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Posted: 20 October 2012 at 8:40am | IP Logged

Hi guys!!!

i know i am lacking behind with my FF update but this is my treat only!!! so for those who dont know, here is why i am starting this:

# My Most Popular FF Has Completed It's First Thread...

# My Sissy Has Returned From Hostel And Will Be With Me Forever Now!!!

# My Kamini aka Hetal Finally Became A Dazzler!!

# I Love KriYaansh To Hell...!!!


so guys, enjoy this though it's not so good but i really wanted to give you guys something...


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"iss ghar ki saari first floor ki khidkiyaan band honi chahiye! Specially, floor ke entrance waali stairs se right side ke fourth room ki!! Properly locked and they should be air tight''''and ya, the glass should be replaced by some unbreakable material of the window before being locked''."

 

"ji memsaab!"

 

" aur bahar ki taraf, ussi room ki donna khidkiyon kea as paas koi pipe nahi honi chahiye!! Saari piping wahan ki theek kar do warna koi bhi chadte hue aa sakta hain'''"                                                    

 

"ji smriti bhabhiji!"

 

Smriti: aur Mukesh...

Servant: madam suresh'.!

Smriti: haan-haan job hi ho!...aur achcha Dharmesh, sunno aisa karo''.umm'..unn khidkiyon ke neeche doadmiyon ko khada kar do, chaukidaari ke liye. Aur unse kehna ki yeh aadmi'''.(she gave him the pic:


 

"'''''.us jagah kea as paas bhi nahi aa sake!!"

 

Servant: ji, jaisa aap chahein''

 

The servant was about to leave but smriti stopped him and was thinking hard how to say it. A girl was standing a little way away with her friends and saw/heard all this from there. She came to where smriti was but her back was facing her so she didn't got to know.

 

Smriti: haan, who main keh rahi thi us admi ko aas paas aane nahi dena par use kuch karna mat! Use kuch nahi hona chahiye aur koshish karna ki voh donno use chuein hi nahi bas vahan se bhej dein!

Servant: par memsaab, darwaaza hain toh yeh khidki se kyun aayenge?

Smriti: who khidki se aayenge kyunki use yahan aana manna hain aur function mein darwaaze se ye aayega toh sab use pakad lenge issliye who chorro ki tarah aayega!

Servant: aapko pakka lagti voh aayenge?

Smriti: (smirk) Mukesh'.

Servant: ma'am who main suresh!

Smriti: arrey! Suresh, Mukesh, Dharmesh, joh bhi ho; main use jitna jaan paayi hoon, uss jaankaari se bata sakti hoon ki voh pakka aayega!

 

The servant leaves and smriti turns around, finally spotting the girl and her friends. The friends behind her were giggling and the girl in the centre had her arms crossed to her chests and a 'you-are-so-dead' expression on her face''..smriti gulped hard as she pretty much knew this look and was feeling guilty. She chose to try to divert the topic in whatever ways she can, though it wasn't even yet started but the glaring eyes in front of her were enough to tell.

 

Smriti: arrey, tum log aa gaye! Toh aaj ki shopping kaisi thi?

Girl: maa, aapko sachmein lagti hain aap topic change kar paaoge?

 

The girl glared at her mom. Smriti let out a weak nervous smile then took the bags from her dughter's hands to the near by sofa, where she spreaded the suit and started discussing the shopping with her daughter's friends.

 

Smriti: kriya, this suit is so gorgeous! So elegant and so classy! It must be your choice, isn't it?

 

Neha: yes aunty, it was the wifey's choice!! (giggle+wink)

Vishaka: dude, madam abhi tak wifey nahi bani, she is still our single chick! Just ready to mingle the single!! (wink)

 

Smriti smiled; she was not really paying attention to what the girls said but was smiling at the thought that her daughter had still not asked her why she gave those instructions to the servant and was just simply staring at her.

 

Smriti: which brand?

Rinni: Raymond! You know, as he is now gonna be a complete man! (wink)

Smriti: not bad beta, tumhaari knowledge toh bahot achcha ho gayi!

 

Kriya got irritated now and she stormed before anyone could say anything else.

