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Rutu

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Posted: 18 November 2012 at 7:10am | IP Logged
I liked this update compared to the previous parts. The start itself had my eyes glued to it. Sharon is struggling to get over Swayam on one side but again she ends up thinking more about him. The way Rey and Swayam landed up at the engagement and to add up with Swayam getting baffled after reading the board reminds me its such a small world!! The hairstyle talk metaphorically gave us a message.Each and every minutest details mentioned then in the update were really fascinating, giving me a picturesque version of the same. Coming to the title, suddenly a thought walked past my mind that maybe she is suffering from some kind of ailment that made her cut strings from everyone especially Swayam.Just my perception cause reading few lines in this part gave me that feeling.
Waiting for the next partBig smile


Edited by Rutu - 18 November 2012 at 7:16am

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Posted: 18 November 2012 at 7:24am | IP Logged
unres..
amazng update...
update asap...

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Posted: 18 November 2012 at 8:52am | IP Logged
awosm part huuh chal confution toh hataaa

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Posted: 18 November 2012 at 6:28pm | IP Logged
Amazzingg update!!Big smile
Love the way you expressed SwaRon's love cum hatred towards each otherSmile
Thanks for the pmWink

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Posted: 19 November 2012 at 4:58am | IP Logged
Sorry for late comment.I was a lil busy.Studies n all...:(
I feel relieved after reading this update.Finally swayam know that karan is sharon's cousin.The dance they shared was amazing.No doubt they always create magic together..:).Their fights said it all they truly care for each other.Last part was beautifully written
Waiting for next part eagerly...

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Posted: 23 November 2012 at 6:30am | IP Logged
The update was briliant. I m left speechless!! I just absolutely loved the dance portion, and the hair bit. It was like he was still depending on her for his decisions, showing how much he still cares for her. Please do update soon and please do PM me again when you do!

PS: good luck for your exams!


Edited by Shona_Mayur - 26 November 2012 at 10:02pm

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Posted: 23 November 2012 at 8:13am | IP Logged
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Posted: 24 November 2012 at 12:12pm | IP Logged
And I am left speechless again. I have not told you this before but I wanna say that there is oemthing magical the way you write, there is a certain charm that one reading in it is totally hooked in the story and is completely bewitched by the emotions of the character. Its something incredible. Even though I would have like dto know complete backstory but still whatever you explained in it was awesomely penned. Her POV's in the begining and then the dance portion followed by the her conversation with Swayam everything was emotionally rich. It was penned fabulously. Similarly Swayam's state of heart was fully justified. And the last part where his conversation with Sharon is penned was just awesome. Can't wait to read further. Update soon.

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