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Hawwttt update.. Tongue

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Omg mindblowing update..thnx so mch for virman part

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Loved it yar

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awesome, pls update soon... just loved it

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Hey guys! Am updating the next part,
but before, i want to thanks everyone for their precious comments :) love to see when you people like it, 
More virika scenes defn.and surprise is going to unfold slowly Wink
Thanks again!

PART 5

Recap: Jeevika is back in her room,

Virika's room:
Jeevika feels something missing in their room,and he was HE! missing the mischievous talks, laughter of someone in her room. she wanted to call her husband right away but sh dint, she dint want to disturb him.
she opens her cupboard, to take her gown and change. when she takes out the gown something falls down, she is surprised and bends down to take that paper.

"My dear Mrs. Vadhera ,  i have hugged this gown as tight so that my touch and smell goes in it. tum jab isse pehnogi to tumhe mein apne pass hi miluga, bahut paas,
aur haan i already miss you like you miss me 
-Viren"

As soon as Jeevika reads that paper she smiles with tears in her eyes, she once read somewhere that There must be one person who can make you cry but with a smile on your face and she knew it was her virenji.
she snugs the gown to her. theres a message on her phone, 
Virenji: Jeevika, i have reached here, i will call you in 10 mins

She replies with a Thankyou virenji Heart message and viren after recieving smiles to himself
She goes and change as soon as she could,

But there was something going in her mind
'virenji meri awwaz se hi pehchan jayenge ki meri tabiyat kharab hai, aur wo ye sunke wapis aagaye toh?

Jeevika had been feeling a little drowsy and was unwell since morning, but she dint want viren to know then as he would cancel his trip

in all these thoughts, phone rings,
jeevika has a smile,
she picks, before she could say anything,
Viren: Jeevika tum theek ho na? khana khaya? aur baki sab?
jeevika:(with little tremble) haan virenji sab theek hai meine kha liya. apne kuch khaya? 
viren: bas abhi khake aaya hu meri FM
jeevika: waise viren ji mujhe kuch kehna tha
viren: ji boliye mrs. vadhera
jeevika: virenji i love you Blushing
Viren: i love you too my shonu, acha tumne kuch socha kya chaiye tumhe?
Jeevika: kya viren ji ap b bas isi baat pe shuru hogaye,
viren: par batao to
jeevika: nahi viren ji, ap kuch b le ana 
viren: KUCH bHi? Wink 
Jeevika: virenji ap bhi na
viren: mein bhi na?
jeevika: huff,
and saying this she starts to cough,
viren with a sudden voice: Jeevika? jeevika pani peeyo please, ABHI! jaldi pani peeyo
Jeevika drinks water, but still coughs.
jeevika tum theek to ho na? please kisi ko bula lo, mujhe pata h tumhara yehi kaam hai, dhyan to rakhna nahi aata
jeevika's condition gets worse
she rushes to the washroom, viren could hear that she was puking out through the phone,
after sometime, she felt better and recieved the phone

Virenji?
Jeevika mein abhi wapis a ra hu- viren
jeevika: nahi virenji, aisa kuch nahi h
viren: aisa nahi h to kaisa h? dekha h tumne apne ap ko? vomit? cough? paka sar b dard ho ra hoga,
jeevika: nahi viren ji ab mein theek hu, wo sahayd meine zyada hi kha liya tha isliye
viren: tum kuch bhi mat kaho ab. zyada kha liya ta!
jeevika: sachi virenji, ab mein bilkul theek ho,
viren: mein kuch nahi janta jeevika, mein bas aa ra hu
jeevika: virenji ab mein order kr r hu ki ap nahi aaynge
mein theek hu baba
viren: paka ?
jeevika: ji
viren: shonu, paka?
Jeevika: hanji
viren: please apna dhyan rakhlo, merko akele jane ki itni bhi badi punishment mat do
jeevika: zurmana to apko ake bharna hi padega
viren: acha ji, aisa kaisa zurmana madam?
jeevika: ab wo to apko ake hi pata laggega naa
viren: aye haye, kya baat, ek din ka hi itna asar wah!
jeevika : virenji, mujhe humari shadi ke pehle ke din yaad aagaye, kaise hum aise rat ko baat krte te
viren: hmm ye to hai par aisi baatein thodi 
jeevika: aisi kaisi?
and they talk like this endlessly,
in between viren says jeevika to lie down on the bed and then talk. he wanted her to sleep and he knew that she is stubborn and wont sleep without talking,
so jeevika lies down and after talking so long, jeevika stops responding,
viren: jeevika?
jeevika doesnt reply because she is far asleep
viren: shogaya mera shonu? 
again no reply, viren smiles to himself,