 

Kriya: maa!!! I ask you again; you really think you can change the topic?? And that too through shopping?? No! aap batao ki aapne aisa kyun kiya??? Kyun aap aise behave kar rahe ho ki voh koi criminal hain? Unke liye security rakh rahe ho!!!!!

Smriti: arrey maine kya kiya? Ab voh criminal hain toh hain! After all he is a thief! Fraud kahika!! Pehle meri buttering karke ussne mera dil jeeta, mere dil mein jagah banayi aur meri zindagi ka hissa ban gaya, mera second child; mera beta ban gaya! Phir, meri hi beti ko mujhse churaake lekar jaa raha hain! Aur who bhi din-daharein, sabke saamne! Aur issmein main kuch bhi nahi kar sakti jab mujhe chori ki date, jagah, time sab maaloom hain, aur yeh bhi ki chori kaun kar raha hain aur voh meri beti ko mujhse churra raha hain! Ab mujhe dekho, uss chorri ki tayaari kar rahi hoon''.!!!

 

She grunted and the girls awed. Kriya hugged her mother.

 

Kriya: mom, I know yeh aapke liye asaan nahi hain, mere liye bhi kahan hain?? You took care of me, brought me up single handed and made me capable of what I am today. You were my only support and life till the time I came to st. louise.

 

She broke the hug and cupped her mother's face and continued.

 

Kriya: I met rey in st. louise maa, I made friends and I gained trust and support of all of them. I fell in love and had the most powerful support by my side; he became my life. But I never forgot my previous life; you! And as rey became my everything to me and as I move on in life, I would still always be your natthkhat kriya mom! Your daughter is going to enter a new house but is never leaving her old one, this would always remain my house and you my maa!

Smriti smiled at the same time time had tears in her eyes as she remembered the final confirmation of KriYaansh''.

 

FLASHBACK

 

"hi smriti!!! Toh aaj shaam pakka?? Is your daughter ready for her most likely to be inlaws???"

Smriti: (to the call) shamita, don't worry'..i'll handle her!!

Shamita: good, you handle her and I'll handle my son!! Humne toh donno ko bataaya bhi nahi ki hum unn dono ke rishte ki baat karne waale hain!

Smriti: ya''.but I am sure, kriya ne aaj tak meri koi baat nahi talli!! Aur aaj iss baat par toh Kabhi nahi taalegi!! After all your son  is such a gem and so are you all!!

Shamita: yes, I am so excited!! Pehle humaare hubbies childhood friends the aur hum donno bhi, aur phir humaari donno friends ke saath shaadi ho gayi now I just hope ki yeh dosti rishte daari mein badal jaayein!!!

Smriti: sach mein!! (door opens and kriya comes in'.) challo shams, I'll talk to you later, koi aa gaya!!

Shamita: ooo'..so bahuraani arrived?? Chal rakti hoon, dulhe raja ghar mein padhar rahein hain!!

Smriti: inki timings toh abhi se match kar rahi hain!!

Shamita: oh yes!! Chal chalti hoon, shaam ko aaongi meri bahu se milne, tere damaad ke saath!!

Smriti: bye sweetheart''.!!!

 

Smriti cuts the call and greets kriya with a big bear hug!! Kriya got confused.

 

Kriya: maa, aapko kya hua??

Smriti: kriya, aaj no ghumma phiraa ke baat, only on the point!! Abhi main apni childhood friend se baat kar rahi thi, and maine usske bte ka rishta tumhaare liye apna liya!!! Mujhe pata hain tum abhi tak college mein ho, par guess what?? Who bhi t.louise ka hain!!!!

Kriya: maa par!-

Smriti: no par wars!! Ab Jaldi se jaoo aur ready hokke aao!!

 

Kriya was pushed in her room and she locked from inside and started crying hard. She thought about rey, her life, their life and cried harder. Her cell rang and she jumped at the name then at the next ring picked it up.

 

Kriya: rey!!!!!!!

Rey: baatcutter??? Kya hua?? U alrigt???

Kriya: rey, maa meri shaadi fix kar rahi hain!!

Rey: whayt!! ??? shit!! This cant happen!! Main- (there was a voice heard on rey's side''.)

 

"rey'''honey, just come here for a minute'''.."

