Fan Fictions


Fan Fictions
Fan Fictions

SwaRon SS: Come and Heal Me (LAST part - page 22) (Page 7)

Tanuka_TanHa IF-Dazzler

Joined: 12 February 2012
Posts: 4730

Posted: 29 October 2012 at 11:25am | IP Logged
Amazing update jiya !
fantastically written.
swayams pain seeing sharon blush and happy with another man was brilliantly described .
the whole part was heart wrenching , u are one FAB writer jiya .
i am so eager to read more and really wanna know why is sharon getting engaged with karan and has she really forgot swayam.
will be waiting for the next part , update ASAP...
thanks for the PM.

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:


Shona_Mayur Goldie

Joined: 08 January 2009
Posts: 2141

Posted: 29 October 2012 at 4:16pm | IP Logged
You updated as promised Shocked

Will be back to finish the comment!! Thanks for the PM Big smile

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:


__anonymous__ Goldie

Joined: 11 May 2012
Posts: 1205

Posted: 29 October 2012 at 5:26pm | IP Logged
Okey . . . This SS is more than something termed as "Brilliant" . . .  I'm not going into the concept cause I dont think I can do justice with my words to the  "deep set malady & pain" -ful ambiance u've  drawn in the very concept. . .Vigorous sensation of pain yet so beautiful . . . . U wrote so sensuously . . . .

The characterizations were way huger than perfect  . . . .Rey . . . . the majestic redolent u rained on him is really outstanding . . . . his  affectionate seriousness for Swayam provoked us to love him . . . .to the core . . . .

 Swayam . . . his instincts shone bright like a diamond . . . . his undisputed affliction and gruesome sensibilities touched our soul from within, fell like pouring  our hearts out with him  . . . .his inner ruckus troubled us with some genuine pricky   sensation . . . .

And ur penning approach . . . . well, by this time u've got some utter pleasant compliments which u rightfully deserve . . . . so, I too wanna echo with all of the compliments . . .  in my words . . . Girl, u've got really "Neat & Natural" God-gifted writing ability . . . . prodigious praise for ur penning style . . . . .Clap 

Keep on rolling . . . . and Yeah, update soon . . . . Thumbs Up 

The following 2 member(s) liked the above post:


ProngsPadsMoony IF-Sizzlerz

Joined: 11 August 2012
Posts: 16174

Posted: 30 October 2012 at 9:26am | IP Logged
nice update jiya
loved it

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:


--Rose-- IF-Rockerz

Joined: 04 August 2011
Posts: 6071

Posted: 30 October 2012 at 2:00pm | IP Logged
Woww AWESOME update dear:-):-):-) Please pm me next time, and update the next part soon...

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:


Shona_Mayur Goldie

Joined: 08 January 2009
Posts: 2141

Posted: 04 November 2012 at 2:29am | IP Logged
Author's note: "To all readers: Thank you very very much for liking and commenting on this FF. As always, I do apologize for no replies but I do promise that I would do them tomorrow since it's really late at night here in US and I should really be sleeping right now. However, please please do comment or criticize. I hope you all enjoy reading this part!"

She had said that she will send out PM's a little late since it was time for her to go to bed so she had just sent me through drop box! Smile

Edited by Shona_Mayur - 04 November 2012 at 2:42am

The following 13 member(s) liked the above post:


Shona_Mayur Goldie

Joined: 08 January 2009
Posts: 2141

Posted: 04 November 2012 at 2:32am | IP Logged
This is what she had send me guys: (the smilies are inserted by me lol)

"Hello guys. I could not post this FF up by myself, so I sent it to my friend (Shona_Mayur). Please do read the comment above Embarrassed

Anyways this time, I won't bore you for long. It's a long part and a lot went on this part. It's a long part and it does carry lots of information that I would refer to later in the chapters. I feel like this FF will end up being 5 chapters long. Thanks again for beautiful replies and please keep them coming as they are the only reason I continue. They are my motivation Embarrassed

Anyways, Enjoy!

