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'Breakfast, lunch, dinner on time?'
'to lo na medicines'
'Jeevika why you sound so low to me?' Viren interrogated.)
Awww ... this was too cute ...
hmmm ... so Viren forgot !!!
but bechara insaan hai ... kabhi ghalti bhi ho jati hai
Loved the manvi and virat part too ... them falling asleep in the care and then viren putting a blanket over them and then imagining jeevika and himself ...
OH !! I LOVE THIS QUALITY ABOUT U !! THE TEENY TINY DETAILS THAT U GIVE ... MAKE UR STORIES ALL THE WAY MORE PERFECT !!
viren making the quick yet soo perfect desicions to make it up to jeevika to all the way till the ending part was FANTASTIC !!
loved the part where u described the sleeping jeevika and that coffee line !!
(He sensed she was awake, and went to her face. As soon as her eyes were about to open, she sensed extreme dark. She made out that his hands were on her eyes,
"shshss, Don't open your eyes, rest" Viren said as soft as he could and kissed her eyes.
He continued," I am sorry for being late, am really sorry"
"mera chota baby aur bada baby dono mujhse gussa hai, I know, am sorry, aur kal to humare baby ka first ultra sound b hai na" Jeevika had a smile creeping on her face now. She clanged on to him to hide herself. Their hug after so long. She still dint say anything.
Viren was now on the bed completely with Jeevika in his side hug. He was then and now patting her hair and caressing the tummy.
"Jeevika, I really missed you so much. Am sorry ab sara kaam khatam! Bas you and me. Aur abhi to humne humare baby ki nursery b set karni hai na? sorry sorry, humne nahi tumne"
"Aur to aur, ab mera baby grow karega, we have to be more responsible now na? Eat healthy and take medicines."
"And finally my princess will have to join aerobic classes too," he was making her recall everything they have to do now. She was smiling more and more.
"you missed me?" Viren asked.
"I did, and I love you Viren ji"
How he was wishing to hear something from her since he came and prolonged to listen to only these 3 words! That she loved him and missed him too!
"I love you too" he hugged her even more tight and she slept on his chest. Peacefully, securely engulfed in the familiar grip. After so long, did they share smile while sleeping. Though Jeevika dint see him, he felt him.)
THIS FOR ME WAS THE ICING TO THE CAKE OR U CAN SAY THE CHERRY ON TOP THAT COMPLETED THE UPDATE !! PICTURE PERFECT !!
Praising the author ..
I love your writing. I love the swirl and swing of words as they tangle with human (virika) emotions !!
U r doing a tremendous job !!
Nooo !! dun end it .. plzzz...
i am addicted to ur story !! plzzz dun end it !!
theres a quote ...
"Easy reading is damn hard Writing"
^soo true !!
so i know that its really hard for u to update but plzzz dun end it
i may not be there to bug u all the time but i am "A HUGE ADDICTED FAN"
thanks for the pm
continue soon ...
LOTS OF LOVE
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