 

Rey: kriya, wait a minute, my mom's calling me''.but just control yourself, everything will be alright!! I promise'.!!!

 

There was a little moment from the other side in which kriya just sobbed. He returned after a short while sounding too much ultra happy!

 

Rey: kriya!!!!! I am so sos so happy!!!!!

Kriya: rey, yahan meri shaadi ki baat chal rahi hain and you are happy??

Rey: arrey..-

Kriya: (she cuts him) rehene do!! Nahi baat karti! Aapko vaise bhi koi faraq thodina padega!!

Rey: kri-

 

Before he even finished the dialogue she cuts the call and starts crying again. On the other side, rey removes his mobile from his ear with a huge grin on his face and he murmurs''..

"yeh humesha meri baatcutter hi rehegi!!...kabhi baat complete karne degi''..!! par jab ye ab bolegi toh muah se awaaz nikelegi hi nahi''''.wait sweetheart, I am coming'''''.!!"

 

In the evening:

 

Smriti is knocking a door while dressed in a very classy suit and looking very, very pretty.

 

Smriti: kriya!!!! Ladke waale aane waale hain! Aur kitna time lagaaogi??? And ya remember to wear Indian only!!!

 

She leaves for dressing mitthais (sweets) on a plate. In room, kriya is struggling to get to the dori of her deep back kurti. She continuously struggles and think of the dance fest time when rey had helped her out. She blushes and gets somewhat lost in her rey land''..

There is sudden movement of soft fingers on her exposed back which are followed with some soft kisses from a pair of lush lips. She feels them and recognize the touch and the familiar sparks run down her spine and the goosebumps on the path of his every touch''''

 

Kriya: (moaning with pleasure+panicking) rey'.!!! Aap yahan kya kar rahe ho???

 

Rey treats her with wet kisses on the path where he caresses her back with his fingers''..he brings his mouth near her ear and nibbles her earlobe slightly'''..he breathes down her neck till the deep v of her front and back up from the path of the jawline and neck''..he moves back a little and slowly ties her dorri and starts kissing her back again. Kriya Is moaning all the time and rey holds her cause her legs are trambling because of him and he is sure she cant hold herself by her own''''rey stops unwillingly from what he was doing and that was pampering his love and just gives her a big hot, wet kiss on her cheeks and turns to leave  but kriya holds his wrist and stops him.

 

Kriya: rey, aap yahan kya kar rah ho???

Rey: (wink) wait for my darls''.main tumhaara hi hone waala hoon toh mera haath baadmein pakkadna!

 

He gives her deadly killing smile of his and leaves through the window from where he entered''.

 

Smriti: kriya''.come outside please..!!

 

Her mom's voice was extra sweet and sugary, a sighn that the family had arrived. Kriya puts on her duppatta and opens the door and walks to the family while continuously looking down. She touches the boy's parent's feet and serve them tea and then silently sits next to the guy whose face she didn't even dare to see cause she hell didn't care. There was a moment of silence in which kriya just kept stirring her tea's spoon and looking down at it while the three elders nervously looking from the guy to kriya and then back to the guy then again kriya'''.

 

"haw!!!! Sab mujhe bhool gaye kya??"

 

Kriya looked up and saw a sweet little cute girl with the chirping voice she just heard run down t her and suddenly gives her a hug. Kriya smiles and hugs back, her eyes suddenly lit up and a wide warm smile on her face. The little girl who was around 5-6 years breaks the hug and faces kriya with a hell wide smile showing all her teeth.

 

Girl: me is sakshi!! Studying in 1 B and u my bhabhi!!! Yeahh!!!!

 

She chirped up and down and was really excited that kriya couldn't help but giggle at her cuteness.

 

Sakshi: bhabhi, aapko bhai achcha lage na??

 

That's when kriya realized that she didn't even knew who she was being setting up with. She felt quilty and her expression changed and she looked down. A voice was heard from her side for the first time that made her jump.

 

"saksh, aapka bhabhi ne toh abhi mujhe dekha hi nahi'.!!!"

 

She was so so shocked!! At the same time she couldn't believe her luck!! Was this really happening??? Was she really so lucky?? Had her dream truelly came true?? Was she really gonna be HER rey's forever???

