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SwaRon SS: Come and Heal Me (LAST part - page 22) (Page 2)

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Posted: 20 October 2012 at 6:41am | IP Logged
Amazing start. I loved the flash-back bit and he sort of bond that Swayam and Rey Share.

Update soon and PM me when you do. :)

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Posted: 20 October 2012 at 9:58am | IP Logged
Very different and refined sort of writing. I liked it. Loved the way you have molded the current track to give way to the plot of your SS. Interestingly penned chapter. Loved how you have presented the nuissance of Reyam's friendship. It was awesomely done. But the best it was definitely the flashback portion. Swayam' pain, hope and all sort of feeling but nicely shown. Waiting for the next update.

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Posted: 20 October 2012 at 10:09am | IP Logged
such a beautiful and emotional update...u have showed the whereabouts and the emotional content of swayam so beautifully...eyes got filled with tears...the part where they get the note and everyone's name is mentioned except for swayam and swayam tries out to find the some info from the lines but fails...god it was heartwrencing...

the last part where he wants answer for only one question if not for all...did he ruined her life???? perfectly brought yaar...thats wat swayam keeps thinking...

i am not fond of reyam so much...but  the part of reyam bonding moved me...to see swayam's world totally shattered and his wait for her till last date of graduation...beautifully brought ...waiting for nxt update...plzz do PM me

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Posted: 20 October 2012 at 10:25am | IP Logged
Amazing start
Its really good to read about reyam bonding
I was crying while reading this,swayam pain was beautifully described
Update it soon n pm me

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Posted: 20 October 2012 at 10:54am | IP Logged
Hey Jiya...it was just awesome...the way you wrote about sharon leaving for delhi and the equation between them changed...it was fantastic...so touching...swayam's pain was evident...the letter part ...he could smell her in her letter ...awww...he waited till late on their graduation day ...just to meet her ...the part when he goes to the girl's locker room & tries to find out something...heart wrenching..his pain...his wait...loved Reyam friendship in beginning ..can't wait for next part ...plz update soon dear...loved ur style of writing ClapClapClap

P.S- Really loved the name..come & heal me ...goes with the concept ...AWESOME START Thumbs Up


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Posted: 20 October 2012 at 4:13pm | IP Logged
Thank you so much everyone for your awesome comments. Will reply to each one later Embarrassed

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Posted: 20 October 2012 at 4:36pm | IP Logged
nice start
 
do pm me
 
priyanka

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Posted: 20 October 2012 at 11:10pm | IP Logged
atleast somebody is writing something about sharon leaving to dehli
continue soon and pm me

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