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I am really excited for this alreadyy!
Please pm me when you continue!! :)
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Hey the one's who want PM please add me in your budyy list 
and thanks everyone for liking the update so much..
As promised more of a virika part.
and in the next part virman :)

Part 2 
The story continues from Virat being angry and sleeping..

In virika's room :

virat helped viren blow balloons..now viren slowly decorated the room with balloons.. after he decorated it..he placed fragrant candles round the room..

Just in front of their bed he hung a photo frame.. large in size .. their pic of Virman's mehndi.. 
after the decoration he just hides in the room and then call jeevika..

jeevika doesnt recieve...he says 'arey kya jeevika ghode bech ke sona aj hi yaad aya..utho na'
he calls again and this time jeevika gets disturbed and sees the call.. she sees missed call of virenJi and with one closed eye sees beside her.. viren was missing.. 
jeevika: viren ji phone kyun kre h? she gets up..and feels something soft under her legs.. she feels velvet touch as it was velvet carpet..
she smiles and looks around to see the room decorated completely and beautifully.. balloons,candles, and her eyes goes on the frame.. she gets up and goes near it..
she feels the frame by putting her hand on virens pic..and smiles to herself...

Virenji kaha h aap? please aiye na..ye sab kya h?
she searches and sees a teddy bear on the table...  she goes near it.. and takes it in her arms and hug it tightlly

Flashback:
Viren ji is gift mein kya h?
viren : madam mujhe hi batana hota to isse wrap kyun krvata
jeevika: par ye kyun?
viren: tum khol ke to dekho meri jaan
jeevika : aap bhi naa
she opens and finds a cute teddy bear in it..very huge.. as she loved soft toys 
jeevika : virenji ye to bahut cute h and hugs it
viren : isse to tumne jhappi dedi .. usko dene wali ki koi kadar h?
jeevika: viren ji.. i love you and hugs him
viren: i love you too shonu ., jeevika ab mein chata hu ki mein pura kamre aise toys se bhardu
jeevika : virenji sab mujhe bacha samjhenge..
they still in hug
viren: jeevika wo tumhare liye nahi hoge..
jeevika gets away from hug and asks: fir kisliye virenji?
viren pulls her close and hugs her and say : ye humari princess ke liye..jo sirf humari hogi..kyunki tum mujhe us din duniya ka sabse bada tofa dogi 
jeevika  blushes and holds him tightly..
 
Flashback ends

Jeevika: virenji ne ye yaha kyun rakha? she thinks why viren would let her think of their aborted baby.. 
but she hugs it tightly..
she goes around in search of hiim.. and in middle of the room stands..virenji bahar aaiye na please ye sab kya h?
and then there's a shower of roses on her.. reminding of the vaalentines day..

she gets lost  in that aroma.. and then suddenly feels hands around her waist...
she puts her head on his shoulder..(back hug) and says viren ji.. vireen : shshsh jeevika,,kuch nahi..
they are in the same position
and viren after some time : jeevika meine ye sab tumhare liye kiya..yeh puchna chati ho na kyun?
jeevika just nods her head..
he leaves from back hug and bring her in front of him..and cups her face..
Viren : Jeevika mujhe ye sab tumhare liye karne me acha lagta h.. its not my responsiblity.. but i love to care for u..to do something for my world which brings a smile .. ye hasi meri waja se h..jo mujhe bahut pasand h..
par ye sab tabhi hoga agar tum mujhe mauka dogi.. tumne kya socha ki tum chali jaogi to mein khush reh pauga? 
Jeevika : virenji aisa nahi ta..
viren: aisa hi tha..tumhe bas sabki padi thi..ye bacha jo humne khoya ta hum dono ka decission tha..merse bina puche hi tum jane ki soch ri ti? itna bura hu mein?
Jeevika is not able to say anything and just hugs him tightly..

viren; ye sab meine tumhare liye kiya taki ab hum iske baad ek nayi shuruat kare..abse jeevika mujhe wada karo ki mujhe chodne ke bare me sochogi b nahi
jeevika starts crying..
viren.: o..rona nahi please..she wipes her tears.. and kisses on her forehead..
they remain like that..
jeevika after some time
viren ji 
viren : hmm?
jeevika : mujhe b apke liye kuch karna h..kya krun?

viren after thinking Wink
acha to mera return gift..
ab bhai pyar ka return gift to pyar hi banta h...

Jevevika : matlab?
viren breaks their long hug..and says : acha matlab?
jeevika blushes
viren..puts his hand around her neck and says: matlab ki...
jeevika : ki..?
viren points towards his lips
jeevika: nahi milegi..
viren: acha ji nahi milegi? itni himaat?
jeevika starts steeping backwards with viren in front..
and she collides with a wall

Viren: ab kaha jayogi madam? 
jeevika: virenji chodiye na.. ap b na bas
viren: mein b na bas?
jeevika blushes and hugs him..holding her grip tghtly and says virenji i love you a lot..i promise mein kahi nahi jaugi
viren: shonu :*

viren takes her in arms and goes to the bed..
he places her on the bed gently..asking as if for permisision..jeevika replies with a nod..
after losing their baby..jeevika was scared..so maybe this was the day..

viren kissed her forehead..her face..and opened her gown..
and they spent the night together.. ( I am not updating about their night as i will update the same in virman sorry )

after viren took out his from jeevika..jeevika moaned his name..
viren went to his face .. looked in jeevika's eyes..securing her..
jeevika hugged her husband and then they both slept..

Around 3 am.. viren lies facing the roof and jeevika sleeping on his chest.. viren shirtles and jeevika tucked with the sheet over them..
viren wakes up..and sees jeevika sleeping.. he takes the sheet and places it so that she is covered.. she is comforted by this..and tightens her grip..
viren: shonu...u awake?
jeevika: hmm
viren: jeevika mujhe tumse kuch kehna ta
jeevika : ji viren ji kahiye na..
viren: jeevika mujhe 4-5 din ke liye bahar jana h
jeevika: 4-5 din bahar ? kaha? 
by this she opens her eyes and faces viren..
viren: jeevika mujhe uk jana padh ra h kuch kaam se..
mein chata ki tum b chalo par tumhara passport expire huya h..and its urgent..
jeevika gets sad and gets back to her position ..hugging him tiglty and sleep.
viren: jeevika meri packing kardena
jeeviak: ji viren ji
viren: tum aisa krogi to mein kaise ja pauaga..aacha thek h..thodi der rukte h..jab tk tumhara pasport ayega uske bad chalege..ab to khush na?
jeevika: ni viren ji..ap jaiye..kaam b zaruri h..men apki wait krugi..
viren: meine tumhare laptop mein skype download kra h..hum log video chat krege..aur phone to hai hi..
jeevika feels better and hugs him and dozes off..
viren slowly patting and after he is asured that she is sleeping..pecks her..and sleeps :)

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