She looked at him with her mouth open an 'o'. rey chuckled under his breath and winked at her and she closed her mouth realizing she was simply gaping at him in front of everyone but didn't relax her saucer size eyes.

 

Rey: saksh, main inko itni der se dekh raha hoon, baat karne ki koshish kar raha hoon''.par aapka bhabhi toh apne mein hi busy hain''..(puppy face)''.not fair!! (pout)

 

Kriya didn't know why but she blushed''hard!! Her cheeks had gone crimison red and her smile was lightning the whole atmosphere. Soon everyone were tasting each other sweets, (muah meettha kara rahe the) for the start of their new relationship. The dates were taken out of 8 months later which was disliked publicly by rey as he wanted to get kriya as his own personal property as soon as possible and personaly by kriya, she wanted to be fully attached to him sooner than rey but being a girl she had to maintain her groaning limitations.

 

PRESENT

 

Smriti had tears in her eyes as she hugged kriya again and whispered love curses and a few will miss you filmy dialogues. Kriya broke the hug and wiped her tears.

 

Kriya: ab maa, ekk last request hain'.

Smriti: bolo, joh chahoge doongi!

 

{NOTE: IN THIS SS KRIYA IS VERY RICH AND SHE JUST HIDE THIS FROM HER FRIENDS AND ACTED LIKE A WEAKLING BEFORE BUT NOW EVERYONE KNOWS. REST ALL IS SAME AS D3 ONLY KRIYA NEVER LEFT REY AND THERE ISNO TAANI AND SHIVAM'S ROLE ENDED WITH HIS PARTY AND DANCE FEST.)

 

Kriya: aap meri shaadi ko chorri bulaana band karo''

Smriti: hmm'..umm'..ok fine!!

Kriya: ''.aur mere rey ko chorr ka darja mat do!!!

Smriti: oh no!!! who shirtless wonder ekk chor tha, hain aur rahega!!

 

Kriya pouted but smriti didn't melt so she showed fake anger and went to her room grumpily.

 

Simmi: aunty, ab aap kya karoge??

Smriti: use toh manana hain hi, par use pehle I wanna have a look at all the shopping!! So ho jaye koi sight seeing?

 

The girls excitedly took their bags in smriti's room to show her their wedding shopping of the day.

 

Neha: aunty, see these'''

Smriti: Oh My God, ther are So Pretty''.!!!!

 

Smriti took out the three dynamic clothes from the designer bag''


 

Smriti: kriya is gonna look angelic in this! Its so gorgeous'.!!!! Kiski choice thi??

Sharon: rey's'''.

Smriti: WHAT!!! Rey tumhaare saath tha? You all told me that you are going for a girls shopping session,so??

Sharon: haan so aunty, jab aap itne strict ban chukke ho''rey not gonna come home now as only one and a half week left for their marriage toh bechaare romance kahan karein???

Neha:aur waise bhi iss fianc ko apni julliet ko pamper karne mein bahot mazaa aata hain!! (wink)

 

Everyone laughed and  the girls showed their shopping to smriti. Kriya came down from her room looking just''..hawt!!!!

Her dress: 

 

Vishaka: so'?? Where is the hotty up to??

Kriya: I am going on a date!! Wanna join me? Bharat can be there too and a double date??

Vishaka: no dude! Go and enjoy!!

Kriya : bye guys!! Sharon, come with me please and mom, can I stay over at sharon's house tonight? Sharon, only if it's comfortable with you??

Sharon: no problem babes! (wink)

Smriti: ya, you can go'''.(murmur: as if I don't know whom u are spending the night with'..)

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So guys'''.what do you think about it???

I am gonna make it a SS and the next part would contain KriYaansh's Date but I will only continue if my phaankaas  say so and the update wil be given when I get full unres comments from my kaminis: cherry aka hetal; !!!!

Till now, its just the beginning of my treat''..have fun and plz give your precious comments''.

 

 

 

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Edited by kriyaanshurock - 29 November 2012 at 8:40am

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awsome start
loved it
thanx for the pm

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awesome star to the ss and thanks for the pm :D

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awsome start...
I lykd smriti here...
Do continue soon
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