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Posted: 20 October 2012 at 7:54pm | IP Logged
            Wo humsafar Hai ...


Hey guys I M kamoshi.Big smile Well i know you guys know Wo Humsafar tha...Ashar And Khirad...A couple which made us feel Love...I wil not go in more details...I just rewatch it again n again...n after it ...I am starting this SS..WELL REALLY NO HIGH EXPECTATIONS.. coz i m not gud in all dis stuff..n its really my very first. ...time on Ashar n Khirad...so plzz ignore all the mistakes...just posting a bit prolouge...its basically wil show how ashar n khirad rebound their relationship..as husband wife..n their parent hood...only one change here is noo ashar mummyy..as in my ss she died..lol...i dont know how much long i wil continue it...all depend if u guys liked...n ur suggestions n critisizim  all are welcome..


Prologue

Khirad...Merey pass tu voh alfaz he nahn hain jis sey mein apni safai pesh kar sakun...mein tmhara ghunagar hon...aur apney har jurm k aitraf karna chahta hon...
Apney ...apney meri izat k ghawai tu dey di Ashar....magar mein us kirad ko kahan sey laoon...jo kudh ko ap par nichawar karney k lea gari jati the...hamrey beech chaar saal nahn chaar sadiyan hail hain...muhabbat mari tu nahn hai...lakin khain kho zaror gae hai..mein us muhabbat ko khahn sey laoon....Agar aj mjhko mjhi sy mangein gey tu mein kahahn sey laon ge apna wajood..???

Tu tm muhbbat ko mat dhondho khirad...mein tu muhbbat k laiq he nai hon...tmhey mjhey kbhi maff ni karna chahye..tm zaror mjhsey nafart karti ho ge aur tmhey sari umer karni chahye..kuin k shaid is nafart k waja sey merey andar jalta alaoo thora kum ho sakey...hmari zindagion mein jitni judiayan aur dukh aein hain un sab ka azab laney wala mein hon..tmhey mjhey merey kisi ghuna k lea maff nai karna chahye..muhbbat karney waley meri trah safaq aur sangdil ni huwa kartey..muhabbat karney waley meri trah hargiz nahn hotey..

MJHEY samjh ni a raha hai mein kia faisla karun Ashar

tum sirf aur sirf hareem k barey mein socho...agar harem hmari zindagion mein na aye hoti tu mein hmesha hmesha k lea tumsey kudh ko bht dur le gya hota...lakin harem hmari beti hai Kirad..usey sirf aik pyar karney waley baap k zarorat ni hai...balkey bht zyada pyaar karney wali maa k bhe zarorat hai....kirad tum mjhey beshak maaf na karu lakin plzz.hareem k khatir mjhey aik baar phir Qabool kar lo...

Agar muhbbat k the tu nibhani bhe tu chahye the...yeh kis trah k muhbbat k the apney k mjhey beech rastey tanha chor k chaley gaye the...mein thak gae hon Ashar... zindagi sey lar lar k..tanha je je k ...

Mein tmhey kbhe tanha nahn chodh k jaon ga Khirad...I am Soryy...

(In Their room...Ashar n Khirad were lying on opposite corner as hareem was in their mid...Ashar n harem had slept while Khirad...was still awake...staring at her husband )

He is soory...After Four Years...Now tonight I am again in his room..on his bed...next to him...I got my dignity back...my self respect...everything might be...but love...how wil i find it...how will i trust him again...will i be able to become Khirad WIFE of ASHAR hussain...I dont know the answers...Am I Happy..??? is it really real?? or just my imagination...or a beautiful dreamm...like four years before..which i had lived with Ashar...Ashar...Mein Apki khirad ab ban bhe paon ge k nahn??? Mjhey kuch nahn pata...Zindagi ney har morh par aik naya sabaq dia hia...aik naye azmaish...Ashar...Ap phir sy Tanha tu nahn chorein gey na Mujhey...Apki khirad k muhbbat...


Just then khirad heard the voice of AZaan Calling for prayer..she wiped her tears...she leave the bed to pray...to thank Allah...To ask for HIS guidance...

Khirad was on praying mate...after getting free from dua...she turn n saw her husband...who smiled a bit at her...n she smiled back...and got up to give him place to bow in front of THE CREATOR...to ask for ...Best...for Her...

She lyed on bed...closing eyes...feeling tired...

The last she know before falling in deep sleep she felt her hand in his palm...the warmth...was known for her...!!!!!!


(not my edits credit goes to fb :P )
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Thank you for reading !!

                                                  INDEX
Part ONE
Part TWO
Part Three
Part Four
Part five
page 9


Edited by MoNayaAshiq4evr - 14 August 2014 at 1:40pm

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Posted: 20 October 2012 at 11:53pm | IP Logged
It's looks interesting..
So you're going to show Ashar and Khirad's journey towards love again?
That's really nice.
Continue yaar.

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Posted: 21 October 2012 at 2:23am | IP Logged
Api, loved your prologue! Smile
I'm in! Do pm me when you update!
Can't wait to read what will happen next!
Love
Ayesha

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Posted: 21 October 2012 at 2:26am | IP Logged
nice prologue kamoshi
 
even though i have zero knowlege about humsafar i found it interesting
 
would love to read more 
 
 

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Posted: 21 October 2012 at 9:12am | IP Logged
awww what a lovly prologue!!!!!!

am liking ittt alottt ahh i want to know whats next Plz update soon...!

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Posted: 21 October 2012 at 10:35am | IP Logged
lovely prologue kamoshi Clapvery interesting cont soonSmile

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Posted: 21 October 2012 at 5:05pm | IP Logged
Ahh. U recreated the magic Kamoshi.Day Dreaming
Ashar and Khirad are back through ur narration. Love this prolouge to the core. Do continue soon.

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Its really nice
I want to read more do PM me when u update :)

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