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shaani2209

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Posted: 29 October 2012 at 7:43am | IP Logged
This is awesomely penned jiyaHug
thanks for the pm...
PS: sorry for short comment gtg...keep pm-ing

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Posted: 29 October 2012 at 8:15am | IP Logged
it was fab update jiya...liked it so so much...perfectly emoted expressions of everyone...sorry having very less time as my exams are starting so not able to comment in full details...

loved the update...thanks for pm...do update soon...

pratik...

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Posted: 29 October 2012 at 8:18am | IP Logged
it was very painful part...had tears... beautifully written...god cannot see swayam like this...he is totally distanced himself from the outer world...and hope sharon isnt marrying... her heartily laugh actually didnt made me feel good

but swayam always goes away and now also when he finally sees sharon???...he has so many questions...he has the right to know...did she forget him??? she had not...hope she missed him too just the way swayam had

awesomely written...cud feel the pain

will be waiting for the next update...and plzz do PM me

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Posted: 29 October 2012 at 8:39am | IP Logged
it was soo emotional!!the way swayam thought that Sharon was just an illusion..and trying running away from his thoughts..and then struck with reality..it was touchy how he was approaching towards his lady silently observing her actions..bt den evrything came crashing down for him as he found out dat sharon was the one getting engaged..I totaly awed dat part wen u wrote the comparisons swayam made wen sharon was with him and now her smile blush evrything!
update soon!and please PM me the next tym!!

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Posted: 29 October 2012 at 8:55am | IP Logged
I have no words to describe it
It was painfull yet amazing update
I already guess that it was sharon's engagement but i want it to prove wrong...:(
U describe both rey's n swayam's emotion perfectly
Waiting for next part eagerly as u said next update will be eventfull

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Posted: 29 October 2012 at 9:07am | IP Logged
This is fricking brilliant. Painful but beautiful. I have rarely read such work on forum where the pain of the character can be literally felt. And this is one of those work. I just loved the way you have penned this chapter - particularly the painful irony the characters are facing here. Swayam's pain, his emotions was so vividly described in this update that one can't help but even themselves feel it. And yeah really liked the way you wrote Rey's pov in this update. It was fantastically done and I loved the way his character has been shown in this SS. Can't wait to read the next update. And yeah this time update soon :)

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Posted: 29 October 2012 at 9:53am | IP Logged
It was a wonderful chapter...true to the name of the SS - the way u conveyed teh feelings reached my heart at least, made sense to me at least...SwaRon has to b like this if nuthing else...thatz what makes them special - yes I am sure I want PM for updates for this SS... 

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Posted: 29 October 2012 at 11:01am | IP Logged
you've penned it beautifullyApprove

While reading..I could imagine and feel..
Sharon's reactions made my thinking abilities to come to a halt

I wonder what would happen next

update real soon..PLEASE.:)

n do PM me.


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