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Swaron ss: without you I am incomplete..updated.. (Page 4)

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Posted: 24 October 2012 at 3:45am | IP Logged
Hey Muskaan..just like Pratik even I'm here without any PM...shud say u wrote this part really well...but last mein Swaron ka milna destined hai..and I know dat...And for dis Chapter it was GR8  but just a little tooo small...do update fast can't wait!
Karen (Maria)
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Posted: 24 October 2012 at 4:40am | IP Logged
Awesome update 
sharon's state of mind has been beautifully penned 
eagerly waiting for the next update 
longer update next tym plz 
thnx for pm


Edited by tanharockks - 24 October 2012 at 4:56am
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Posted: 24 October 2012 at 4:41am | IP Logged
So ur name is muskaan! nycc! Smile
I am here with the info of your pm! LOL

It was a very good start indeed!! Big smile
So sharon is suffering from sum disease which forced her to leave swayam! Saddd!! Ouch
The starting was very good. It was a pleasant read from sharon's pov. How she felt being alone and deprived from love.
Then her encounter with her friend cum doctor..rehan!
Poor sharon! 

But I must say you write very smoothly..not hastily..just smoothly! Star
Perfect start!! Thumbs Up

Update the next part soon! Embarrassed
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Posted: 24 October 2012 at 4:58am | IP Logged
Awesome update
Its really good to read about sharon's pov that she really love swayam but unable to confess it due to her disease
Soo rehan is sharon doc hope he tell everything to swayam about sharon's illness
waiting for next part
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Posted: 24 October 2012 at 5:15am | IP Logged
nyc update
waiting for next
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Posted: 24 October 2012 at 5:38am | IP Logged
Its Superb:-) please continue and PM me dear:-)
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Posted: 24 October 2012 at 6:37am | IP Logged
gud start...
thanks for the pm...do continue to pm me!!
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Posted: 24 October 2012 at 6:50am | IP Logged
Nice one...Please PM me next time

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