Virman ff-Main hoon hi nahi iss duniya ki PART 13 - Page 7

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: kulsum_virman

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Part 5


Viraat saw maanvi fully drenched lost in her deep thoughts. He ran towards her and cupped her face in his hands.
"Maanvi, maanvi tum kahan thi. Tumhe pata bhi hai ghar mein hum sab kitne pareshaan the. Kahan se arahi ho? Kuch toh bolo maanvi?"
He kept on asking her but she was in a state of shock that she did not uttered a single word.
"Damn maanvi. Mere sawaloon ka jawab do. Mein tumse kuch poch raha hu."

He shook her by her shoulders but no answer. Viraat started to become scared as in morning she was saying such things and now she returned home in miserable condition.
He went to his car and took his jacket to give it to her. Maanvi was still standing in the same position looking in one direction, and this did not got unnoticed by him. He spreaded his jacket on her and held her to take her home.
In Vadhera house
Jeevika was sitting worried about Maanvi while Vanshika, Chachi and Viren were busy consoling her.
"Kahan gai hai yeh larki. Mein itni pareshaan hu per ise kya farak parhta hai"
"Jeevika tum fikar meter thora slow rakho maanvi ajai gi woh koi doodh peti bachi nahi hai keh ghar ka rasta bhol jai gi" Viren said.
"Haan jeevika dekh na tv mein dikha rahe the chandighar ki saari roads per bahut bura trafdic jam hua hai shaid issi wajah se late ho gai ho" Chachi told her.
"Per chachi maanu ke pass mobile toh hai na ek call hi kar de""Ab woh ghar aai gi toh mein use baat hi nahi karoon gi"
Meanwhile Viraat and Maanvi entered the house. Viren turned behind and saw both of them standing on the door.
"Yeh dekho agai maanvi"
Jeevika turned behind and saw her little baby sister in wet clothes and looked very disturbed. She ran to Maanvi and  hugged her tightly.
"Maanu kya hua tujhe tu itni bheg kaise gai aur itni der kahan laga di main kab se teri rah dekh rahi thi ek baar bhi apni di ko phone karne ka khayal nahi aaya maanu"
Tears started to flow from Jeevika's eyes as she had never seen Maanvi like this before not even when Jeevika was leaving the house.
"Maanu kuch toh bol. Viraat kya hua maanvi ko yeh kuch bol kyun nahi rahi"
"Bhabhi mein ne bhi is se pocha tha magar yeh kuch bata hi nahi rahi. Bus ek hi jagah dekhi ja rahi hai."
"Viraat tujhe yeh kahan mili?" Viren tried to figure out the situation.
"Bhai mein gari mein ja hi raha tha keh mein ne is ko parking mein chalte dekha toh isse andar le aaya"
"Maanvi beta tum itni bheg kaise gai?"Vanshika asked.
"Haan maanvi batao na tum toh driver ke saath apni saheli ke ghar gai thi na toh phir aise kaise"Chachi added one more question.
Viren thought about driver so he called him but he got no reply. He tried once again and this time driver picked it. He told Viren that Maanvi gave him leave so he went to his house.
"Maanu kuch toh bata dekh agar tu do minute mein nahi boli gi toh main tujhse kabhi baat nahi karo gi"Jeevika threatened her but gained no response.
"Maanvi pagal mat bano kahan thi tum?Mere sawal ka jawab do maanvi" Viraat was getting furious.

"Maanvi" "Maanvi" "Maanvi" "Maanvi" "Maanu"
All were questioning her but she was hell.shocked by the news that doctor gave her that she was having cancer. She was unable to hear their voices. She just wanted some peace and silence where she could digest her disease.
Maanvi started to walk away, away from all. At once there was a pin drop silence. No one was moving a inch fROm there places except Maanvi who wanted to get some peace. She continued her walk to her room when she heard some voice which was enough to get her back to this world, making end to her endless thoughts.
"Partner"
Maanvi turned back and looked at the owner of the voice,VIRAAT.

