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SwaRon SS: Come and Heal Me (LAST part - page 22) (Page 8)

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Posted: 04 November 2012 at 2:40am | IP Logged
So I finally edited to comment back LOL

Anyways, I just got caught up with this fic...so damn sorry that it took long. You know na? I have too much shiz to do and on top of that, I am working on my photoediting skills which aren't improving at all btw so I am sad...

Speaking of skills, It was an awesome update. It was skillfully written and the character and pov's seemed so apt. There is so much depth in character! Please update soon..

You were supposed to update this weekend but I guess you are busy but still update soon!!


Edited by Shona_Mayur - 12 November 2012 at 7:05am

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Posted: 04 November 2012 at 2:50am | IP Logged
OMG...that was just brilliant or even more than that...this SS is now in my favorite list ...pain runs in veins of this SS...this update is no different...his pain..his agony...his love...his sacrifice...u have penned down the emotions so beautifully ...effortlessly elegant ..i must say...his jealousy...he retreating back ...awww...poor soul...true love is painful...the way u described the part when karan tried to introduce these two ...aha...beautiful...love the way Rey was supporting him...arguing with him to fight for his love...in this chapter ...we got a small part about HER POV as well...she is still stuck somewhere with him...thats why it was pain she felt when he said to Rey that he is over her now...heart wrenching update...plz update soon dear ... this is one SS i always look forward to ...

Edited by deep_Tanha - 05 November 2012 at 11:37am

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Posted: 04 November 2012 at 3:13am | IP Logged
Whoa I'm speechless. I have seriously no words to describe the brilliance of this update. I have seriously not thought an update could leave me heavyhearted. But it did. It was painful but beautifully written update. The way you described the tension in the begining settling in the atmosphere, it kind of gave e chill on thinkign what next. Swayam's dialogue felt like piercing our heart. Just fabulous. Reyam conversation was heart wrenching and it left with us a feeling of melancholy. And finally we came across Sharon's POV and I was left wondering what had really happened? It was masterly written. Can't wait to read further to know what has actually happened with Sharon that she was forced to cut all ties with her past. Update soon.

Edited by marauder - 04 November 2012 at 3:46am

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Posted: 04 November 2012 at 3:24am | IP Logged
Brilliant !!!!
I always read your updates with a lump in my throat!!! gosh it was so emotional Cry!!! you beautifully described their pain and love for each other!!!  it was nt Sharon's engagement , i feel so relieved Smile
I completely loved the update  ...Waiting for the next one eagerly!!!!Please update soon
 
 
 
 


Edited by Joshua_TANHA - 04 November 2012 at 3:49am

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Posted: 04 November 2012 at 3:27am | IP Logged
Ouch Ouch
Itna senti update... :'(
Plz jaldi se misunderstanding clear krvao Embarrassed

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Posted: 04 November 2012 at 5:17am | IP Logged
Wow.. that's an awesome piece of work .., the way u wrote the whole emotions, swaron's POV in the plot was very visual, it was like i could really see and feel what was going on there ... reyam convo was a bit heart wrenching and it really felt like the swayam that we used to know had died .. though one part felt a bit odd to me, sharon listening to jst one part of reyam's convo n misunderstanding the whole thing, that was a bit filmy for me . 


Awesomely written ..  Kudos .. Update soon.. cant wait to read further  Clap

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Posted: 04 November 2012 at 5:31am | IP Logged
amazing update...baap re...its so heavy...but m still surprised to see swyaam not even asking her reason once...he was longing for it ...thank god sharon did tcome out for him...but in the end again destiny playing vth them...after having met how can they now stay vthout saying anything to each other...they owe a lot to each other...that name part was beautiful...beautifully written...you have hell of a grt thoughts

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Posted: 04 November 2012 at 12:36pm | IP Logged
whoaa this was full of so many emotions...
beautifully penned update...plz do update soon...
thanks for the pm..

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