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Firstly Thanks a ton for so much encouraging comments..It took me time to think over to write it as i don't want ashar n khirad to loose the beauty n essence which we had experienced while watching it...So here it is first part of Wo Humsafar Hai...EmbarrassedPlease give honest reply..on dat i wil decide to continue it..any suggestion is most welcome Big smile

PART ONE

The Camera zoomed to huge Mansion.. Curtains got moved from window as Khirad rolled them and Sunshine directly hit his face making him wake up from his sleep..

Ashar Hussain opened his eyes with bit difficulty...n got a bit to sit on bed having support of pillows...rubbing his eyes...he saw his wife in black salwar kameez n her hairs were rolled n clipped...she had small smile on face which cleary was not reaching her eyes...He know her...He had answers of every question...n every question had answer...COZ OF HIM...He wished to change the past time...to get into their past...n mend his mistakes...But Reality hit him...as he found his daughter Hareem creeping to his chest to get rid of irritating sunshine..that past cant be lived again...

ASHAR:Good Morning...

She gave him lifeless smile...

KHIRAD:Ap fresh ho jaein mein breakfast banati hon...

Ashar noded as she left...He sighed..He dont know what he should do...He looked at their angel coz of whom they were together.He kissed her forehead affectionately...She was their lifeline...

He put pillow at his place as his daughter hugged it...he pulled off curtains so that she could continue sleeping peaceful...

He Got freshed n get ready...His clothes everything was ready at their place...He smiled at her innocence...She hadn't changed a bit...Same Caring N Loving Khirad...But the most important thing to live a life along ur soul-mate ..is the TRUST...Which was lost in their relationship...Renewal of trust is not so easy...

With Disturbing Thoughts He walked in dinning room...She laid the breakfast as soon as she had sighted him to be there...It was  all of his choice as usual...He stares at her...as she was serving him breakfast...giving him toast along butter...pouring his tea...asking for juice...

Soon Khirad realized he is not responding...she looked at him n found him staring at her trying to read her face...She quickly moved away her gaze as she realized she had stared back...

KHIRAD:Ashar Ap kuch aur lein gey??

Ashar quickly moved his gaze as he came in his senses...but he could see her blush even she had tried to hide it...But simply somethings can never change ...n His Wife n their love had same traits...

ASHAR:nahn kafi hai...Tum Nahn lo ge??

Ashar looked at her tried hard not to make their situation awkward...

KHIRAD:nahn mein harem k sath deer sey nashta kar lon ge...

Ashar nodded ... and continued his breakfast...but he was not able to concentrate except on his wife who was sitting in front of him just to company him..staring on table just...He felt her gesture so sweet...He so wanted to ask her to do breakfast...but he pushed his all wishes to some corner of heart...as he dont want his wife to be hurt...

After he had done his breakfast...he gathered his things...

ASHAR:Mein chalta hon...

But just then she got up n spoke stopping him from going..

KHIRAD:Ashar Aik min...voh..

He looked at him with a wide smile...she want to speak to him..he was feeling so much happy ...that seeing her hesitation he gave words to his feelings n impatience...

ASHAR:kia huwa ?khirad bolo na chup kuin ho gae..

Khirad looked at him n in his eyes his happiness was visible...What??he was happy just coz she spoke to him?? She shrugged her thoughts as she had to complete her sentence...

KHIRAD:Ap ko office sey dair tu nahn ho ge...

She looked at him with slight concern..which made her more lovable for him..
 
ASHAR:nahn of course not.. tum baat karo koi important baat karni hai??
KHIRAD:jee...

She nodded...Ashar looked at her as she looked down unable to look at him..

ASHAR:tu kaho na mjhey bilkul late nahn ho raha hai office mein late bhe ja sakta hon tum apni baat kaho...

Khirad looked at her...just coz she wants to speak...he is not caring about anything else...she shrugged her wifey thoughts n continued as concern mother... 

KHIRAD:voh harem ab tekh ho gae haii...

ASHAR:han tu...??

Ashar was not getting what she want to speak...

KHIRAD:Apko nahn lagta hmey uska kisi achey sey school mein admission nahn karana chahye...??

Ashar got her point n smiled as his wife who had proved herself to be best mother..

Ashar:of course mein tmsey yeh baat karney he wala tha shaam...mein..dont wory raat mein hum serch out kartey hain best school...n kal ja k dekh bhe lein gey tekh lagey ga tu kara dein gy tekh hai??

Ashar completed in serious tone...as like a concern father...Khirad felt proud ..that her daughter have the best father in world..who cares n loves her so much..

KHIRAD:Jii Shukriya...

Khirad smiled lightly lost still in her thoughts...

Her thank you...hurt him...He dont want to listen it...he hate this thank you from her ...coz it makes him feel that he is stranger for her...

Khirad could realize why he was looking with such pain at her...

ASHAR:ab mein office jaon??

He asked her observing her face...She quickly pushed off all the thoughts..

KHIRAD:jii...(He turned to go when)Ashar...(he turned n looked at his wife)...Ap ney sab ley lia na??..voh..apna wallet ..mobile..(she didnt met her eyes..)...

Ashar felt to hug her n kiss her forehead...but he had not courage even to touch her...what ever he had done with her...

ASHAR:han ley lia hai..Allah hafiz..

KHIRAD:Allah Hafiz...

she replied n stared at his back...till he get disappeared away from her eyes...She closed her eyes..as tears formed...she didnot want him to get hurt...she was disappointed with herself...

PRECAPE:

She got up from her sleep..he was not there. she perplexed..and left her place...she searched for him...n found her at last...

KHIRAD:Ashar Ap yahan kia kar rahe hain??



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Really nice. Write more.Big smile

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Aww, it was awesome..poor them they are feeling akward with eachother but its okay as they'll be fine later ;)
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Posted: 26 October 2012 at 9:52am | IP Logged
aww very beautifully written part 1 liking alottt
hope everything will be fine on them soon...

waiting for next one :D

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nice update kamoshi

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Kamoshi continue pleasec:) Its amazing! Lobed the prolougue and part 1 Embarrassed

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