They shared a millisecond eye lock. After which she felt dizziness. Everyone ran towards Her but only Viraat was successful in catching her before she hits the floor. She had fainted in her partner's arms. He carried her to the sofa and placed her carefully.
"Tarun jaldi paani lao" Vanshika ordered.
Within a second he brought the water and gave to Jeevika who sprinkled it on her face. Maanvi was not responding to any thing. The family members decided to call the doctor as her condition was becoming worse.
"Inder tum doctor ko phone karo aur unhe kaho ke jaldi aai maanvi ki tabiyat kharab ho rahi hai"Daddaji ordered.
Inder called their family doctor to come home immediately but unfortunately he ws not picking up the phone.
"Daadaji woh Dr.Mannan phone nahi utha rahe aur main ne sab doctors ko phone kar lia hai jin se hamari jaan pehchaan hain per koi bhi phone nahi utha rahe. Raat bahut ho gai hai na shaid so gai hoon ge"
"Viren ji kuch karein na maanu uth nahi rahi hai mujhe bahut tension horahi hai kisi doctor ko bulay na" Jeevika was feeling very helpless  in front of her sister's condition.
"Jeevika tum fikar mat karo mujhe ek doctor ka pata hai woh yahin pass mein rehta hai main abhi uske hospital jake use le aata hoon" Viren placed her hand on her shoulder giving her assurance that maanvi will be fine.
Without wasting a second he ran to his car and drives towards the hospital, SANJEEVANI.
"Excuse me, mujhe Dr.Armaan se milna hai unhe jaldi bula de jia emergency hai..."
"Ji abhi toh woh ek surgery mein busy hai ji, aap mujhe bata de jiay kia emergency hai woh jaisi hi free hoon ge ji main unhe aap ke bare mein bata doon gi ji" Nurse at the reception told him.
"Aap samjh kyun nahi rahi hai meri saali ki tabiyat bahut kharab hai woh behosh hai aap please unhe jaldi bulai"
"Ji main ne aapko bataya na keh Dr.armaan ji ek surgery mein busy hai woh abhi nahi mil sakte ji"
"Dekhein kisi ki zindagi aur maut ka sawal hai wahan maanvi ki tabiyat kharab hai aur aap yahan mujhe bahane bata rahi hain" This time Viren voice was loud than ever. The patients were eying towards him.

"Aap zara dheere bolein ji pateints disturb horahe hain ji aur yahan bhi zindagi aur maut ka sawal hai ji"
Meanwhile Dr.Rahul was passing from the corridor. As soon he heard someone shouting he stopped and came to the reception.
"Kya hua sweety ji kuch masla hai" 
"Dr.rahul ji dekhiye na ji yeh sir kab se Dr.Armaan ko bula rahe hai"
"Dr.Armaan toh surgery kar rahe hain"
"Ji Dr.Rahul ji main tab se unhe yahi bata rahi hu per yeh hain keh maan hi nahi rahe ji aur bus yehi bole jarahe hain keh meri saali ki tabiyat kharab hai ji use doctor ki zarurat hai ji"

"Dekhein main abhi abhi OT se araha hu aur patient bahut critical hai uski jaan khatre mein hai abhi kuch ghante aur lag sakte hai surgery khatam hone mein"
Viren was listening to all this but could not understand anything as he was tensed about Maanvi's condition.
"Toh main kya karo mere ghar pe bhi unki zararut hai maanvi behosh hai aur pichle ek ghante se aankhein nahi khol rahi. MEIN NE KAHA NA MUJHE DR.ARMAAN SE MILNA HAI TOH MILNA HAI" He was losing his temper.
Dr.Rahul listen her name. He was shocked on hearing that his patient , critical patient , cancer patient , Maanvi was unconscious from an hour and here he was arguing with her relative.
"Ji dekhiye ji aahista boliye ji baki log disturb horahe hain ji" Sweety's voice made him out of his thoughts. Viren was about to say something when Rahul made him stop.
"Aap ne abhi kis ka naam lia?"
"Matlab"
"Aap ke ghar mein kis ki tabiyat kharab hai"
"Meri saali ki"
"Unka naam kia hai"
"MAANVI"
 On hearing her name he did not wanted to waste a second and told Viren that he is free now and he could go with him to check Maanvi. Viren also agreed and both started their journey to home.
"Maanvi ji yeh toh wohi hai na ji jo subah aai thi aaj ji pata nahi kya ho gaya unhe ji. Bus jaldi se theek ho jai woh ji" Sweety ji prayed for her.

ZINDAGI SE CHURA KE ZINDADIGANI BANAYA HAI TUJHE
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Posted: 11 years ago
Amazing...
Liked to read next one...
Continu soon...
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VERY NICE & EMOTIONAL UPDATEπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘
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finally u updated arrey yaar tune kitna intazaar karwaya.
aage se aisa mat karna ok
now coming to the update it was mind blowing and very emotional
everyone's concern for manvi just too good
i enjoyed the every bit of it
now eagerly waiting for the truth come out of manvi's illness
cont soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
This is beautifully written!
so emotional
Thank you for the PM
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Posted: 11 years ago
it was amazing...
continue soon...
already waiting for the next part...
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Very awesomly written...
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Awesome yaar pleasee continue sooonn..
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