Posted: 20 October 2012 at 9:49am | IP Logged
Hello everyone this is Dips and i am gonna do sree ganesh of my writing skills with my very first OneShot on RishBala and im luking forward to the response.
Wanna thanx all my classmates who helped me write this OS which is quiet afflicted wid love,passion and romance.
Extremely sorry for the typos
. and the name of some maidens.
Tera nasha Mujhko Hua
"Raja bring those orchids and put them in that
silver vase, Sunita who rose petals spread them in those vase, listen everybody
everything should be perfect as instructed okay"
"Aare Madhu beta what are you doing early in the
morning? What are you preparing beta?" asked MummyJi
"Maa..you forgot huh, today is the birthday of our
superstar RK and I'm planning for his surprise birthday party" smiles.."But you
don't tell him else you know him na..."
"Han beta I won't tell him, he shall be celebrating
his birthday with his wife how can I tell him!"
"Urrm Maa I'm going okay there's lot of work to do
and plan I want it to be a special one for him"
"Today shall be the special day for us because after
so many months Madhu's gonna be back in our chawl and She gonna be set free from
the trap of that RK" said Mallick
"With the grace of Ganapati bappa finally we gonna
have our daughter back,Ganapati bappa tera lakh lakh sukar hai" prayed Padmini
gonna be a very big day for Madhu"
But on the other hand…Madhu thinks
"Tonight it's a very big day for me.I am gonna
confess to RK that I love him very much.I don't know how will he react but I
have decided that I will tell him what I feel for him"
"Biwi…Biwiii" RK shouted
Madhu walks in...
"What happened RK why are you shouting early in the
"Biwi Im noticing you, you are planning something
from the morning tell me what is it!"
"Urmm…kuch nahi…there is nothing that I am doing"
RK pulls Madhu closer and pressed her hands tightly "Tell
me the truth Madhu what are you doing else you know what I can do"
"I am telling you na that there's nothing why don't
you understand. Now leave me its paining"
"Alright if you won't tell me then I can find out
Biwi" and he push her…
"Yes Chief what happened to you?"
"Bittu ji you tell me one thing my official Biwi
seems to be very busy from the morning, what happening in my house will anyone
"Who Chief…there's nothing such I think you have a
"Bittu ji…RK never had a misunderstanding and if you
better tell me the truth then it will be fine for you"
"Aah...Actually Chief Bhabhi is planning a birthday
party for you and it's a surprise for you and she told no one to tell about it
"I see so Mrs. Madhubala Rishav Kundra is planning
The party begun and everyone seems excited for the
birthday party of RK when suddenly the flashlight was focused on the stairs
where both Madhu along with RK were stepping down. With a alluring Red shiffon
saree Madhu looked Magnificent with RK dressed in black suit. Both looked into
their eyes and stepped down. The Cake was cut and was offered
Suddenly the mood changed into intense desire full
of love and passion…
"Biwi thank you what a beautiful party ahan!
Madhu was startled and she keeps staring RK whereas
RK asked Madhu to dance with him.Both danced at the beats of the music.
With the ending of the dance, Madhu was in RK arms
and both looked into each ones eyes.Madhu said I Love you RK and the moment
With the romance was at its peak suddenly
Samsher,Padmini arrived at the scene and he threw the sum of rupees on RK's face.
The moment turned into pain and sorrow
"Keep your 40 lakhs RK which you gave me for my
operation and now leave my daughter's hand; she is set free of your cage.
Enough she had bear here now no more"
"Madhu beta we are here now RK can do nothing to you
he has no more authority in you. char pheres ends here!"
"Chalo Madhu" and they dragged Madhubala and her
hand holding RK's was slowly got separated and both felt the affliction of love
in their heart and they parted!!
RK fall down on his knees and broke down inside and
all his memories of his and Madhu's were there in front of his eyes and he felt
regretted of losing her.
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