Part 3:

He felt the same lump building up at the back of his throat, as he attempted to gulp it down. He tried to look as unaffected as he possibly could. He couldn't let her see him like this. He didn't want her to think that he was still holding on to that hope. He didn't want her to think that he was waiting for her, expecting and hoping that she was doing the same. That little hope had completely dimmed now. He couldn't ask her anything.


Apparently, when she had sent him that letter for him, she had stripped him of all of his rights to ask questions from her. He looked away to control the bubbling anger that had replaced his pain. His breathing quickened, but he took deep breaths in an attempt to control his anger. To think that his long patience was running short right now, of all times, was irking him even further. He tried to distract himself in an attempt to subdue his anger.


He was about to turn around to exit out of the hall, when he felt a hand on his shoulders. He turned to see Karan stopping him.


"Hey I haven't even met with you yet. Where are you going? Aren't you going to congratulate the groom-to-be for the engagement?" Karan asked in a playful manner. Then he let go of Swayum's shoulder, and went to stand next to Sharon, waiting for Swayum's reply.


Swayum looked at Rey, who stood there on alert without meeting his eye. It was as if Rey was blaming himself for this whole mess. Swayum looked at the pair standing in front of him and attempted a small smile. The smile soon disappeared as he saw Karan putting his arm around her, pulling her closer to him. He saw her tense only for a moment due to surprise. Then, she eased into his arm with a genuine smile. His arm fit perfectly around hers, and something in his heart stirred again. The heart that had been numbed from pain for such a long time seemed to hurt again. How was that even possible? He was shaken out of his thoughts when he heard Karan speaking.


"Babe, do you know who this is? This is Reyansh Singhania. Remember the guy I told you about? The one I met in France?"


Swayum could just feel Sharon raising an eyebrow at Karan. He could just feel Rey returning the small smile that had spread across Sharon's face. He could feel everything about their conversation but he refused to look at anyone but Karan.


He felt Karan turning towards him, addressing him, "And this is his best friend, the one who he was dying for me to meet, Swa.."




Swayum's heart quickened. How long has it been since he heard her say his name. It was a whisper, but it was audible. She hadn't let Karan finish his sentence. He didn't want to turn to her, to address her, but his heart followed the voice. He looked at her, and for a moment everything seemed to disappear. She had remembered him? He looked at her, taking in her eyes. Those were the same eyes that he fell in love with due to the depth it held. That one moment almost left him spell-bounded. Almost. He had forced himself to look away. This wasn't his right anymore. A bitter smile spread across his lip as he restrained himself from closing his eyes to savor the moment.


Karan gave Sharon a confused look. "Ok. I guess you know him already? Alright then, let me introduce you to him!" he finished off enthusiastically. He turned towards Swayum, "Alright so Swayum, this is.."


"Sharon.." Karan wasn't able to finish when Swayum interrupted him and said her name instead.


Karan looked slightly surprised. He let go of Sharon and turned to look at her. "Wait you guys know each other? How cool! From where?"


Sharon looked taken aback by this question. It seemed like she couldn't think of the right answer. Whatever the reason was, she refused to look at either Rey or Swayum.


Swayum took a deep breath. "I think you're misunderstanding Karan. We don't know each other. In fact, we have never met before. It's just that I have seen her name on the board while coming in so I was just assuming, and she had heard you and Rey talking when Rey mentioned me. That's all!" He gave Karan a small smile in an attempt to sound as sincere as he probably could.


Karan looked at him confused, "Board? What board?"


Swayum shook his head, "Nevermind. It doesn't matter! Congratulations for your engagement. I am really happy for you." And he was. He was glad for the guy. They both looked genuinely happy.


"Thanks dude! You're just as awesome as Rey told me. Why don't you guys get some appetizer? Sorry man, the ceremony is running a little late!" Karan finished apologetically.


