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Posted: 30 January 2013 at 12:02pm | IP Logged
YOU'RE STORY IS TOO GOOD FOR PEOPLE, MAYBE THATS WHY THEY DON'T COMMENT CAUSE THEY HAVE NO WORDS FOR YOU Tongue

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Posted: 30 January 2013 at 12:04pm | IP Logged
YAYAYAYA WE'VE REACHED PAGE 107!!!! NOW 6 MORE PAGES PEOPLE Wink

WE CAN DO THIS Big smile

LETS SHOW AALIYA THAT SHE WILL HAVE TO UPDATE TOMORROW Big smile

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Posted: 30 January 2013 at 12:10pm | IP Logged
Aaliya what will i ever do without your stories.
 
You're a life saver.
 
Update soon.Big smile

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Posted: 30 January 2013 at 1:05pm | IP Logged
aweee such cute update
thanks so muchhh
cant wait to read moreee
continue soon plzzz!!
i love how all ur updates are sooo long
hope the next one is longer than this onee
great job.

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Posted: 30 January 2013 at 1:44pm | IP Logged
hello LOL

first of all m really sorry for commenting late and moreover not being able to unres my previous comment !! actually i have exams coming up in february thats why i am too busy nowadays ...

SO M REALLY REALLY SORRRYYY !!

m bak now ... ready to make up for my mistake ... Smile

instead of unresing the previous comment i am posting everything in this one Smile


Chapter 21

BEAUTIFUL + LOVELY + ROMANTIC !!

I SIMPLY LOVED THE ADORABLE BABY ----> JEEVIKA !! Heart

let it be her innocence, annoyance, tantrums, love, care nd everything else !! 

THEN COMES THE PERFECT + POSSESSIVE HUSBAND -----> VIREN !! Heart

he knows exactly how to tackle the innocence, annoyance, tantrums, love, care nd everything else of his dear wife ... or may i say BABY !!

LOVED THE UPDATE TO BITS CUZ IT WAS SOLELY ON VIRIKA !!

and girl again u did a wonderful job in potraying the romance, love and care !! Clap



Chapter 22

('Cereals?'

'Hmm'

'Fruits?'

'leliye the'

'Breakfast, lunch, dinner on time?'

'ji'

'milk?

'after medicines'

'to lo na medicines'

'hmm, taking'

'Jeevika why you sound so low to me?' Viren interrogated.)


Awww ... this was too cute ... Heart


hmmm ... so Viren forgot !!! Angry

but bechara insaan hai ... kabhi ghalti bhi ho jati hai LOL


Loved the manvi and virat part too ... them falling asleep in the care and then viren putting a blanket over them and then imagining jeevika and himself ...


OH !! I LOVE THIS QUALITY ABOUT U !! THE TEENY TINY DETAILS THAT U GIVE ... MAKE UR STORIES ALL THE WAY MORE PERFECT !! Clap


viren making the quick yet soo perfect desicions to make it up to jeevika to all the way till the ending part was FANTASTIC !!


loved the part where u described the sleeping jeevika and that coffee line !! Big smile


(He sensed she was awake, and went to her face. As soon as her eyes were about to open, she sensed extreme dark. She made out that his hands were on her eyes,

"shshss, Don't open your eyes, rest" Viren said as soft as he could and kissed her eyes.

He continued," I am sorry for being late, am really sorry"

"mera chota baby aur bada baby dono mujhse gussa hai, I know, am sorry, aur kal to humare baby ka first ultra sound b hai na" Jeevika had a smile creeping on her face now. She clanged on to him to hide herself. Their hug after so long. She still dint say anything.

Viren was now on the bed completely with Jeevika in his side hug. He was then and now patting her hair and caressing the tummy.

"Jeevika, I really missed you so much. Am sorry ab sara kaam khatam! Bas you and me. Aur abhi to humne humare baby ki nursery b set karni hai na? sorry sorry, humne nahi tumne"

"Aur to aur, ab mera baby grow karega, we have to be more responsible now na? Eat healthy and take medicines."

"And finally my princess will have to join aerobic classes too," he was making her recall everything they have to do now. She was smiling more and more.

"you missed me?" Viren asked.

"I did, and I love you Viren ji"

How he was wishing to hear something from her since he came and prolonged to listen to only these 3 words! That she loved him and missed him too!

"I love you too" he hugged her even more tight and she slept on his chest. Peacefully, securely engulfed in the familiar grip. After so long, did they share smile while sleeping. Though Jeevika dint see him, he felt him.)


THIS FOR ME WAS THE ICING TO THE CAKE OR U CAN SAY THE CHERRY ON TOP THAT COMPLETED THE UPDATE !! PICTURE PERFECT !!


Praising the author ..


I love  your writing.  I love the swirl and swing of words as they tangle with human (virika) emotions !!


U  r doing a tremendous job !! Thumbs Up


Nooo !! dun end it .. plzzz...

i am addicted to ur story !! plzzz dun end it !! Cry


theres a quote ...

 "Easy reading is damn hard Writing"


^soo true !!


so i know that its really hard for u to update but plzzz dun end it Smile

i may not be there to bug u all the time but i am "A HUGE ADDICTED FAN" Wink


thanks for the pm 

continue soon ...


LOTS OF LOVE Heart

BIG HUG Hug


MIRAH 



Edited by ElmWizard5015 - 30 January 2013 at 1:43pm

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Posted: 30 January 2013 at 2:10pm | IP Logged
Lovely update again!

Cute how viren could sense jeevika's mood and luckily virman reminded him! Haha

Love how viren dreamt about jeevika sitting beside him when he was driving alone at nite. Aww

The last part was so sweet:)

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Posted: 30 January 2013 at 4:22pm | IP Logged
awesome update so romantic

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Posted: 30 January 2013 at 11:02pm | IP Logged
cute n lovely part!!!

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