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awesome really good

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Thanks everyone :) will continue soon..have the ideas in my mind..need time :)
til then promote this so that i can buzz it also Smile

Suggestions needed: More of a Virman or Virika?

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virika...

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Hey! I just read your FF!
Can you please PM me, when you update next? I really love this FF, i always wanted to see VirIka as parents..
Do update soon, and add lots of VirIka!
I would love to see how Viren misses Jeevika and how she misses him.. 

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nice update continue soon

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Part 3


Precap : Virat angry and Virika after making love sleeping.

Morning 6 am:Morning 6 am:

Virika's room :
Viren was having a firm grip on his better half.
just as the rays enter and viren wakes..he finds jeevika sleeping peacefully..he is lost in her beauty. he sweetly wakes her up.. 
jeevika?
jeevika just moves a little bit but doesnt open her eyes..she is too sleepy and puts her hand across her hubby's neck.
viren: oh to mrs vadhera ka aaj uthne ka mood ni h 
jeevika: ahaaan ( shooking her face)
viren: batao, isse zyada mujh aur kya chaiye hoga
jeevika: virenji aap bhi naa
viren: acha jeevika utho dekho 8 baj gaye h!
jeevika wakes up suddenly seeing its just 6.20
jeevika realizes that he was lying and starts hitting him in chest 
Jeevika: Lawyer hoke jhuth? hawww
viren: bahu hoke sona hawww
jeevika givs him a bad look
viren brings her closer and their nose touches,.
viren keeps pillow behind jeevika and side hugs her

Viren: jeevika raat kuch zyada hi jaldi khatam nahi hogi?
jeevika blushes
Jevika: acha virenji apki flight kitne baje ki h?
viren: flight to  3 baje ki h.. par mujhe 12 baje waha pahuchna hoga.. checking ki waja se
jeevika: ji virenji,, to mein apka bag pack krdugi
viren kisses on forehead
jeevika is going to bath
viren: aaj hum pehle nahayege
jeevika: apki jaisi marzi..ap jaiye nahane
vren: tum samjhi nahi..smirks and emphasises on hmm
jeevika gives him Embarrassed look and runs away to the washroom

Virman's room:
viraat is awake early because he dont want to get trap in any of the tactics by manvi
he goes to bath..
manvi gets up due to the noise viraat was making.

manvi thinks ' viraat jo suba 8 baje tak uthne se b ktrata h itni subah uth gay? soch manvi bete soch..aj to pati dev gusse me h'
when viraat comes from washroom
manvi: viraat?
virat ignores
manvi continues: aaj hum kahi bahar chalte h?
viraat: kyun manvi? tumhari tabiyat kharab ni ti?
manvi: viraat am sorry na..
viraat: koi fayda nahi
and saying this moves out of the room
manvi: agar tumhe manaya nahi to mera naam b manvi choudhary nahi!
oops..manvi vadhera

Virika room:

Jeevika is seen wearing a turquoise colored saree with silver embroidery, which made her skin look soft and milky. She had simple jewellery adorning her neck and ears, while her dark long hair was flying because of the wind entering the room.


She was almost finished making the bed, whenViren stepped out the bathroom and threw his towel on the bed, dressing himself. Jeevika saw the towel and shook her head.Viren ji? bache hai kya aap? She took the towel and went to put it in the bathroom. As she walked out she couldn't help but notice Virens sexy physique. How his white shirt hugged his strong biceps and flexed, while he was brushing his hair.

Viren: ji jeevika ji.. ap ka pyara sa bacha.. 


Viren was in a very playful mood, so he called jeevika to come over to him. jeevika walked towards him and viren gave her an innocent look, but jeevika caught his mischievous intentions behind it. What was she going to do with him, she thought desperately.


Jeevika:"mein apki kya madad krun Mr. Pati dev ?" 

Viren: meri tie mrs vadhera. bandh dijiye ( he wears a tie. later also it will have some role)

 Viren took this advantage and wrapped his strong arms around her waist, and pulled her closer making her hit his chest. His touch on her waist was burning her skin and making her go crazy.

 Jeevika: Virenji! kya kar rahe h..koi aajayega.

viren: to ane do..mein kisse darta hu. mera kamra h.

jeevika: mere pas bahut kaam h viren ji, apka bag b to pack karna h.

viren: indicating towards lips. ek pappi dedo pele.

jeevika blushes

viren: acha halki phulki 

jeevika comes closer n viren closes his eyes..and jeevika tries running away

Viren: stop moving

jeevika: manvi viraat tum?

viren leaves her 

jeevika runs and on door turns back 

and says viren ji?

viren looking towards her..

and she makes Wink face..

viren: tumhari to..and starts running behind her..


Sorry for late guys :) comment :)

next part will be viren's departure and virman's hot night ;)




Edited by little.angel56 - 24 October 2012 at 1:15am

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very nice update...
continue soon n plzz add more of virika...

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