Swayum shook his head. "Actually thanks for the offer but I should really be going now. I am not sure if Rey told you but tomorrow is a really important day for the school, and I still have some important work left that's due tomorrow so I really should be heading out."


Karan made a face, "Oh yeah I have heard of this school from Rey. Well alright I won't force you to stay since you have important work, but you have to promise me that you will definitely come to the wedding. Also you won't leave until the very end!"


He fisted his hand in an attempt to restrain his emotions from coming out at that moment and nodded, "I promise.." With that, Swayum walked out.


Swayum Shekawat knew what a great deal it had meant. He had just denied his past with her. What he had just said had left a void in him. Why did he say that? He wondered. Her discomfort had always meant great deal to him. If she didn't want their relationship to be known then he wouldn't tell anyone about it. He would keep quiet and leave. He would be lying if he said that it didn't pain him to see her standing so comfortably, side by side, with Karan. He had never seen her so much at peace before. It's true that her peace had momentarily left her when Karan questioned their past relationship but it had seemed to return now. She had refused to meet his eyes, just like he had refused to meet hers.


He heard Rey call his voice as he followed Swayum out. "What are you doing man? Why aren't you talking to her? This is your chance Swayum. This is possibly your last chance?"


Swayum took a deep breath and waited until they were in the parking lot. He halted and looked at Rey. His eyes hardened as he simply asked, "Chance to do what? What exactly is it that you want me to do huh?"


Rey looked shocked. This isn't what he had expected at all. "What do you mean Swayum? Talk to her!"


Swayum gritted his teeth, "Talk to her? Talk to the girl who's standing in there beside your friend, ready to get engaged? You want me to go talk to the girl who most likely doesn't even remember the fact that we may have had something together. You want me to question a girl who's not even mine anymore? You want me to question the girl who had refused to even acknowledge the fact that we knew each other? That girl doesn't even remember her best friend Rey. Do you think she would remember me?"


Rey looked away, "But she did remember you.."


Swayum was taken aback for a moment. Then a slow smile spread on his lips. "Yeah she had. But not for the past we shared, but for a disgrace that she had to bear. Did you see the way she had looked so horrified for a second? No Rey. How could I have destroyed her happiness like she did mine? It's not like I can beg her to fall in love with me. I tried though. It didn't work. Love doesn't work that way. I don't have any right over her now. She is over me, and now I am finally going to be over her."


Rey chuckled, "Over her? You can't even think of her with someone else! The way you looked at her when she said your name. It was so obvious that you had forgotten everything! You don't have any right over her? Are you kidding me! You have given her 4 years of undeniable love. Even when she wasn't with you! I think you do have some right to question her!"


Swayum smiled sadly, "Rey if loving meant having a right over someone then we wouldn't be here.."


Rey raised both of his hands in frustration, "Swayum! What's wrong with you? This is not the Swayum I used to know!! What happened to the Swayum that would do anything for her? What happened to the Swayum who would follow her around until she heard him out? What happened to the Swayum who always took everything she said in, until she was ready to listen to him?"


Swayum started walking towards the car, "He's dead Rey. She doesn't owe me anything. And just like that, I don't owe her anything either. From today onwards, the old Swayum is dead. That past is dead. She means nothing to me. I have only few important people in my life now and I would like to keep it that way."


Rey followed, "Soch lo Swayum. This is the last chance."


He saw a look of finality in Swayum's eyes as he continued, "It's liberating in a way. It feels like a huge weight is lifted off my chest. She is happy, and so am I. I mean, doesn't that mean that I am over her now? I guess I was just feeling guilty that she had left St. Louis because of me, but she seemed so content that I am relieved now."




