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SwaRon SS: Come and Heal Me (LAST part - page 22) (Page 5)

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Posted: 29 October 2012 at 4:33am | IP Logged
WOW...that was heart wrenching...she is getting engaged and he is in pain... awww... i just hope they get together somehow...loved these lines ...

The smile that he had been longing to see for years. Years? It felt like decades. No, maybe centuries. He froze. She looked so ethereal, and so much like a dream.

What had squeezed his heart in pain was the fact that she had never laughed like that when she was with him. He could never give her the same happiness. He had never seen her laugh so heartily, so openly, in front of anyone. He had never been able to have the right to whisper something to her that would make her blush.

Ahh...I am in love with this SS...plz update soon dear ...


Edited by deep_Tanha - 04 November 2012 at 6:27am

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Posted: 29 October 2012 at 5:04am | IP Logged
This is called brilliance.

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Posted: 29 October 2012 at 5:29am | IP Logged
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Edited by --Rumeli-- - 29 October 2012 at 8:47am

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Posted: 29 October 2012 at 5:42am | IP Logged
gud post!!!
thnaks for the pm!
do pm me wen u update...

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Posted: 29 October 2012 at 5:45am | IP Logged
Awsm work...
Swayam pain was penned extremly beautifully
thnx for pm..

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Posted: 29 October 2012 at 6:22am | IP Logged
Jiya yaar,it is a fantastic updateThumbs Up Beautiful and yet so very touching. Why why does SwaRon always have to sufferCry Poor swayam he loves her so much and its remarkable the way you have proceeded the whole story. Sharon meeting swayam after a long time that to on her engagement, so different and unseen.Embarrassed Now what will happen, plz update fast.Jiya you are an mindblowing writer, loved itClap

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Posted: 29 October 2012 at 6:44am | IP Logged
AMAZING . . BEAUTIFULLY PENNED DOWN . NXT TYM PM ME PLZ

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Posted: 29 October 2012 at 7:32am | IP Logged
Gosh Your update always bring tears... Cry
Swayam 's pain was so beautifully penned down...
and sharon's engagement she forgot swayam Ouch
For me the below lines were the USP of the update and of swayamClap
 
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What had squeezed his heart in pain was the fact that she had never laughed like that when she was with him. He could never give her the same happiness. He had never seen her laugh so heartily, so openly, in front of anyone. He had never been able to have the right to whisper something to her that would make her blush.
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It was an amazing update...waiting for the next update eagerly
Hope this FF has a Happy ending.


Edited by Joshua_TANHA - 30 October 2012 at 2:28am

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