he kisses innocently and says i love you, and cuts the phone, and then slept peacefully leaving a message on jeevika's phone 'goodnight love'.

Next day:

Jeevika sees her phone on the bed and knows what happened. she smiles and one eye open checks her phone, she replies with a ' goodmorning virenji Smile i love you a lot too' she adds that too cus she knows viren could have said ily on the phone,

She goes and dresses up, as they had to go on shopping today.

Virman's room:
Manvi gets up and sees her husband sleeping, vry slowly she goes to his ear and kisses saying' viraat ji uthiye'
viraat taking a long yawn and holding manvi too close to him.
viraat : manvi ji abhi kya zaroorat hai uthne ki please na sone do'
manvi: utho baba please, dadaji warna gusa honge
virat: arey manvi , keh dena ki kal raat mein BAHUTT let soya ta, kuch urgent kaam ta Wink
manvi Blushing 
manvi: acha theek h tumhe nahi uthna to so aram se,
and rushes to washroom to get ready, viraat sleeps again
after coming from washroom,

manvi irks and has an idea,
she goes to viraat, viraatt meri jaaan,
virat: hein? suba suba tumhe kya hiogaya? with closed eyes
manvi: utho na pleasee (putting her wet hair on his face)
virat: nahi manvi, jitne petre azma lo mein nahi uthuga, please na samjho, mujhe bahut neend aai h.
manvi: acha theek h mein kuch kehdungi bahar.
viraat: acha jane se pehle ek kissi to deti jao
manvi: viraat! 
virat: goodmorning wali kissi naa
manvi: bends and places the gm kiss on her husband's cheek and goes, 
virat: acha mein na dun?
manvi: viraat, bas karo na, acha mein aj shopping ja rahi hu sabke sath, tumhare kapde nikal diye meine, and tumhare liye kya laun?
virat: romance ke beech mein shoppping? Aiyoo! kuch bhi le ana, nahi b laogi to thoda sa romance le ana
manvi: virat tum bhi na!
chalo  ab jaldi se uth jana mein jaa rahi hu,
viraat opens his eyes and kisses her wife and then sleeps agian! lazy viraat!

At dining table:
Manvi wishes everyone and jeevika smirks a little Tongue
While sitting,
manvi: di ap itna kyun hass rhai h?
jeevika: mein? kuch nahi mannu aise hi
manvi: acha?
jeevika: waise mere pyare devar ji kaha h..
manvi: remembers about the night and blushes a little
when shes about to say dadaji asks the same about viraat
manvi quickly tells taht virat was not feeling well so he is resting and that she had given him the medicines.
manvi quickly messages the same to viraat so that their lie dont gets caught!
Very smart , jeevika thinks.

SB : bauji, aj hum sab shoppping pe jaa rahe h, 
Dadji: bete, isse humse kya puchna?
SB: wo bauu ji hume puchna tha ki ghar ke liye kya lana h? tyohar ane wale h.
dadaji: vanshikka tumhare sath ja rahi h na,,tum log dekh ana. aur ek bar viren aajaye to hum sab thodi renovations karvayege ghar me, aur fir tum gifts b le ana logo ke
SB: ji bauji

They leave for the shopping mall then (THEY = sb, vanshika, chachi, manvi, jeevika)

I hope you like it, please comments Smile 



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