His eyes had bored into hers, and she had shamelessly stared. Those were the eyes of the man who had haunted her from the day she had left St. Louis. His eyes held so much care back then. However, his eyes seemed to harden as soon as he met hers. He was fighting something. She wasn't sure what exactly. At first, she had thought that it was confusion but she realized that she had been wrong. She had expected him to blast her with questions, but he had just stood there, standing at a distance while breaking eye contact. As soon as he did that, she had snapped out of the trance that he had put on her. However, when Karan had attempted to introduce him to her, she couldn't help the name slip out. It had shocked her to a great extent to say that name again. It had been such a long time since she had said his name. It seemed to bring an unusual thrill through her body.


He had refused to look at her, and she knew it was because she had deeply hurt him. Of course, he couldn't look at the one girl that had caused him great grief. It was completely understandable, yet it had hurt her deeply. However, a wave of relief spread through her as she heard him say her name. She looked at him briefly to see what his expression was, only to be disappointed at how unreadable it was. Despite all this, it felt so surreal. She couldn't believe that he was in front of her. He seemed like a completely different person now. He still hadn't forgotten her! However, her excitement disappeared as soon as it came, as she heard him deny anything they shared. Of course, she had become nervous when Karan questioned her past, but it was not something she would have hidden from him. So, when he denied their past, it wrenched her heart. Had she given him so much pain that he didn't even want to acknowledge her existence? Who was she kidding? She gave him more pain than this. She deserved this.


His voice troubled her the most. It was steely and indifferent. He refused to meet her eyes, or express himself, when he had told Karan that they had seen her name on the board. Wait a minute! Board? What board? She didn't have any name on any boards! She looked at him, confused. Was that a quick save on his part, or was he actually being serious? She was still contemplating what the correct conclusion would be when she looked up to see him leave.


She had seen his back, followed by Rey's. Rey, her former best friend, who was now Swayum's best friend. How she had wished that she could engulf him in a friendly hug. It had been too long. She had lost everything when she decided to leave. She really had needed him by her side, encouraging him, all these years. However, she knew that making any contact with him would mean inviting trouble because Swayum would eventually come to know that Rey had contact with her. She was even against her decision of sending Rey both of the letter, 4 years ago but she knew that Rey was the only one who would sincerely keep the letter in Swayum's locker without looking at the contents of it.


As her past memories flooded in her mind, her eyes traveled to the board as it widened in realization. Is that what he meant when he said that he read her name on the board? She had excused herself from Karan's presence and ran outside in a hurry. No!! Swayum needed to know! He had the right to know. It wasn't what he was thinking at all! He just took it all wrong! She needed to make this wrong right! She needed to tell him.


She was taking determined steps. She asked around about them, and was pointed towards their direction. After several minutes of pointless walking, she had finally spotted them. She hurried towards them as she saw them nearing the car. A relief came over her as she slowed herself down in an attempt to calm herself. She slowly approached them, but stopped in her tracks as she heard him say, "She means nothing to me. I have only few important people in my life now Rey and I would like to keep it that way."


What had she heard? Were they talking about her? She took another step towards them in order to listen more clearly.


She heard Rey say, "Soch lo Swayum. This is the last chance." She waited for the answer as her heart thudded in anticipation.


"It's liberating in a way. It feels like a huge weight is lifted off my chest. She is happy, and so am I. I mean, doesn't that mean that I am over her now? I guess I was just feeling guilty that she had left St. Louis because of me, but she seemed so content that I am relieved now."


Her heart sank listening to this. All these years, she had been a burden on him? The breath she was holding turned into quiet sobs.  Wasn't this what she had wanted? For him to be happy without her? Shouldn't she be satisfied now that he is relieved? Instead of crying, she should rejoice that he had finally gotten over her. She should be happy that he had finally gotten a closure with this engagement. So what if he didn't know that this engagement was not hers? He didn't need to know that, as long as he is happy. After all, that's what she had always wished for from the day she was forced to leave him by her circumstances.


