi sach ho...

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Posted: 21 October 2012 at 11:52am | IP Logged
Originally posted by haruhi26

Originally posted by 123pritha

Originally posted by haruhi26

Originally posted by kaveriw2008

Originally posted by 123pritha

Originally posted by kaveriw2008

hey even this is the only think that can make this if cheer up in this sad mood right now
where are our ff,ss os writers???

frankly speaking they all are crying or beating someone...
actually i'm crying and badmouthing the 4lions and their productionsCry
can understand that but why don't u continue today's episode where they left  with recovering some how as bacteria is not in water and it takes 30 min to act 
and arjun scared for riya
becaue i've just read in a post about Sana really quiting.. Look for the post with News from ShaleenCry
i give upCry

hey dear please give link na...
fasiha_rocks Senior Member
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Posted: 21 October 2012 at 11:55am | IP Logged
please some one write a beautiful ff
which shows riya is fine but needs some rest
plzzz
i am crying from 9'o clock

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Posted: 21 October 2012 at 11:58am | IP Logged
I honestly don't have the heart to write anything right now! I mean this is what i was dreading the most!! I knew it! they would just put a freakin end to her character!!

Fingers crossed.. Hopelessly hoping that Riya's not dead.. I really wish for a miracle right now!

I know its fiction, but you get attached to it sooo much that it hurts in the end!

I have to learn a lesson now, 'ITS FICTION!', GET A LIFE'..

Anyway, might write something; either today or tomorrow surely! Smile

Just to keep Riya alive amongst us! Cry

P.S.: That's a really cruel ending to a budding love story! Cry

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