I would like to apologize for any typos or errors as I am typing really late in the night and I am tired. The next part will elaborate a little, possible a lot, more on Sharon's side of the story. Don't worry, I won't extend their separation for long since I would never want them to suffer. I really hope this part came to your expectations and please do comment. Your beautiful comments are the reason I continue. Embarrassed"

Edited by Shona_Mayur - 11 November 2012 at 8:26pm

The following 72 member(s) liked the above post:

stuti1995swaronehad3swaron_taareyBerry_GirlAsh.SwaronstarryLove_sksnehal91love_swayambumblebeelunatanharockkstan-ya-swaron-reet_26mahak_28venusrockzmrashcoolsameerakool kanzTrouble_Magnet._Molly_.neeliyertrisha19simran.284Khizar_SWARONdvrushuAninditaSwaRongsk4anjuvrushanpooja123456act12Anomic_lonermegsyMimiVruShan.CoffeeStains.Twinkle_d3swa-ron__anonymous__PhosphenesAnanya.SwaRonPhantasmTanuka_TanHa_bellaSwan_ExpectoPatronus--Rumeli--sweetcherry95MirageSwaronmystery75swaron_tanha4pehlanasha.MrsChandlerBingBeulaSwaRonprateek.007--Rose--HPHolic-3abhilasha_dreamMellifluoussadafarsha-Nia-nj_SRKholicpratik54000Crazy4AshViksky_fighterProngsPadsMoony_Deepika_Lovenarbhishaani2209manasie23swaron9113Lassi_TanHanature2Sharif.BadmaashJoshua_TANHA

Shona_Mayur Goldie

Joined: 08 January 2009
Posts: 2141

Posted: 04 November 2012 at 2:40am | IP Logged
So I finally edited to comment back LOL

Anyways, I just got caught up with this damn sorry that it took long. You know na? I have too much shiz to do and on top of that, I am working on my photoediting skills which aren't improving at all btw so I am sad...

Speaking of skills, It was an awesome update. It was skillfully written and the character and pov's seemed so apt. There is so much depth in character! Please update soon..

You were supposed to update this weekend but I guess you are busy but still update soon!!

Edited by Shona_Mayur - 12 November 2012 at 7:05am

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:


Go to top

Related Topics

  Topics Author Replies Views Last Post
SanDhir FF: Of Broken Hearts (Chapter 20 (LAST) on Page 81)

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 77 78

Author: ilovepyaar   Replies: 623   Views: 188801

ilovepyaar 623 188801 15 June 2015 at 11:35am by Subhashiniiiii
New SS: And This all started with....Part-13 , page-78,Last Part-P-81

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 80 81

Author: reet21   Replies: 641   Views: 60414

reet21 641 60414 03 August 2014 at 10:09pm by reet21

2 3 4 5

Author: vaishali_mhaske   Replies: 35   Views: 7989

vaishali_mhaske 35 7989 07 July 2014 at 2:36pm by vaishali_mhaske
SwaRon OS:Unmasking The Love..SwaRon Rainy Romance

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 15 16

Author: _Deepika_   Replies: 126   Views: 22218

_Deepika_ 126 22218 10 May 2014 at 11:37am by Faria.
Swaron SS : The Diary Of Swaron.again updated

2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10

Author: -.Spark.-   Replies: 79   Views: 16089

-.Spark.- 79 16089 23 September 2013 at 5:51am by swaron4ever711

Forum Quick Jump

Forum Category / Channels

Fan Fictions Topic Index

Disclaimer: All Logos and Pictures of various Channels, Shows, Artistes, Media Houses, Companies, Brands etc. belong to their respective owners, and are used to merely visually identify the Channels, Shows, Companies, Brands, etc. to the viewer. Incase of any issue please contact the webmaster.

Popular Channels :
Star Plus | Zee TV | Sony TV | Colors TV | SAB TV | Life OK

Quick Links :
Top 100 TV Celebrities | Top 100 Bollywood Celebs | About Us | Contact Us | Advertise | Forum Index